Chasing Shadows - Chapter 6-Pg118, NOTE-Pg120

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nyxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Castle-Beckett

Oh, dear God, NO! Seriously, you'll think a first-standard kid has written it!

😆 No ways Shru! Im a impatient soul as well and i remember when i first got my hand on that ff after you started A walk on the beach here...I had read the entire FF in one seating. But then you STOPPED! and abondoned it and I was HOPING one day youd continue it :) And see my wish came true :) The intro does seem a bit different but lets see what else youve got planned for us :) But one thing for sure, youre writing has IMPROVED like super drastically and now i say you start publishing your FF's girl 😉

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: nyxx
Another FF...welll Yes ill be honest, I wanted to beat you up because you DEFOO need to keep up with A walk on the beach...but then reading the prelude and so on...I was like kay fine! I'll just accept this crazy girl! And more for me to readd is always better as long as you manage both the ffs :) Yeah ive read Dil jahaan Dost wahaan on the blog, and yeah i was hoping for you to continue it there but since youve changed things up, Ill definetely read it here again and keep up with it :)
Oh and this absolutely cracked me up ...🤣

Girls drooled over him, called him a Greek God. Riddhima had thought he resembled a cow.

🤣 Ohh mannn Shru! YOURE AMAZING!

Anyhow, do continue with this one and others as well :) Will be eagerly waiting!!

Yeah I love that line too! 😃

It would sound better if someone said it, rather than reading it. But *sigh* since I can't write an audio book! 😆

And don't worry, I'll try my best to keep up with both. I think I might die doing it, but ah, well! This just gives you guys more reason to pester me! 😆

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Hey Shrutika!!!
I am very glad and thankful to Sanna tha you are continuing the fic... I used to read it on the blog and would love to read the improved version here

As far as how much I liked the part then you can very well get the idea of it that I have typed so much without any abbreviation [lol]

Continue soon
Take care
Love
Nandi

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-Anku-

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

AHHH beautiful conceot, girl against boy, both met each other when they were different people :| Beautiful concept always and cant wait to have the story unfold and us asking for updates as usual 😉

Expect nothing bet the best <3

Goodluck with the ff and most importantly the exams to come 🤗

Those are first priority :)

Edited by Ankita.M - 14 years ago

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-AK-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

OMG another ff!! i read dill jahan dost wahan on dmg blog and loved it im really excited for this ff.plz continue soon :)

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Munchkin.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nyxx

😆 No ways Shru! Im a impatient soul as well and i remember when i first got my hand on that ff after you started A walk on the beach here...I had read the entire FF in one seating. But then you STOPPED! and abondoned it and I was HOPING one day youd continue it :) And see my wish came true :) The intro does seem a bit different but lets see what else youve got planned for us :) But one thing for sure, youre writing has IMPROVED like super drastically and now i say you start publishing your FF's girl 😉

Lol, I know right? I just went back to it today and I was like, I wrote that? What was I thinking? I sucked! 😆

I'm just glad I improved! I seriously learnt a lot! And I'm glad about that!

And don't worry, not much has been changed in the over-all story, and don't worry, from the prelude it seems like Armaan's the mopey, serious soul. But he won't be! But there had to be some kind of explanation for the way he reacted when, you know...Uh...Forget it...Haha! 😆

I'll try posting the first part soon! I'm halfway through it! Maybe in a day or two! Or maybe today! Depends! 😳 😃

And seriously, don't worry about AWOTB! I won't let it get side-tracked! I have things planned for it! BIG things, which I'm not being able to pen down at the moment. Its pathetic when a writer runs out of words. Its annoying! But that's exactly what's happening! And, I'm still finding a way to make it different, since its reached such a cliched point! 😕

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Rumz_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

edited on pg 5.do check it out

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Ankita.M
AHHH beautiful conceot, girl against boy, both met each other when they were different people :| Beautiful concept always and cant wait to have the story unfold and us asking for updates as usual 😉

Expect nothing bet the best <3

Goodluck with the ff and most importantly the exams to come 🤗

Those are first priority :)

Yeah, the story's pretty cliched, but here's a secret, this is my story. As in, I didn't go through such extreme hatred, but yeah, something similar! And well, I just thought, how about I modify it a bit! So this is actually my high school story! Sweet no? ☺️

I'll try my best to make it as different as possible! 😃

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: frumaan
edited on pg 5.do check it out

Check your inbox! 😃

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Munchkin.

@Munchkin.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: frumaan
hai shru😃. another ff. i am already in for it. actually i am sooo excited that i cant wait to read so i will go to the blog nd read it😆. kya pata phir aap kab update karoge. ur ff is superbly awesome par plz dont forget AWOTB 😳. its freakkin awesome. ok now i am off to the blog to read it. will edit it after reading in the blog😉

now off i go😊

luv
rumzi

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i went to the blog andi saw that kaboom i had already read it earlie😃r but couldnt remember it because u added a slight twist in the preface😳. and to say that i luvd it sooo much on the blog. i came to knw abt the blog after u decided to stopwriting so couldnt comment. i sooo luvd it. when i was reading it i was sooo heartbroken that u stopped it. u stopped it at such a beautyful point😡 and now u mention that the prts u wrote were not good😲. hmph next tym u dare not say that u used to not write ggod before😡. sorry no offense made😃😳. now to the point when are u going to update shru😳.jaldi jaldi prt 21 tak update karo ndd kaboom phir chalu hojana. coz i aam a ver impatient banda😆. nd dont get surprised if i bug u for updates😊. sooo meet u next tym. hoping to meet soon that is if u update soon nd if u dont update soon then still mai tapak padungi updates ke liye. and yeah another thing. dont forget AWOTB😡. sorry no offence made 😳

luv ya nd ur ff's😃
take care
luv ya
rumzi😳