CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete)

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

thanks rimi and ria for commenting..rumpu will wait for ur comment .rimi take ur time to read

and polly..was waiting for your comment..thanks for liking Chandu's ehsaas kuchh naya sa😉

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

ok...finished...😊...read frm mob & com through web😆...plzzz don't get angry writer ji...when I saw ur upd...I think ore baap re...oto bado upd kikore padbo???...na padlei ba ki???😉
bt so interesting dat hd to open cell net fr 4-5 times...can't control myself or be patient to poen pc👏
good part as well...helen is like a divine angel to them⭐️...poor Seluecus
& anguthi badal😳...14 yr guy & 9 yr child🤪
& new feeling is depicted really beautifully 👏👏👏...apanar pakhhei samvab respected hindi teacher👍🏼...Dhara is simple child...makes everytime cg uncomfortable😳...thank God...cg hsn't fair complexion...otherwise😳😳😳😳😳
bechara🤣
these lines hv stolen my heart...like ur voice😉😊...SERIOUS.

Chandragupta comes to them and as soon as he looked at Durdhara he got absolutely speechless..in that pink gown she was looking absolutely like the fairy about whom his mother used tell him in childhood..Durdhara is a bit taller and bulky than Helen so the gown was tight fittings on her and ended before reaching to her ankles so her fair soft skinned bare parts of legs were being seen..Durdhara just touched her puberty recently so process of the change from a girl to lady HAD started in her body..this tight gown revealed the visibility of the change..all the lines of her figure was visible in this attire..and a large portion of her hands and one side's shoulder were kept bare in this dress..she was looking absolutely appealing..Chandragupta just couldn't remove his eyes from her..he now could realize what beauty means..the thing which he couldn't understand why his senior friends discussed about women and pulled leg of Shashank mentioning Dakshita's name..and why Sukant was so lost to see Subhadra and Airavat's thinking about his wife he somehow started to understand..the very feelings started blooming in his heart but still he remained unable to recognize it..that what he actually feels...this was a completely new and nameless feelings..to see him speechless standing like this..Durdhara questioningly looked at his eyes..and found those big innocent eyes are full of some unknown expression..she never saw such expressions before in anyone's eyes and not even Chandragupta's eyes..what was it??..she couldn't understand the expression was what for but felt so uncomfortable that she kept her eyes down...

UPD SOON...I'll surely read it...& will not be so late too😉

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coolpavni

@coolpavni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

Amazinggg aru di... beautifully described each expression of Chandu wen he saw Dhara in dat attire..!! :) Then loved d way u hav written abt d respect of a woman...and yeh Ambhik..!! goddd hamesha aise hi karta rehta hai... :-/
on a whole vry nice part di...[B][/B]

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

thanks rumpu and pavni...yeah nari shakti is d thing i always focus...

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

ok...dis is 2nd com...hope writer ji don't feel disturbed.
Chandragupt shivered..he never felt like that ever..it seems some butterflies glittering within him..the smell from Durdhara's open hair was making him numbed..but he didn't lose his hold on her..and keep seeing the sleeping beauty by forgetting everything.

this part is nice bt...

he touched Durdhara's face ..his finger started playing on her face touching from forehead to her nose to her cheeks and stopped on her lips..he carressed her red rose petal like lips with finger.

above part seems so bold na????...JUST 14 YRS GUY!!!!...SPECIALLY when he's taught frm Acharya Chanya??
...& his guilty feeling is natural...& it offers me a sigh of breath...

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

it was out of curiosity Rumpu...because he doesn't know what he feels and why he was doing this..if he was an older guy then he would b aware of his exact feelings so could b able to control himself..

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816401

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Posted: 12 years ago

#647

late comment ke liye sorry di.fantastic update, dhurdhara is really a brave rajkanya

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: surprising
curiosity???...such a bold step!!!!!

is touching face with finger that bold step?

nivi late comment?? i am surprised with ur late presence..whr r u??

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Susmita

@surprising

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Posted: 12 years ago

#649

bold means...not normal at all...lip touching...

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: surprising
bold means...not normal at all...lip touching...

yeah out of curiosity boys of adolescent period can commit far more bold things..it was cgm so he restricted himself as soon as he realized he is disturbing dhara with abnormal activities

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