'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' part 21 - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey all!!!!! Me back with one another update?. I am really thankful to all of you for such patience and kaan pakad ke sorry for so late?. I was finding the way to update since I am at college??.

Aash di- love you so much for all ur ideas???..

friend se lappy maang ke update kar rahi hu guys plz next ke liye thoda sa aur patience... but promise will update soon... sorry 4 typo errors...

love you all for all ur comments and patience...🤗

So let us read ?????

Part 8:-

Maan was driving rashly on the highway? He was completely lost in thoughts of his wife? he cud not relate the fact that why the hell her distance is effecting him to that extend? why the hell he want to listen to her as before ? why the hell he want her to smile everytime.. why the hell he want to hug her and swipe away all her worries why the hell she is occupying his thoughts?. Why the hell he cant resist thinking about her?.. why the hell her tears pierce his heart?. Why the hell this is happening to him which has never before happened?why the hell she is behaving like this I know I hurt her but why my words matters a lot to her?. Why Why Why????????

At home Geet was siting with dadima holding a magazine in hands but lost somewhere else?? Dadima was noticing her silence?.

Dadima:- (to herself) this non-stop express is nowadays not even accelerating? what has happened to her? should I ask her?? No let me distract her?

(togeet) Geetbete what you did today????

Geet:- (still lost) nothing special dadima ? that same daily things?????

Dadima:- (to herself) when I was on bed she use to repeat her same routine twice a day to me and now saying nothing special some problem is definitely there?

Dadima then looked at her? she found out that she was really lost somewhere and was not even looking at the magazine?

Dadima at once snatched the magazine from her hands and asked her?.

Dadima:- what were you reading bete ???

Geet who wasn't even looking at the magazine stammers..

Geet:-dadima mai woh woh mai.. haan recipe ..

Dadima:- really which dish????

Geet:-woh!! woh ..paneer korma..

Dadima laughed out loud?

Dadima:- really Geetpaneer korma? you are caught bete ?

Geet:- caught ????

Dadima:- yeah tell me who reads recipe of paneer korma in a business magazine?..

Geet was embarrassed? she was really caught red handed?

Dadima:- now you are going to tell me whats in your mind or I scold you hard?.

Geet at once hugged her and started?.

Geet:-dadima? I am feeling something odd? I don't know but the feeling that something bad is going to happen is occupying me since morning? it feels like someone is going to snatch everything from me??.Dadima plz tell me na why I am feeling like this as if I am going to lose everything once again??.

Dadima got little worried but then thought of consoling her?..

Dadima:- geet bete the more you think the more you are going to worry so just stop thinking and prayto god everything will be fine?..

Geet nodded but still was not sure completely?

Geet:-(to her babaji)babaji may be Dadima is right? may be I am thinking too much?. But why I feel like he is in trouble? babaji plz unki raksha karna?.. keep him safe plz?

Meanwhile she hears a shout?.. she was about to get up when Navya came running and bang? she just came and hugged her mami and the badidaadi??

Geet:- ale meli pali how are you darling???

Navya:- me to gud gud mami .. but what happen to your eyes did you too cried like me???

Geet was just aww at her question? she thought

Geet:- (to herself) hw this little girl sees my pain in my eyes?.(to navya) ale melipali q royi??? Who made my sweetu cry tell me I'll take a proper class?.

Navya:- leave it namami? its mamma?. Always ready to send me to school? I don't like school?

Geet:- oh!! My sweetu but dearie going to school is best thing in life?.. accha tell me whom do you love the most ?

Navya started counting on her fingers?

Navya:- papa mamma mam umami badidadi my bruto my Barbie??.

Geet and dadima laughed?

Geet:- okay I don't know about bruto and Barbie but tell me why do you love all others?

Navya:-becoz everyone is so nice?

Geet:- and you know what made them nice.. their school? you want to be like them?

Navya nodded

Geet:- so if u want to be like them then you have to attend the school daily?. Now will you????

Navya:- really mami going to school will make me as sweet as you?.

Geet smiled?..

Geet:- yes sweetheart!!!!!!

Navya:- the I'll definitely go to school? yeaaa I'll be as sweet as my mami??

Dadima:- hmmm so are you going to school today?????

Navya:-offo!!!!!!!!!!!! bd wear your specs and look at the time?. Now I am late?. I'll go daily from tomorrow?

