FF: yeh dil (Maan Geet)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prologue from Maan pov

Three months had passed since I last saw her. She looked so happy. The smile and and laughter on her face made my heart swell with joy. So what if I was not the reason for her joy. Atleast I could be a part of it. She was my best friend. The times we has together always to be cherished forever. But one thing I could never tell her was that I loved her more than life itself and if it meant seeing her happy with somebody else and so be it. My Geetu my best friend my love. I promised her today I will return for her wedding with her fianc Dev but I could not go. I could not bear to see her marry anyone else. I wish I never left her and went to London for 3 months. I had to hide my tears.

Last night, I was returning home to Delhi when I saw a girl standing at the edge of a cliff about to jump. I rushed out I was angry at these peOple who do not know how to value there own life. Being away from Geet I turned myself into a stone. I was not allowed to be weak.
I ran to the girl and pulled her away from the cliff and was shocked to see her face. My Geet. She had bruises all over her. Her face was swollen. Her eyes were red. Her eues full of pain and misery. I noticed one thing she wore no marriage symbols.
'Geet what happened to you?'
'they killed my parents Maan my sister is missing. He raped me abused me everyday. I can't live like this let me die Maan I want to be with my parents'
'Geet' I screamed holding her shoulders tight. 'who did this to you?'
'Dev and his mother and his girlfriend'
'your marriage?'
'never happened. They killed my parents in an accident and took me with them to show the world what great people they are taking in an orphan. I told my sister never to return. If she does then her life will be ruined too'
'Geet don't cry I'm here now I'll always be here your best friend Maan will never leave you or never leave them either'
'where were you Maan when i needed a freiend?' Geet asked before she passed out in my arms.

precap: Dev mother : Geet is dead now. Good all her money is ours already and now so is her ancestrial property'
Dev : mum money we now have but now who am I meant to torture in bed every night I used to have so much fun with her.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great!!
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Part 1 short part as I'm on phone not pc

Maan looked Geet as she lay asleep on the bed. She asked a question and she was right where was he? If he was there then nothing would have happened to Geet. She would have been safe. Her parents would be alive. It was his fault.
'I promise you Geet I will never let be alone. I'm here with you forever I will never let you leave my sight' Maan promised himself as well as Geet. He watched her sleeping and then left the room to make a phonecall.

Geet POV
Dev and his mother consoled me after my parents died infront of others. They took me to there house. After 3 weeks of fake concern and care the truth was revealed to me. I stood standing outside the room and overheard how my parents car was brake failed. I ran upstairs to ring my sister to warn her never to return I spoke to her warden that her life is in danger keep her safe out of the hostel.
Dev came in smirking I looked at him in anger. He knew that I knew I could see it in his eyes.
'you bas***d how could you?' He smirked and laughed at me. He said 'all is fair in game of money and your parents knew the truth and were to stop our marriage well you signed your papers in which you gave yOur money and business to me so no need for marriage'
I was shocked and scared when I saw the lustful glint in his eyes. I ran for the door when he grabbed me by the waist and flung me to the bed. He ripped my clothes and bit kissed me all over aggressively. He entered me and raped me all over I screamed in pain asking him to stop.

Maan POV
I exited a sleeping Geet and phone the police commisiOner yash Mehta to arrange a body that looked like Geets. I want Geet to have her revenge and i will help her but for that they need to know Geet is dead because hearing so much from Geet I understood that they must be looking for her. I had just put the phone down when i heard Geet scream leave me leave me. I rushed in and saw her squirming i understood she was having a nightmare from the torture she went through. I shrugged hEr shoulders and woke her up. She woke up and then loooked at me with fear and then relief and hugged me tight.

Precap: planning
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting ff...
feel bad for geet that she got cheated in such a way...
maan shud hv been there with her but he is with her now...
he will make sure dev and his family suffers the hell..
can u pl add me to ur pm list already in ur buddy list
pl cont soon
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Please update this and anjane rastey

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