CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete)

sapphirose176

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Posted: 12 years ago

abt part 31:

YOU-ARE-WAY-TOO-SIMPLY-TOTALLY-ABSOLUTELY-COMPLETELY-ROCKING-WRITER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

every misunderstanding cleared, Aambhik literally gobsmacked.🤣i thought cgm and gang would returned to gurukul , end of chandu-dhara moments and BANG!! you started the new plot without making it look like a drag( unlike other serials.) i imagined the story as a serial when i read it. you are a fab writer!!

your story has a continuous flow like a river. m liking it.
will read further parts and comment.😃

regs,
Gia.

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sapphirose176

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Posted: 12 years ago

#752

part 32:

really well written. the meeting at the start , the plans were really good. that chitra is trying to kill chandu-dhara romance n m irritated with her. but of course there's no fun if such character is'nt there.
Airavat-Sumitra scenes were too good!! i went like-aawww!!☺️

eager to read the story forward!

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sapphirose176

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Posted: 12 years ago

#753

part 33:

totally awsum! another plan successful! now shashank-dakshita romance is brewing.

dhara is becoming inquisitive of a new emotion 'prem'. love this ff a hell lot!
waiting to read more.😃

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sapphirose176

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Posted: 12 years ago

#754

part 34:

outstanding update. really looking forward to alexander-cgm meet.

finally both chandu n dhara are aware of their feelings for each other!!
waiting for more chandu-dhara scenes.

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

story bachbena..

r reader chhara writer r astitwa thake na

STORY tar nijer gune bachbe😳
Writer tar nij mahimai ujjal⭐️
reader er hras-bridhi te writer er power jachai hoi na😲

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#756

rumpu when u r writing story online forum then u hv to depend on viewers feedback..otherwise we can write in on diary na?? why need to post it here??

Gia aww thank you that at last u r back..and thanks so much..muhaaa for ur part by part comment..m happy that u liked my track and didn't feel bored that i am continuing the story 4 so long

how was ur exam??

and what about ur story??

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#757

hmm...diary is a good friend forever...
kabhi bhi criticize nehi karta😳
well fr my part...I post stories here coz real life friends hv almost no interest in them😭

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#758

almost same here ..my friends don't watch seials and feel bored about my story ..and criticism is much needed to improve writing

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Susmita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: Kadamvari
almost same here ..my friends don't watch seials and feel bored about my story ..and criticism is much needed to improve writing

my friends watch serials-bt wahi saas-bahu wala

yaa u r right
bt sometimes friends criticize them just to pinch or pester me😳

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#760

some of my frnz do d same.both in real and virtual😛.but still i love to share my stories wit readers

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