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Posted: 14 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: minahil1997

owesom guys!!!👏


all the chapters were fabulous... i loved them... ayesha and abhay scenes were perfect😳... i loved the shower scene🤣... continue ur fab work guys🤗... love ur ff❤️

Thank you Minahil for the comment...Aysha Abhay are one fiesty couple...hoping to keep you entertained😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Fiza U are on your game with this Aysha and Abhay charactor. The shower scene had me completely blushing red. I loved the whole tyre punturing and the green dye. Priceless. It was so comical yet hot. Anyway i love how possessive Abhay is in the last line. Only i can talk to her like this. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

:::Chapter 10:::Learning Mentor:::

The seniors were all assigned srudents to show around the College. Jay had the pleasure of showing Nidha, Aysha and Sur around. It was something he so wanted to avoid. Nidha really got under his skin. That and he felt guily about treating her like some trash. Yeah he had a guilty consience but he didn't like apologizing to anyone.
Jay reluctantly headed towards Nidha and her friends-U girls ready for the tour guide? (He took a quick glance at Nidha then at the other girls. He admired Nidha's styling. Jay shook his head to get that image out. Aysha was beaming he thought. Anky was whispering about their little antics with Abhay.) I'm your mentor for the day.
Niddha crossed her arms softly speaking-But aren't we supposed to have this tour yesterday?
Jay responded back-I was a little busy. Shall we? (He neglected to tell them he was at one of his worst moods. Something strange was happening to him. He had to get a grip so he skipped the whole guide thing. Neel had covered for him with the principle) I will do my best to make up for yesterday.
Sur elbowed Nidha to quit he interigation-Sure. Just no fighting please. We've had enough for a few days. So erm U a senior then?
Jay nodded-Yeah i tranferred from Mumbai.
Aysha sked-So U and your brother are pretty much single?
Jay let out a smirk-I don't think this is part of the guide rulebook.
Aysha continued-U said you'd make it up to us. I want to know a little about our Learning Mentor. It would break the ice. We didn't get to talk last night when U blanked us out.
Jay sighed knowing this was all his doing-Fine. I'll give U the 411. I like to play the field a little. I hate commitment and needy girls. I am pretty much a loner. The only company i like is myself. I am moody and a little introvert. I'm into any girl who shows me a good time. So any of U girls would fit my criteria. So which one of U is asking? Do U Aysha want a piece of me?
Aysha went all defensive-Hey i was only asking. I already have one person who treats me this abusively. I don't need it from U too.
Nidha cut in between her friend and Jay-Now listen U arrogant ape (Her temper rising) U don't talk to a girl in such a rude manner. She was just curious. Secondly U aren't her type. Do U want us to complain over your foul attitude? Or are U going to behave?
Jay rolled his eyes-Then mind your business and keep your nose out of my business.
Aysha gasped-No need to get all cranky guys. Just relax.
Sur being the diplomat-Lets just go see teh tour peacefully.
Jay punches the air-Finally someone who speaks sense. Now lets start shall we? U girls already know where the gym is. I'll take U out the back. The science block and ten the sport centre.
The girls follow Jay around looking at each other giggling at the events that passed by. Jay knew what they were laughing at.
Jay gave away one of his heart stopping rare smiles-I must say U have created quite a stir amongs the students with your pranks backfiring on U like thsi.
Nidha smiles-Thanks it was a group effort.
Jay continues to walk on with the girls trailing behind him-Maube U can give me a few ideas.
Nidha shot at him-So U can test it out on us?
Jay grins-U never know when it may come in handy. I'd never pull a stunt like this on U girls. I have people to do it for me.
Nidha knew Jay had girls waiting in the wings to do his dirty work-I'm sure U do. So how come your a Learning Mentor? I mean U are new here. So U don't know this place right.
Jay answered beaming-Right but i spent my summer break here doing voluntary work for my Mom. She's into all this community work. She wants to show a good image of herself and both her boys. So i have been to Mount College before.
Sur asks-So do U like doing community service?
Jay chuckles-Not really but U learn a thing or two about your patience and how determined one could be.
Nidha was surprised by Jays good boy act-And here i was thinking U are all bad.
Jay turns around gazing into Nidha's eyes-Never judge a book by its cover girls they may surprise U. Enough about me as i have already broken my code of conduct by revealing a little too much about myself. I'm usually not into other peoples business but i might as well get info on U so i can relay it back on my feedback. So whose going first?
Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
me frst yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it to da core
jay n nidhas chem r fab
i like it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ayesha you rock...you have given Jay a whole mysterious,brooding,yet charming touch...Mr.Jay Khuranna i have got my eyes on you...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
I just loved it and never thought of becoming diplomat😆😆...Well so my dear Nidh and her... ahem😳 are having some exploring time or killing one...I am liking every bit ...I read all the part at once...I have some problem in my net connection and its getting worse day by day ...So these days I am unable to visit forum...And miss IF a lot...So Thanx alot to all of you for making me smile like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
CHAPTER 11
One week after the prank and new girls college tour,
