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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it
i wish it was slightly more longer
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for all those who like my os...here is the 2nd part of it ...hope u all like it...

Geet was standing in the balcony thinking about maan and with some thought she wiped her tears.. "this is it …this is the limit..i waited one whole week thinking u will tell ur problems on ur own….may be I doesn't wanted a marriage now..but wen I gt married to you I promised myself to make u and ur family happy..i am not going to back up now…if u don't realize iam ur wife…I will make you realize that…..i was geet handa..but now iam GEET KHURANA…ur wife…ur family daughter-in-law…to make u realize that iam coming maan"……she went to their room open her wardrobe…her hand automatically goes to her favorite red saree..But she thought for a sec and with a smile pick a white saree and started gttng ready for the party…

Within few minutes she was in white saree , with a long earing and sindhoor in her head…Mrs.Geet khurana is ready for the party..she came down and called the driver and asked him to take her to the party.. her MIL was looking at her… "maaji ..iam going for the party…I will take care of everything"… "enjoy the party and return with maan "…geet just gave a smile and left..

Maan in the party thinking about how he behaved with geet these past one week…something struggles him….he realized that its his mistake but he don't know what to do…everybody in the party was asking about geet his ne wife…he was giving some lame excuses and try to avoid speaking with people..

At the same time geet arrived at the party entered the party hall..everybody got stunned looking at her..this embrassed her more…geet was like .. "hare babji..istarted off with so much of courage..but I don't know any of these ppl here….oh my god ..i wish I dnt do such things so that maan feel embrassed…plz help me babji.." suddenly somebody called her name with high pitch..geet turned and she was shell shocked..it was her close mate pari..

Pari:geet tum..wat r u doing here…oh…maan said u weren't feeling well

Geet self thought..ithne jaldi maan ne sabko kehediye ki meri tabiyath teek nahi…ahhh..wat will I do nw.. "oh pari..i thought I shuldnt miss the party so I jst came.."

Pari: its k yaar iam so happy now..come in I will intro everybody here…(pari is the daughter of great business man)

Suddenly maan saw ppl were looking at same direction and speaking something..he just turned and saw geet..he was damn shocked to c her …geet in gorgeous saree…speaking with everybody so joviely…he was shocked..bcoz he thought she was not frndly person …hardly they had any conversation in this 1 week ..it was his fault though..he walk towards her and almost pulled her to a side .. "gee twat d hell r u doing here?"

Geet was shocked hearing this..she thought if she joined the party spoke well with all maan might feel happy but his behavior now was totally unexpected…she looses her temper "that's not ur business to ask..did u brought me here..then y r u asking me this question?"

Maan was super duper angry "I left u bcoz u dnt wnt to cum to the party and who am i???ur husband…MSK..dare u ask that kind of stuff again"

Geet "oh really my husband ..now u remember that u gt married to me..do u even know my name properly???stop this natak of being husband and leave me…I came to the party for maji nt for you…gt that?"and while she try to move..another couple came and congrats them for their marriage and started speaking with them..maan and geet felt awkward and the couple also invite them to the dance floor..geet was shocked hearing this..but thought now I will teach her a lesson whos the boss….he grabbed her hand and pulled her to the dance floor..geet "who gave u the rights to touch me and dance with me??"…maan just pointed out the mangalsutre….and he forcefully started dancing with her..first geet gt angey later she cant resist him she just joined in that heaven…(people u can imagine kurba hua song here)….

Everybody clapped at their performance…suddenly both realize what they did and breaked…geet almost ran away from there…maan followed her…

Precap:geet and maan confession….maan forcefully took her home in his car…both of them spilled their beans that night,,,,,,,,,decided and realized that they man and wife

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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
wow i loved it yaar ..u better name it as an FF ...
awsome concept ...
continue soon pls ...do pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
i really loved it...please pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
awesome!
do pm me next time!
i have send u a buddy request!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
loved da update
do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Great going story waiting for the confession.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
nic going with plot but
can u pls make it a
bit big update as it seems
i have justed started reading and it
finished.
but its nicly written
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
nice start

continue soon and plzz add me to the pm list

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
wow awsome

plz pm meee

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