CGM FF: Ehsaas...Kuchh Naya Sa (complete)

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

thanks abhi dear...thank god this time you didn't take a week for commenting😆
will update soon

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HARNEEN KAUR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Very Nicely written Aru,kafi interesting hai...

Lets see jab CGM or Dhudhara ko ek dusre ke darshan hote hain to kahani main kya twist ata hai...

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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thanks harmeen for commenting
ya sure will update soon

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Bhargavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#254

oopsie...yeh kya jhatka tha i m also shocked...and chandu kitna massom hai...vivaah toh badon ka hota hai na hum sab toh bachhe hain...rushi yeh dialogue bolte kitna pyara lagta...awesome update aru ..loved it ...next update mein munde kudiyon ko daana dalenge..woh bhi mandir mein 🤣
waiting for the next part 😊

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Kamalika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Jhum I must say as always your dialogues are brilliant...no less than a proper drama script!👏 And thanx for the explanation of the words in @polly's post! I was going to ask you the meaning of a few myself!😆

Wonderful update! 👍🏼Thanx for the pm!😊

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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haha thanks bhargu and kamalika for commenting...
bhargu really yar main bhi likhte wakt yehi sochti hun unke mukh mein ye dialogues kaisa lagta😛...munde to kudiyon ko dana dalte hi rehta hai..vo mandir ho ya koi aur...us wakt ho ya is wakt😉

kamalika thank you so much dear for your precious comment..if you still have any confusion on any word you can ask me..i will clear it😊
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pallavi guha biswas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#257

thanx jhumdi

luved the update waitin for the next one

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trishnaultimate

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

m sorry 4 the late reply.. hvn exms.. it is a shock to knw abt airawat.. v dont get to see cg n frenz after the leap..😭 missin them a lot..

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Rukmini13

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Soryyy... for late comnt dear...totally unexpected part...airawat shadishuda hai...nd chandus reply...shadi to bado ki hoti hai...he is so cute...muhha...ye to pahla shock hai chandukeliye dusra to milna baki hai...really mast part tha..now waiting for next...nd thanks for adding me in ur pm list...

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PART-14

Vishnu Temple

...the Vishnu temple of Rajpur was the oldest temple of Kamboja...its structure was influenced by Persian architecture...and it was different to look at than the temples of AD era...the temple was not very big in size..rather it was small piece of architecture made by stones..in the temple there was an idol of lord Vishnu made of black stone...the idol also was small...on that time rituals of worshiping god was also different...it was more like agnihotra or offering to fire...so in front of the idol there was a wide place for offering in fire...
...when Chandragupt and his friends reached to Vishnu temple the Agnihotra had been started...priests were chantibbg hymns...Durdhara was sitting in the center of all and was offering things to the fire..Subhadra was standing just behind her..and was supplying things...Kalyani was sitting with folding hands with her eyes towards fire...Dakshita was obseving the stairs whether prince and his friends are coming or not...except the priests there were guards for their security...
...after reaching in temple...Digvijay and his friends went upstairs..but Chandragupta stayed outside as he was observing the temple and its beautiful structure thoroughly...it was habit to be attracted to the new things..what he has never seen before...
..Digvijay guided his friends inside the temple...guard showing owner paved the way...and they reached where offerings were going on...watching them Dakshita stepped towards them...Nandini was beside her..she also followed her

Digvijay : ao mitron..ye raha Kamboja ka sabse prachin mandir...hamare aradhya devta Vishnu bhagban ki...

Aditya : baht sundar mandir hai...parantu tumne kaha tha k rajkumari tumhare lie aj puja kar rahi hai..kahan hai vo??

Digvijay (indicating Durdhara) : vo dekho...yagg mein ghritahuti de rahi hai...

everyone turned towards that direction...

Ghanghor : rajkumari k sundarta k bare mein jo bhi charche sune the vo unse bhi adhik sundar hai...

Digvijay gave a proudly appreciating smile...

and then Sukant's eyes stacked on Subhadra who was standing behind Durdhara...and he became speechless...minutes passed and he kept watching her...
Sukant (thinking) : humne to socha bhi nhi tha k humein itni shighra darshan mil jayenge unki...ishwar ko asankhya dhanyabad k vo rajkumari nhi hai...warna hum Gandhar k ek tuchcha rajkarmachari k putra kabhi unke vishay mein sochne k sahas nhi kar sakte...parantu vo sundari kaun hai..jo mere man ko aise moh liya?..ye kya ho raha hai humein)
and then Dakshita stood in front of him and watching Sukant's condition...she shook her hands in front of his eyes and Sukant regained his consciousness...

