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Posted: 13 years ago
Sakshi my pyari bachchi lovely update, so romantic and passionate 😳
I'm so glad to see our Maaneet getting so close and waiting for more of such fantastic updates 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing hawwwt fanatasticaly romantict con... Do cntinue sooner... Readers will run away if u'll delay lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Atlast they are one
Loved Maan's love
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey lovely people... i updated my character sketch with pics... plz see if interested coz i feel reading story is more interesting while having characters in mind... and i tried for one banner too... do tell me how is it???

it is below



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Posted: 13 years ago
great work saakshi..
waiting for an update eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
all thank you so mmuch...

hima di dee di deepu di reena di ani di samata di varshu di and many more- i love you all for all ur inspiration and love...

miti- thank you so much

aash di- surprise coming for you...

reni- will ask someone who know about the hyperlinks...

hey peeps!!!!

me updating!!!!!

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

@all- love you so much guys... plz keep supporting me like this... i am really sorry cant reply individually but your each word is precious to me...


was about to update two hours ago but lappy got crashed...




Part 16:-


They entered the mansion and dadima saw them.. she quickly got up and went straight to them and asked

Dadima:- what is this??? Tell me both of you??? Is this the way??? Are you small kids… Geet bte I didn't expect it from you atleast coz I know him… now why the hell you both are quite.??? Is anybody going to speak or I should leave??

Maan:- dadima you are becoming day by day as geet.. give me chance to speak…

Geet shot him an angry glare… he smirked….

Dadima:- maan aapko ye sab mazaak lag raha hai???

Maan held dadima by shoulders and walk beside her…

Maan:- hey girlfriend !!! aap itna gussa kyun karte ho??? Actually na we had a late night party and we got stuck up there with a client so we got too late there.. it was too far so I decided to stay there only as you say no late night driving… haina... now can I get a sweet smile from my love…..

Listening to his explaination dadima smiled and pulled his ear..

Dadima:- shutup!!! You freak… don't flirt with your grandmother… spare something for your wife….

Dadima then looked at him relizing what she spoke but found him looking at Geet… she wasn't able to understand his change of behaviour when Geet spoke

Geet:- dadi pote ki raam kahani khatam hui to can I ask you dadima have you taken r medicine…

Dadima:- Ofcourse bte!!! I was not at all ready to be scolded on this special day by my daughter…

All smiled…

Dadima:- wish you both a very Happy wedding anniversary bte!!! God bless you!!!

They bent down for her aashirwaad… and she blessed them…

Sanchit and asmi arrived and wished both of them and asmi warned maan not to even dare to ignore my calls in future…

Maan:- Di my phone was silent….

Asmita :- whatever is the reason… don't you dare to repeat it again especially when my geet is with you…..

Sanchit:- plz keep some dhamkis safe for me as you often need them….

All laughed….

Geet:- bhaiya plz doint spoil my di's image she is so sweet…

Sanchit:- geet you were supposed to be on my side….

Geet smiled at frowned Sanchit….

Maan:- okay!!! Now geet I am going to office to finalize the agreement and make a check on Agreement… its already late… you know na last night was too tiring…

He winked at her making sure no one notices…. She was left mouth opened at his shamelessness…

She shot him an angry glare to shut him up and he smirked…

Geet:- yeah you are talking as if I'll let you go… no office today….

Maan:- geet its really serious.. I haven't even looked into the matter since many days… I have to go…

Now it was her time to tease him….

Geet:- really!!! But what kept you that much busy???

Maan noticed her smirk and got what was she upto… he then spoke…

Maan:- so you want me to tell everybody… right now!!!!

This statement turned Geet red in embarrassment so turned the table round she spoke

Geet:- yeah yeah tell everybody later but you are not going to office today coz there are loads of works at home and you can't leave us alone…. And for your excuse to office… agreement has already gone for further formalities and the blue prints are already attached…

He was shocked and so was everybody ….

Dadima:- what do you think maan only you are workaholic and responsible… there is one more element… now go you both of you and fresh yourselves… I'll definitely call you If I need you….

They both headed to their respective rooms… when suddenly Maan peeped in Geet's room with adjacent balcony and she was shocked to see him…

Geet:- Aap what is this??? From where you came?? Go someone will see u???

Maan:- for your babaji's sake Geet I am your husband,not your lover whom you are hiding from the world…

Geet:- really!!! But they all think you hate me!! Or you think me as a responsibility only….

Maan closed his eyes…

Maan:- Geet I told you that I love you….

Geet:- yes I know it but our family doesn't know it….

Maan:- you want me to tell them??

Geet:- you want me to hide from them???

