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Posted: 14 years ago
me cant loughing injection drama
going on in KM place
super duper part
love it core
thnaks 4 making my day
real enjoy reading it
thnaks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...🤣🤣

continue soon...🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -dia-

Tonya ...what happen ...R u alright ...Whats that crying emoticons doing at the start of the update???


yaar Where about this Dev & Annie???

It is they who need a shot??

that was hilarious ...loved the update!!!

awesome!!!

Think what ll be Dev & Annie's reaction when Geet asked Doctor to give a shot to them😆




143 Buddy.


hi Dia,

i am alright dear. went out of station yesterday. thanks for telling me about the emoticon.

actually, what happened na...saturday i was in a hurry...that crying emoticon was for Chandu bhaiya. i tried to insert it at the end. but it had ended up in the starting of the update. i didn't notice it

today only i came bcak to IF and i read your post...i was embarasseed to see that emoticon there. sorry for my carelessness buddy. hereafter...i'll be careful

i guess...Dev and Anni have gone for the jasoosi kaam...or both might have gotten admission in Mental Mall. hope Chief doctor Beeji will take care of these two...lol...

loved your hilarious comments dear. thanks for it.

143 buddy

Tonya
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Originally posted by: ajenn

That was totally an hilarious update.
Geet is really generous.
I guess soon she will ask the doctor to inject her whole neighborhood..


hahaha...

dear! hope, your house is not in geet's neighborhood...if it is, be careful yaar. because as you said, geet is really too generous.🤣

143 buddy

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: niddzz

CONGRATS 4 THE NEW THREAD TONYA...!!!!


PART 28:

dadima is ISHMART...not bad...playing mind games...!!! i m impressed...!!! lage raho...!!!!😆
maan remembers dadima's 3 mnth wala decision...not bad...!!!😆
news: MSK is helpless...plz help the poor soul tonya...!!!😛
MSK lossing to himself...yeh toh hona hi tha...after all samne wali party geet handa hai...!!!😛
dadima knos how to wink...kya zamana hai...babaji...!!!😲
M: (st) your life wants to live with you maan. how will you stay away from your life?....hayye...main mar jawa ...!! par yeh geet life kab ban gayi...!!!!😲
M: (st) don't i want geet to be with me? No geet! you are wrong. i need you forever....some1 needs sum1 4ever...ahem..ahem...and accepting it too...!!!😳
i think it was love at 1st site 4 maan...he confessed it to...not bad...maan is PHAST...!!! maan loves her...OMG...yeh mystery meri jaan le legi...!!!
mama thinks dadi is overacting...mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha...!!! dev has pakka churaofied mama's shatir deemag...!!! i hope he doesnt misuse it...!!😲
maan cant see geets tears...!!!!😉
geet fainted and maan worried...maan pleading her to open her eyes...poor guy is so confused and helpless ...!!!
me wants to kno yeh chackar kya hai...but will have to wait 4 the story to unfold...if maan loves geet then who is the gal every1 is talkin abt being her life bein ruined...babaji mein is mystery ke chakar main pagal ho jaungi aur yeh maan ek hi sentence mein approbate aur reprobate kar kar ke muje confuse kar raha hai...!!!

PART 29:

geet fainted and is unconscious...maan worried and pleading her to cum back to her senses...!!!😲
dadima and mamu thnkn geet is doin drama so that she doesnt have to leave the place...!!
PHINALLY...dadi ma's and mamu's deemag ki batti jalofies and they realize that geet is not acting...!! 😲
dadi confused with maans worried reaction...ismein confuse hone wali kaunsi baat hai...???😕
Dadi: hey bhagavan! Ye kya ho raha hain? Why maan is so restless? Does maan love geet this much? But how come geet didn't know anything about this? geet told me that maan didn't know her untill she came to the mandap. Did maan know geet even before that?...instead of doin sumthin dadi trying to reason thinks out...hey bhaggu...if maan loves geet is it necessary that geet knos abt the same...??? dadi bhi na jab tak apka pota confess nahi karega geet ko kya bhavishya vani hogi that maan loves her...!!! ab maan geet ko tab ILU bolega aur fatherly forehead kiss tab dega jab woh behosh ho toh ismein geet ki kya galyi hai...may fingers are crossed...just hope maan geet ko AK hosh mein hogi tab dega naki tab jab woh behosh ho...!!!
yeh maan bhi na...bandh aakhon mein stare karta hai...hamara mahi mahi ka haak chin leta hai...!!!😆
chandu thinks geet is pregnant and wonders how is that possible in 2 days...chandu keeping record of maaneets togetherness...lol...lagta hai AK ke liye bhi chandu ko contact karna padega...use shayad pata hoga...!!😆
MSK cried ...he is soin love wid geet...!!!!😳
maan itne serious situation mein bhi apna naam ESTYLE se leta hai...character consistency...lol
Dr askin abt geets latest diet to maan...Dr a/c's rakhne ka kaam chandu karta hai...shayad use pata hoga par shayad woh thode outstanding types ke hi hisab rakhta hai...!!! lol
Dr praising geets name...hey bhaggu...!!!!
haaye rabba...maan again accepted that he loves geet...now i vl have to keep a/c abt maans love confession...!!!
maan is so caring and loving...mar jawa ...he cupped her face and questioned her 4gettin his surroundings...!!!
phew...finally dadi realizes that his grandson is in love...!!! thank god...!!!
geet back to her sherni avatar...Dr ko chup bilkul chup karwa diya...lage raho...!!!
m wondering...maaneet ka kaisa yeh pyaar hai...!!!
geet ko injection lagega...geet jumps 4m the couch...lol
coat wala doctors...lol...she so cutely confessed that she is scared of the hospital atmosphere...even maan felt like smilin...!!!
maan shouting at all 4 laughing at geets fear...hmm...!!! some1 has all d rights on sum1...!!! ahem ahem...!!!
maaneet wrestling...haha...me was imagining it...!!
Dr lost in maaneet...oyye...nazar mat lagana ...!!!
geet threatening maan that she will cry...yeh geet bhi na...if u would have said that u will bite his fingers or ears it would have worked...!!!!
geet comparing her arm size wid the injection...lol and Dr's alternative as solution to geets problem...lol
geet kaha phas gayi...she finally had to take the shot...!!!
maan cant bear to see her in pain...he can feel her pain...!!
chandu's wild imagination and thinkin needs a break...!!!
geet bhi na ...abhi bhi maan ke bare mein sock kar jhoot bol rahi...maan knos that...kya connection hai dono ke dil ka...!!! i m lovin it..!!




hi Nidhi,

welcome back dear😃

you are back with a bang.

itna super duper hilarious comments. i can't stop laughing.🤣🤣🤣🤣

your comments are sounding damn good than my updates. thanks for such hilarious posts buddy.

i have read these two posts almost 4 times and i am laughing like anything each time. really you are too funny.


btw...where is your vishesh comments for Part 30? is it some punishment for not giving your welcome gifts?😉

143 dear

Tonya
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi buddies, thank you so much for your lovely comments. sorry for not replying to all of you individually.


Part 31

Chandu is still shivering in fear

M: (asks sternly) chandu kya kaha tumne?

Chandu: wo...sir...wo injection...

M: aage bolo

Chandu: aage...aage...

M: (shouts) bolo

Geet feels bad for chandu and she tries to save him from maan

G: dadima! Mujhe bohat bhug lag rahi hai

Finally Maan's brain realises that geet should be given food atleast now.

M: chandu!

Chandu: aage...aage...

M: stop it

Chandu:...

M: ab ye 'aage' ko ban karo. Aur jakar jaldi lunch thayar karo

Chandu: ji sir

Chandu and geet both are relieved

Chandu: shukriya bhagavan! Geet madam ne mujhe bacha liye

Doctor: Mr. Khurana! Mein bhi ja rahi hu

M: kahan? To the kitchen?

Doctor: ji nahi. I have my own clinic to take care of

M: oho...

Doctor: kya ab mein ja sakthi hu?

M: ek minute rukhiye doctor

Doc: ji

Maan turns towards dadima...

M: dadima! Give some fruits to geet to have until the lunch gets ready

Dadi smiles

Dadi: (st) is he the same person who dragged geet to the door a while ago? How confused my poor grandson is? Bhagavan inko madad karna

Maan is annoyed by dadi's silence

M: dadima! Aap sun rahe hai na?

Dadima gives him a weird smile. And maan rolls his eyes

M: (st) patha nahi...ab ye dadima ko kya hogaya?

Dadi: geet beta! Ayiye

G: maan! aap bhi ayiyena

M: (sarcastically) kyun? Do you want me to feed you or what?

G: (stumbles) wo nahi hai maan

M: nahi na. Ab jao

G: maan! mera matlab hai...you too come and have some fruits

Maan is again touched by her concern and softens his tone

M: tum jao geet. mein abhi aatha hu

Geet is surprised by his soft behaviour.

G: (st) achanak ye maan ko kya hogaya? Why is he talking so softly?

Maan is annoyed by geet's inaction

(oho...maan expects ACTION from geet. hai rabba!!!😳)

M: (shouts) arey jao!

G: (st) acha! Nothing haapened to him. He yells like anything. He is perfectly alright. He is the same Maan Singh Khurana.

Geet is still standing there.

M: geeettthhh!!

Dadima almost drags geet to the dining table. Jugnu mama too follows them.

After they left, maan talks to the doctor...

M: doctor

Doctor: ji

M: is geet really alright? Should we take any tests?