Dadima:-bete usually people start bunking in college and you have started to bunk in early year of school.. generation is seriously growing up too early?..

Navya:- oho BD don't become mamma?..

Geet:-accha what will my pari like to have????

Navya:- chocolate shake??.

Geet:- will pari help mami too???

Navya:- yes mami?

Geet:- lets go then!!!!!!!!!!

Geet lifted her in her arms and they headed towards the kitchen???. Meanwhile they heard the loud voice calling out their names?

Asmita:-Navya!!!!!!!!!!! Navyaaa!!!!!!!!!!! Geet!!!!!!!!!!!! Where the hell are you both come here right now?..

Asmita entered kitchen? Navya hid herself behind Geet?? Asmita was frowning like hell?..

Geet:- di!!! Aap!!!!! hw r u?????

Asmita:-shutup Geet!!!! And you just come in front of my eyes right now?. Don't you dare to hide yourself??.

Geet:- di listen to me!!!!!!!

Asmita:- don't you hear what I said just shutup!!!!

Sanchit too entered? Geet looked at him and signalled him to do something as she knew her di's anger was on full swing?? but Sanchit shrugged his shoulders?.. Geet gave him a frowning look and he signalled that "let me try" types

Sanchit:-Asmi cool down jaan !!!!!! its just today it is not going to repeat?..

Geet:-haaan di bhaiya is right?..

Asmita:-shutup both of you talking as if I don't know your plans?. And both of you don't you dare to interfere today coz I am not going to listen anything?? Samjhe!!!! (tonavya) are you going to come in front or I snatch you with your ears?.

Navya came forward holding Geet'sduppatta?.

Asmita:- I guess its your school timing and let me know what the hell are you doing at home?.

Geet and Sanchit gave each other a helpless look?

Navya:-woh mammaaa!!!!!!!!!

Asmita:- I don't want any excuses Navya Arora? speak truth!!!!

Geet thought of a plan???. She hold Navya's hand and started?..

Geet:-pari darling!!!!! How are you feeling now my baby?.Have your shake?

All of the three looked at Geet with strange expressions?.. Sanchit lifted his eyebrows to her and she winked at him?.Sanchit smiled a little?

Asmita:-Geet let me call pandit and then he will tell me when are you going to open your mouth?

Sanchit:-Asmi you told her to keep quite?. Didn't you????

Asmita short him a glare?

Geet:- di pari was going to school but she felt a little stomach ache so she was nearby here that's why driver brought her here and you are scolding her like that?..

Asmita looked at Navya with concern and Navya looked at her mami?.

Asmita:- really!!!!!! Navy are you okay now darling?..

Geet:- she is fine now di? Pari darling go to your BD?..

Navya went running?.. Meanwhile asmi was lokking at her Geet and Sanchit gave each other a hi- five..Asmi now noticed that and short them a glare?.

Asmita:- you both are going to spoil my daughter? I got a call from her school??..she is missing her school and you are supporting her ?.

Geet:-meri pyari di calm down? she promised me today that she is never going to miss the school from tomorrow and I trust her?.

Asmita:- but I don't??..

Geet:-mujh par b nhi di?

Asmita looked at her pouted face and said

Asmita:- I am afraid but if u say so?.

Geet:- thank u babaji? otherwise I thought bhaiya, di wud start 3rd world war anytime?.

All of them laughed when Sanchit noticed something at Geet's face?Asmita went inside to meet dadima

Sanchit:-Geet what is bothering you baccha??.

Geet got surprised at his question?.she murmured

Geet:-geet tu bhi na apne chehre pe thodi si smile nahi rakh sakti hw come all of them know abt your worries? first dadima then pari and then bhaiya?..(to sanchit) nothing bhaiya just like that?

Sanchit:- just like what????

Geet:- nothing na bhaiya!!!!!!!

Sanchit:- are you going to tell me or??????

Geet:- what is this bhaiya everybody is giving me a sort of Dhamki? pehle dadima phir aap??(looking upwards) hey babaji kaisi dhamki full family hai meri??.

Sanchit:-don't you dare to turn the table round?? tell me Geet!!!!

Geet took a breath and started..

Geet:- nothing bhaiya I am just getting a little worried coz I feel that he is in some problem don't know why??.

Sanchit smiled?

Sanchit:- my sweet little sister don't need to worry ?. Talk 2 him then?.