Maan:- Geeett!!!!!!!! Why the hell I always get a question in reply of my question???

Geet:- okay!! I want you to tell them… not just because they need to be but because they will surely be extremely happy!!!

Maan:- what do you think I'll not tell them…

Geet:- I know you'll of course tell them…

Maan:- so do u wanna test my love???

Geet:- not even in dreams…. I trust you more than myself… and you know I am always yours… whether you accept it or not…

Maan:- so u trust me but doubt my love???

Geet:- _____________

Maan felt an anger growing inside himself… not for her but for himself… how could he don't let her make believe his immense love.. he instantly left from there and not even stopped by her call…

Geet was standing there thinking how to make him understand her point of view… She was sure of his love trust his love inside… but all she wanted is this evening to be special… she was hinting him and he took it in another way… but now she had to follow him coz she knew it that he is going to hurt himself…

She ran behind him….. when she reached his room she heard a sound of something breaking… she at once entered his room and found the one mirror broken into thousands pieces and his hand profusely bleeding….

She ran towards him and found his eyes red in anger… she stepped towards him but one broken piece pierced her feet and it started bleeding… she shouted and Maan looked at her bleeding feet…

Maan was really worried. He at once took her up in his arms and made her sit on bed… he suddenly held her foot and took out the glass piece… she shouted his name and he hugged her tight…

He got up and brought the first aid and when she protested he shut her up and dressed her feet… she could clearly see his love and concern for her in his eyes… she closed her eyes thinking how could she even by mistakenly hurt him and doubt his love… she was sure he loved her to the extend… and she hurt him… she could sense his love by his care for her foot when his own hand is bleeding like stream….

He looked at her closed eyes and asked

Maan:- Mishty!!!! bahut dard ho raha hai???

Geet opened her eyes and looked at his continously bleeding hand and nodded for a "yes"..

Geet:- here!!!(Keeping her hand on her heart seeing his hand)

Maan was taken back by her statement he was looking in her eyes when she took his hand and dressed it completely and then kissed it umpteenth times…

Maan looked at her lovingly while she hugged him tight…

Geet:- I am sorry !! You took me wrong… I was only hinting you to make tonight special for our family… it will be a great surprise for them… I told you na I trust you and your love more than myself…

Maan closed his eyes as because of his misconception she was hurt…. Geet hugged him tight….

Maan:- sorry Mishty!!! I was not at all angry at you!!! I felt as if I could never be able to gain ur trust coz I have hurt you in the past…

Geet cupped his face and spoke

Geet:- no Jaan not at all !!! That was the different time and I told you na u were not at fault… but from now onwards your life belongs to me so you will never ever hurt yourself… promise

She extended her hand for a promise… he took it and kissed it…

Maan:- promise!!!! Pakka!!!Waise Geet I loved that word from ur mouth…

Geet:- word which word??? Promise???

He nodded for a "NO" and spoke

Maan:- Jaan!!

Geet blushed…. She hid herself in his arms and he kissed her forehead….

Geet:- you know na my life lives in your wife…

Both giggle….

Later in the evening guest started to arrive and Geet was still wondering what to wear Maan was nowhere to be seen since long and she was getting restless….

Geet was moving upside down in her room when Asmi arrive …

Asmita:- Geet!!!! Bacchaa u r going like this in party… Guests have already arrived…

Geet:- Diii!!!!!!! Its good you are here…. I dunno what to wear in the party ….

Asmi was shocked…..

Asmita:- Geet!!! When I came to know we have a party at our house the first thing in my mind was what I'll wear…. What sort of girl are you…

Geet made a baby face….. Meanwhile somebody called Asmi from behind and she in hurry told her to wear whatever best she had in her wardrobe leaving her still confused…

Geet:- Hey babaji !!!! Today my all time helper di is not here ab mai kya karu????

She went outside to check what the condition of KM was and found it filled with many guests…. Most of their clients… she wondered he asked for a family gathering then what are those clients doing here… thinking about her unpredictable husband she reached her room and forced herself to bed when she found a gift wrapped beautifully laying on the bed with a letter….

Mishty!!!!!

My love must look the most beautiful woman in the party… no doubt she is most beautiful angel in the world but I want to show it to the whole world… so here I am to help you out…

Don't forget I love you more than anything…

Always yours

(M)Jaan

She blushed most at the last word…. She knew he was teasing her and she enjoyed it… she opened the gift and found two dresses with one more note…

Jaan

I was getting confused for what to buy so I bought both of them no matters what u wear for me you are and will always be my angel…

You know who….

She looked at the dresses… she was dumbfound at the dress which was

And the other was a light pink elegant Saaree..



she thought for a while and then took the saaree and went to the washroom….