Fiza was a complete nervous wreck by the time she reached outside the department library. Despite doing her homework on the task set by Armaan she felt restless and insecure. She knew without doubt that she was one among the few who had put real time and energy into doing the task. Most of her classmates and friends had just shuffled through the net or copied from others. She had moved around in the town to conduct a survey that was a part of the project. Gone to major label outlets and inquired. The previous one week had been hectic and tiresome. She was fervently praying to God that everything went well.
"T doesn't need these projects to get the internship''.I am really good at showing of my legs na" T blabbered onto her bimbo friends making Fiza want to vomit.
This girl'..she'll fall to any extent'..wait a minute she isn't interested in the job'she's probably after that jerk Armaan Malik Fiza thought
"Miss.Sharma seems to be tensed'..and why won't she be'.who is going to select a behenji like her" T taunted from behind.
Fiza gritted her teeth but didn't rise to the bate.
She was dressed in a light green anarkali suit that day, it was gifted to her by her mom. She wore it because she felt satisfied and confident in it. It was as if her mother was with her right there. She wore emerald and platinum light necklace and earstuds and silver heels to match. Her hair was styled to end in curls and left open All in all boys had a hard time keeping their eyes off this angel.
Armaan Malik entered from the opposite corridor followed by three people. Fiza looked at them and felt her heart rate increase. All three of them were known designers. Armaan gave a once over glance to the students and went into the interview room. The countdown had begun.
There were about ten students before Fiza and about six of them had come out looking glum. By the time her turn came she wanted nothing better than to run in the opposite direction.
She brazed herself and entered the room closing her eyes for a few minutes in silent prayer and remembering her mothers beautiful smile. Fiza smiled and entered the room confidently.
Armaan looked up from a file and felt the world arround him disappearing. Because an absolutely stunning angel was walking towards him. Her curly ended locks were moving about in her motion. Almost five girls had come to him so far all intending to get the job by flirting with him. But the way she came towards the table itself showed that she had no such intentions. No wonder he hadn't noticed her earlier, she looked totally different from the girl he had seen a week before.
Fiza on the other hand had glanced once at Armaan and felt her heart flutter. He was looking sinfully handsome and cherry on top he was staring at her as if she had done some unforgivable crime by adorning the traditional look.
"Miss. Fiza Sharma'..why the traditional wear?" one of the designers asked first
"I feel comfortable in it sir" Fiza asked confidently.
"So you are a no-modern ware person hm" the next one asked.
"Oh no not like that sir'..I do enjoy wearing modern dresses'.to me style and fashion is what I am comfortable in wearing'.today I felt comfortable in this dress so I wore it and at other times I adorn modern wear too" she answered.
" Fiza'if you are given the theme of love what will be you designing" Armaan asked.
"Sir I would dresses in the shades of red and white to emphasize passion and purity'two important aspects of love'the dresses can be both modern and Indian considering that we have still a major proportion of people who like to wear Indian outfits"
"So will that help you to attract your partner" Armaan asked eyebrows raised.
"Yes it will'.if your partner has eye only for your physical attributes but pure love can never be attained in that manner because its beyond physical attraction" Fiza answered looking straight into his eyes. An unspoken conversation took place between them
The interview lasted for a few more minutes. Fiza submitted her report and went out.
It was lunch time and she knew her gang would be in the canteen.
Fiza went and slumped down besides Anky and drank a glass of water in one gulp.
"How was it Fiz di" Sur asked cautiously. Fiza opened her eyes and looked around at her gang. They were all sitting tensed as if expecting her to cry or blast them. She burst out laughing seeing their faces. They all looked confused now.
"Hey bhagwaan'..lagtha hey interview ka dimaag par baari asar pada hain" Anky said understanding that her friend was laughing at the site of their faces.
Fiza hit Anky on the arm and grabbed her sandwich.
The gang was chatting away happily when Aysha noticed a handsome stranger walking towards them and nudged her friends.
"Hello Fiza" he said in his trademark husky voice.
Fiza felt a tingle go through her at the sound of her name coming from Armaan.
He handed her an envelope and she frowned
"Open it" He said smiling crookedly.
It was her confirmation letter. She had bagged the place.
"But why are you giving it personally" she asked surprised " sir" she added hastily.
"Because I have planned to recruit you in my personal team'the team I will be heading'and call me Armaan not sir" he said giving her his most heart stopping smile. He put on his shades and walked away.
"Woho'someone has just earned the lucky draw" Nidha teased from behind and others giggled. The entire canteen was watching the spectacle.
"Shutup guys'.its not a lucky draw'for all I know it might be a trap" Fiza said blushing beetroot red.



Edited by Nidhsara - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

nidha babes loved it loved the end when he gave the letter thanks sweets

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nidh...really love your wrirting style...So mr.Armaan started noticing the green angel...it was really lovely❤️👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60

gud one...

rather great one...

u could start writing romantic novels, u know...😳😳😳

anywaz...👏👏👏👏👏

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