Geet:-(murmured) impossible!!!!!!

Sanchit:- why?????

Geet:-ainvaye hi?..

Sanchit understood whats the matter?.

Sanchit:- oh to bolchaal band hai?..

Geet was in thoughts ?.

Geet:- hmmm?? (then coming back) nahi bhaiya woh main woh?

Sanchit:- hmmm I got that Geet?. Acccha let me call him and ask?.

Geet: (super exited )haan bhaiya plz??.

Sanchit smiles at her and she got embarrassed? Sanchit called Maan's no. but there was no response first then somebody picked up the phn?

Voice 1:- Hello!!!!!!!!!

Sanchit got little worried on hearing someone else's voice and asked about Maan when the person replied that the person has met with the accident and Is in so and so hospital? sanchit was startled at a sudden and then shouted "Whattt"

Geet looked at him and was hell worried and kept on asking what happened and he looked at her and was unable to even utter a word but he took himself and told everything to her?

***Guys I don't know why but I myself am paining to write Geet's more pain coz I can't see her in pain but I still have to? I hate myself for this but may be the pain she is getting now is for her good😭😭😭***

Geet cudn't believe her ears? she fell on floor when sanchit called asmita and she came and hold her and asked him?.

Asmita:- What happened sanchit why is Geet crying????????

Sanchit told her everything and she was shocked enough but then looked at Geet who was crying? she took herself and controlled her emotions and consoled Geet?

Asmita:-geet don't worry baccha sab thikhoga?.

Geet:- di I knew it?. I was feeling it? I?? I???I???.

Asmita:-geet everything will be fine lets go to hospital Sanchit?.

Geet:- di u stay here and don't tell dadima anything? she will not be able to take that?.

Asmita:- no I too wanna come? I cant stay here plz?

Sanchit:- let's take navya too coz dadima will suspect why left her?.

Asmita nodded?

Geet:- but pari in hospital?.

Asmita:- you stop getting worried about others and think of yourself???..

Asmita told dadi holding her tears that they all are going for shopping?They all headed towards Hospital?.

In car

Navya:- mamma why is mami crying?. Did you scold her?.

Asmita looked at crying Geet and wondered how cud she love her brother to that extent when he treat her like nothing and then replied?

Asmita:- beta mamu ko chot lagi haina that's why mami is crying?.

Navya:-mamu ko chot lagi hai???? But mamma when mamu is hurt to mamu shud cry na why is mami crying????

Asmita and Geet looked at Navya and then to each others?

Asmita:- it happens beta when you love someone to the core then their pain hurts u too?

Geet looked downwards and navya got confused??

Precap:-

Maan:- she is Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana?.. how dare u talked to her like that??


i want your long long comments... love u all plz bear with it and i'll try my best to update next part asap...



Next:- Part 9

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey saakshi...
me first me first...
thanks alot for taking so much trouble to update..
waiting is never an issue if we keep on getting updates...

awesome update..
felt bad for geet...but then thought probably this will help them to resolve their issues...
loved the retrospect where in maan is not able to understand his feeling...
the bonding between geet and the family is great...
navya is adorable...
just love them...

come with next update soon...if not possible ..will wait as always
you left us at a bad spot and the precap is interesting...
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wovvv nice part
finally maan said mrs maan singh khurana gud
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update...so finally Maan is feeling her pain...seriously can't wait for next part...please please jaldi update kar do...
You know how busy I am fantasising because of GHSP's interesting amnesia track. Now I have one more scenario to fantasise because of your update...kya hoga...Maan precap wali line bolega to Geet kasie react karegi...
so rahem on us and update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow, possessive maan. I hope from now on he will soften a little towards geet. all that is necessary is to give geet and his marriage a chance... sweet update.

regarding the bunking... I remember how my mom always send me to school, even if I was feeling unwell. My dad always said I could take a day off, it wont hurt but my mom never allowed me 😭 😭 😭

That is what u get if u have a doctor for a mother... 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...maan's family loves geet so much...oh god maan met with an accident, hope he is fine...the precap is too good...maan acknowledging geet as his wife
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res...ma evil bachchi...i am happy that u got time to update...me will give comments soon...as using fone...come to ci...we miss u there ok...lovely update btw...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey saks welcome back... lovely update dear...pari was cute...

possessive Maan is on the way i think...
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊👏


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