After 20 mins or so she came out wearing the saaree..{I do not have to mention how beautiful she looks coz we know she always looks sexy in a saaree but we'll get to know by Maan's reaction… lol}

On the other hand Maan who was extremely happy and was on the seventh heaven for finding his life in his wife was sitting holding the photo of his second life that is Gaurav and reminded his last words… he now understood how well Gaurav knew him and he was sure Geet could bring happiness back in his life and will surely shower him with the immense love…..

Maan:- you left me… I was angry with you… but you left me with my life and proved yourself to be the best buddiee one can ever have… I miss you dude… hope you would be here for me and for my new life, your sis….

He smiled at his own statement and a tear rolled down her eyes…

Maan:- you were always right!!! I must have thought of my family… my people which your little sweet sister made me realize…. And I promise you dude up there from sky you will see Maan u always wanted to see….i will make my life dedicated to my family and your sister who has become my life……

Sanchit was watching and listening to each and every word and was shocked as well as happiest he could ever be… Maan noticed someone's presence and looked at the door and found him standing there … maan was feeling embarrassed as well as Awkward coz he cud see the happiness in his eyes and and was sure he has heard every word….

Sanchit came and hugged him tight… maan felt lighter and hugged him back….

Sanchit wanted to speak a lot but words were less… he just could say

Sanchit:- Saale sahib!!!! Welcome back….

Maan:- thnx jiju… an I am extremely sorry…

Sanchit just kept his hand on his shoulder and said…

Sanchit:- all we want is you happiness…. I guess Geet has brought that to you..

Maan unknowingly nodded his head and then looked at him in embarrassment… Sanchit laughed out loud and then looked at him…

Sanchit:- you are lucky to have her as much as I am lucky to have Asmi… She loves you a lot…

Maan:- I know jiju and believe me she has changed the monster inside me and made me a human again… she is a gift of Gaurav for me and I love her to the extent….

Sanchit:- oh really my lover boy!!!!

Maan:- but jiju u ruined my surprise!!! I was about to tell u all everything in the party…

Sanchit:- party !!!! oh hell !! Maan get ready asap otherwise ur sister will eat my up and that too raw…

Maan:- (laughed) aap apni biwi se itna darte kyun ho???

Sanchit:- bahut jaldi pata chalega bacchuuu…you confessed to her????

Maan:- yups jiju last night!!!!

Sanchit:- now I got ur late night party huh… you cheat….

Maan looked at him blankly…

Sanchit:- don't worry she is ur wife….

Maan smiles…

Maan:-just five mins jiju aur haan shhh!!!!!!!

Sanchit made a sign of sealing his lips…. He was happy with the bond he shared with Maan earlier he found it today… he went downstairs smiling noticed by Asmita….

Asmita:- kya hua Mr.. bak bak itni broad smile…

Sanchit:- haan tumse bhi zyada khubsurat ladki se milke aa raha hu..

Asmita gave him a death glare…

Sanchit;- tumhari beti se baba!!!

Both smile….

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Posted: 13 years ago

Geet was getting restless as how to step out when she heard the door knob opening.. she could sense who it was'.

Maan entered with a bouquet in his hand for his lovely wife but stood their rooted seeing her looking all the while most beautiful he had ever seen and all pink with the dress makeup or blush' he kept on looking at her and started moving towards her'

On the other hand Geet was rooted their watching her husband the sexiest man she could ever see'. He wore a black jacket with buttons half opened with his chest revealing with black party denims' he looked awesome {as always!!!! ;-) }

She gulped her saliva as she noticed him coming towards her'.he came towards her and held her by her waist'he brought his lips near her earlobes

Maan:- some one is looking very sexy today'.

Geet:- how do you know???

Maan looked at her with questioning eyes' she giggled

Geet:- how do you know my husband is looking dammn hot and sexy today'.

Maan was shocked at her boldness'

Maan:- really!!! But not more seducing than my wife

He bit her earlobe' she closed her eyes'.

Suddenly Maan looked at the dress on the bed and looked at Geet'

Geet:- suniye this is the family function and it is better to wear something traditional today coz all relatives would be here na' so I choose this sari over that dress but I'll surely wear that dress for u'

Maan looked at her with Awww'

Maan:- meri mishti kitni samajhdar hai'. thats why I love you'

She blushed'.

Maan;- to Mrs. Khurana chale' towards the door to our new life'

Geet:- happy life!!!

Maan nodded with a smile'.

They both had a grand entry holding each athers hand and admiring each other' Dadima and Asmita were confused at this behavior of Maan'.

Dadima introduced Geet to everyone and she smilingly bowed and touch everybody's feet'.