Doc: nothing to worry Mr. Khurana!. she is lil bit weak. That is it. If she takes proper food, then there won't be any problem. Just take care of that

hearing what the doctor said, maan is relieved.

M: hmmm

Doc: i will prescribe some vitamin tablets. Please make sure that she takes them

M: (st) geet aur bitter bitter tablets. Hmmm...maan you are going to have a hard time with her

Maan smiles at his own thought

Doctor is writing the prescription

Doc: Mr. Khurana! What is your wife's age?

M: age...age...

Doc: Mr. Khurana! Are you shy to say your wife's age?

M: (st) ye sach me pagal doctor hai. acha...she has come to give treatment to geet na. then she will behaves like this only.

Doc: Mr. Khurana...

M: haan...

Doc: may i know your wife's age please? I have to mention it in the prescription

M: (st) how on earth i am supposed to know geet's age? I don't know anything about her, except her name. Wo bhi bina surname.

Maan tries to guess geet's age

M: (st) What could be geet's age? Around 18? No no...she is not looking that young? Then what is her age? Some times she behaves like a kid. so she may be around 14. Maan! dimag kharab hogaya kya? 14 is even younger than 18. Teek se socho. But, Sometimes she behaves so maturely. So she may be aound 30. maan! what are you thinking? Is geet elder to you? Why not? Ye bhi ho saktha na. No no maan! she is not looking that old too. Then what is her age?

Doctor has lost her patience and gives the prescription to maan

Doc: Mr. Khurana! here is the prescription. Now i am leaving. After i left, you yourself fill your wife's age in the prescription.

M: hmmm

Doc: how possessive husband he is? He doesn't even want to let anyone to know his wife's age. Hmm...she is very lucky

The doctor turns to leave and stops midway and looks at maan

doc: btw...Mr Khurana...your wife is very cute and caring. you are so lucky to have her as your wife

Maan didn't know how to react. So he remains silent and the doctor leaves.

M: (st) i am not that lucky to have geet as my wife. Soon, i'll be sending her away from me forever

Maan sits on the couch and closes his eyes and remembers whatever happened since the time he came back from the office

M: (st) Geet ki tabayat teek nahi hai. isi haalat me, main geet ko kaise ghar se bahar nikal sakthe? No maan! you should send her away from you for her own good. Don't have any second thought on this.

Maan thinks for some time...

M: (st) no maan! now...sabse pehle...it is more important to take care of her. once she gets well, you can send her out. Wohi geet ke liye acha hoga. But what if she becomes too close with me in the meantime? maan! how are you going to stay away from her? it is not that easy as much as you thought.

Geet comes there with fruits and sits next to maan. he feels her presence and opens his eyes. Geet smiles at him. Maan is amused by her smile. She gives him an apple.

G: maan! apple khayiyena

He tries to not to reveal his feelings for her. So he gives her attitude

M: nahi chayiye

G: maan! an apple a day, keeps the doctor away. Ab khayiyena

M: geet! maine kaha thana ki mujhe apple nahi chayiye

G: acha! Iska matlab...you don't want to keep that beautiful doctor away from you. Hena maan?

M: geettt!!!

G: maan! aap naras kyun ho rahe hain? Shall i call that doctor again?

M: chup bilkul chup

G: ...

Geet again gives the apple to him silently. Maan rolls his eyes and takes it from her hand and bites it. Geet smiles

G: very good. Now i believe that you want to keep that doctor away from you. Don't worry maan! when i faint next time, lets call some other beautiful doctor. Teek hai?

maan gets angry

M: geet! don't even talk about fainting. I can't bear to see you like that once again. samji tum?

Geet's heart skips a beat and she looks into his eyes

G: (st) what does he mean? Does he care for me that much? Lekhin kyun? I am just a stranger to him. Until i came to the mandap, he didn't even know about my existence in this world. then why is he worried about my health? is it so or am i over imagining things?

Maan realises what he just said

M: (st) maan! control yourself! Ye tum kya kar raha ho? If geet comes to know about your feelings for her, then what will happen? She will never leave you maan!

though Geet couldn't find the reason for his words, she tries to comfort maan

G: maan! aap chinta math keejiye. Hereafter i'll take good care of myself. it is my promise

Maan didn't know how to react. He gets up from the couch and walks towards the door

G:maan! rukhiye.

But Maan ignores her call and he walks out.

G: (st) hey babaji! Why his mood is swinging so swiftly? I could never understand him?


hi buddies,

thanks for reading. hope you liked it. please let me know your views about this FF.


143 sweethearts


Tonya

Edited by tonyahk - 14 years ago
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hiii
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 more
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOWWW awesomeee
geet is trying to hook up her husband with some beautiful doc
aree wahh

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datz so nice...not dat hillarious n not dat serious though... itz jus wonderful...

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