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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww that was awesome..n plz add me to your PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luved d update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Short but a very sweet update.
Dont stop writing after completing this OS.
You are a gifted writer. So write more n more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice... pls continue soon... is there a way tht u can pm me once u update??
thnx 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just came across the os and say it is quite interesting and fab story .added u as buddy can u plz pm me .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nicely written.. pls make it a bit long and add me to ur pm list.. i've sent u a buddy req:)
waiting for the next update:)
Ankita:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ha i loved it..glad that geet gave her piece of mind to maan...he deserve it...eagerly waiting for d next part...do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thaks for your replies..heres the third part..

Geet almost ran away from the party and started walking in the road alone and lost in her thoughts.. "wat did I done..i came here to make him realize his mistakes but …how I can I just lose ma control when he danced with me …he behaved so badly with me..but when he hold me why I felt that I just want to stay like that…y did felt that he he loved me he just want to holed me...i just want to be with him nothing else..oh stop it geet ..u don't even know him…I don't even know that I wll stay with him or not...what is happeneing in my life...how can i feel for a person who doesnt even know me properly.."...suddenly a car stops in front of her...maan got down from the car and asked her to get in the car...she refused and started to walk ahead...maan grabbed her arm and pulled her close and said ... "dont argue with me..get in car"... geet pushed him and said "dont ever do that with me..i came alone to the party and i know how to get back home..thanks for your concern.."...maan suddenly lift her and placed inside the car and started to drive the car rashly..they reached home and both of them went directly to their room...

when maan entered the room he shut the door behind geet and pulled her close and asked .. "oh you want know who am i rite???...u said what rights i have i have on you right?? now you i will make you realise ..." he kissed her in the lips...with full of passion ..to ensure that she belongs to him... after a sec he break off and realised what he did ...he felt so ashamed...he cant able to face geet ..

geet: hmm...atlast u realised that u got married...that u hve a wife and she is yours...???

maan is shocked seeing her reaction ..geet continued "why did u behaving like this u have any problem you can share with me...i got married to you not only to share your happiness but also ur problems..i know u r not a man who behave badly with girls..but what happened to you..if u dont like me then why did you married me..if u hate me so much why did u married me..tell me maan"...geet burst into tears and fell on the floor..

maan "i married you bcoz i loved you...i fell in love with you the moment i saw u ..."

geet was shocked to hear this..maan continued.. "when my father died and people whom thought my family relatives betrayed us..even the girls who want to marry me saw me like garbage stuff..that day i decided that money is everything in this world..there is no value for love affection..from that day i bcame a machine work hard so that i can keep my mom sis and bro happy...i started to running away from happiness smile ...all...within 2 yrs now iam a successful buisness man..but i lost trust in love..when my mom forced me to get married to ..i came to see you ..ask you to break the marriage..at that time i saw you playing with kids..u look like a angel to me..i never felt like this with any of the girls..i followed you..then in the bus you were speaking about life is to live smile and to store lot of happy moments...i dont know really want to tell u to break the marriage..but i dont want to lose you...i want you with my side ..i thought only u can bring my smile..thats it..i just wanted to live a life like you said..."

geet " maan when u love me so much why is this one week distance...why did you traet me like u dnt want me around you???????

maan "geet evennthough i am a succesful buisness man if one of my project got failure i will thrown back to the ground..right now iam dealing with an international project i got sucess in this one then nobody can stop me..so at this time i dont have time for anything..only for that i almost begged my mom that too postpond my marriage for 1 yr..she refused when i compelled her she said that then i need to marry some other girl ...i accepeted for the marriage just dont want to lose you..i tried a lott to tell you all this from the time of our engeagement..but i cant able to break your dreams by saying that i will marry you but u have to stay away from me from 1 yr..i cant really break your heart.."

geet "maan i am ur wife ..1 yr is nthng i wuld waited for such a lovely husband for a life time..its not a matter how long i need to wait ..its just that i got a husband who hurt himself from the time he saw just for the fact that he doesnt want me to lose my smile..maan nobody will be lucky as me.."

maan was happy hearing this.. "geet i thought u will leave me after hearing this thank you geet..just 1 yr .after that i will give all the love i have stored these years only for you.."

both of them hugged each other..geet "maan why be strangers, we will be gud frnds..i will help you as much as i can we will take this journey together as man and wife.."maan smiled nad kissed her in forhead..

precap: geet came out of the bathroom with wet hair..maan is staring at her, geet realised and she walked 2wards him and pointed out to the laptop to do his work..maan smiled and thought how can i able to stay away from this lovely girl..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow ...Finally Maan confessed ...

Continue soon...


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