Everyone was praising Geet's down to earth nature as being the wife of the MSK she even touched the feet of the employees who were older in age' everyone was impressed with her'.

Dadima invitrd them both for the cake cutting ceremony when suddenly Maan held her hand tight and took her to the stage leaving everybody shocked behind coz many of them knew Maan being the ruthless guy might has not accepted geet till and will never accept cozz he hated girls'

But to their surprise maan was taking her lovingly to the stage from which Geet was also shocked'.

Maan held the mic and spoke'.

Maan:- people with opened mouth plz close them unless any unwanted material enter ur mouth'.

He giggled' he knew it was shocking not only for them but to him too'He made Geet stand in front of him facing the world and bend down on one knee'

Maan:- So Mrs. Khurana' this lifeless man whom u taught to live life again , this stone herated man whom u made to hear his heartbeat again, this angry young man whom you taught to smile again is here all in front of you surrendering his life to you and accepting the fact that I LOVE YOU and will always do' and is asking you in front of the whole world and even in front of the people surrounding his life i.e his ooops our family that will you spend ur entire life with this stupid husband of yours and will you prepare my black coffee till we are 80 or not'. Will you wait for this worthless man for dinner till we get oldest or not' will you permit this guy to make you his life or not'

Geet who was embarrassed and shy till now had tears in her eyes.. She simply nodded feeling lost for words'.

Maan got up happily and she instantly hugged him tight hiding herself in his arms' he hugged her back'.

Their were more shocking faces in the party hall coz no one could ever imagine the khadoos MSK to be that much romantic'.

But somewhere at the corner of the party hall there were two pair of eyes shedding tears of happiness' no doubt who were they'

Maaneet looked for them after they broke from the hug and finally found them standing at the corner' Maan saw them crying and nodded his head in disbelief' geet ran towards them and hugged dadima tight and then Asmita'

Maan came to them'

Dadima:- Bete aapki tapasya safal hui'. You have got what you deserve'.

Geet hugged her again' Asmita caressed her head and said'

Asmita:- baccha I am happy for you the most'.

Maan:- kamaal hai ' I am too here'.

Asmita held his ear..

Asmita:- if you wud have done a little more late na to mai tujhe kaccha chaba jaati'.

Everyone laughed'.

Dadima:- Maan!!! Thankyou so much bete'

Maan:- hey girlfriend!!! My life is with you all' infaxct I am sorry!!!! chalo no rona dhona now' we are at party'lets enjoy!!! Kyun jiju'

Sanchit:-yes dude!!!

he high fived him...

Asmita:- aapko pata tha'

Sanchint smiled being caught'

Asmita:- aapko to mai baad me dekhti hu'

Sanchit:- Maan!!!!!!!!!!

Maan:- di come on!!!! (to geet) so May I have the pleasure to dance with you ma'am'.

She blushed'

Geet:- I am all yours sir!!!!!

Both the couples including all others present in the party headed towards the dance floor'..

{Aash di for u:-}


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PseQLflJrbo[/YOUTUBE]


(in dino, dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha

These days my heart is saying that

He held her hand and kept it on his shoulder'. Nad kept his hand an her bare waist'


tu khaab saja, tu ji le jara

you decorate your dream, you live a little

She blushed and looked down'.


hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

you have also permission, do love


he held her chin and made her to look at him '. Eyelock!!!!!


(berang si hai badi zindagi kuchh rang to bharoon

my life is colorless, let me feel some colors in it

he slightly twirled her round and pulled her more closer'


main apani tanahaayi ke waaste abbb kuchh toh karoon

let me do something for my lonliness

she looked at his eyes and cupped his face'.


jab mile thodi fursat - 2, mujhse karle muhabbat

when you get time, love me

She put her head on his chest and kept on moving with the music'


hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

you have also permission, do love



(usko chhupaakar main sabse kabhi le chaloon kahin door...

let me take her somewhere, hiding from this world

he lifted her up in the air'.


aankhon ke pyaalon se pita rahoon usake chehre ka noor

let me drink lustre of her face

he kept her down and then keep on looking at her face'.


iss jamaane se chhupakar , puri karloon main hasrat

by hiding from this world, let me complete my wish

he held her tight and and pulled her that close that evet air could pe presnt between them'


hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

you have also permission, do love


(in dino, dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha

These days my heart is saying that


tu khaab saja, tu ji le jara

you decorate your dream, you live a little


hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

you have also permission, do love

Precap:-

Holidays over!!!! Mr. khuarana Office chalein'

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***imp- guys this is my last update before diwali... will continue from home...****

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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wow i just loved it yaar !! just awsome !!!
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