Dakshita : aise kya dekh rahe the Sukant??

Sukant (still in dreamland) : vo kanya

Dakshita : kanya???kaunsi kanya??tum mandir mein kanya k darshan karne k liye aye ho??

Shashank : vo chahe kisike bhi darshan karne aye..tumhe usse kya??

Dakshita : ohh aap bhi yahan hai???parantu ab tak puja samapt nhi hua..isiliye prasad nhi milega

Shashank : tumhare kehne ka arth kya hai??main yahan prasad k liye aya hun??

Dakshita : aur nahi to kya...bhojan k atirikt kisi bhi vishay mein tumhara ruchi hai ye to humein gyat nhi...

Shashank : dekho Dakshita apne sima mein raho samjhi...

Dakshita : warna kya kar loge??

Digvijay (tensed) : are tum log yahan bhi shuru ho gaye??mitron ye mandir hai yahan to shanti rakho...

and Shashank and Dakshita stopped temporarily

Kalyani stepped towards Digvijay...

Kalyani : rajkumar Digvijay k jai ho...

Digvijay : are Panchnad kumari...humein gyat nahi tha k aap bhi yahan hai...aho bhagya hamara...mitron inse milo..ye hai panchnad k rajkumari mahan raja Parvateswar ki putri Kalyani...

everyone : pranam rajkumari

Kalyani : pranam
(turning towards Digvijay) : kumar inme se vo avinashi veer kaun hai??

Digvijay : kaun Chandragupt??(and then he found Chandragupt was nt with them)...nhi rajkumari vo inme se koi nhi hai...vo mandir k bahar hi reh gaya hai...main abhi bulata hun...

Kalyani : chaliye humare usse milna avashyak hai...

they went outside

boys tried to step towards the havankund but Dakshita stopped them..

Airawat : kya hua humein devta darshan karna hai badha q de rahi ho??

Dakshita : ta ke puja mein koi bipatti na aye

Shashank : tumhare kehne ka arth kya hai..hamare wajah se puja mein vipatti a sakte hai

Dakshita : kuch kaha nhi ja sakta...ab tark na karke yehin ruko..puja samapt hone k paschat hi tumlog praves kar paoge..

Shashank and friends became angry..specially Sukant became impatient..but they couldn't dare to say anything

Chandragupta was still outside of the temple...was watching its beauty..and then Digvijay and Nandini came to him...

Digvijay : are Chandragupt tum yahan kya kar rahe ho...hum sab tumhare pratiksha kr rahe the..dekho rajkumari tumse bhet karne k utsukta se swayam bahar chali ayi...

Kalyani (smiling with excitement) : to aap hi hai vo veerta ki misaal...pitasree se apke bare mein baht kuch suna...

Chandu (gave a cute smile) :humein lajjit na kare rajkumari...guni to aap hai...kitna advut chitra banati hai aap..

Kalyani became confused

Kalyani : chitra??kaunse chitra k baat kr rahe hai aap??humein koi chitra banana nhi ata...

Digvijay : are Chandragupt tum galat samajh rahe ho...ye hamare behn Durdhara nhi Panchnad k rajkumari Kalyani hai...hamari Dhara to puja mein vyast hai..vo dekho..
he pointed his fingure towards the place where Durdhara was sitting..but as Durdhara on that time bent herself to take blessings from lord Vishnu..so Chandu could see Subhadra as she was just behind Dhara...and he considered Subhadra as princess Durdhara...

Chandu (turning towards Kalyani) : humein shama karna rajkumari...aap Panchnad k raja mahan Parvateswar k kanya hai..hum apne acharya se apke pita k vishay mein baht suna hai..vo ek mahan veer hai...

Digvijay : ap dono batein karo..puja samapt hone ko hai..humein bhitar jana hoga..aap dono batein khatam karke a jana...

he left

Kalyani : Chandragupt humein apko ek vises suchna deni hai...apke acharya chanakya bartaman mein hamare rajya mein aye hue hai...hum Abhisar rajya mein a rahe hai ye janke unhone humein ek vises patra diya hai..ap tak pohuchane k lie...is patra mein unke koi vises suchna hai...

and she handed over a rolled paper to Chandragupt

Kalyani : ise padh lena...hum chalte hai...

she left...

Chandu went to the back of the temple and opened the letter of Chanakya

here the offerings eneded inside the temple...Durdhara took blessings from lord Vishnu...and then she took the heavy plate of the stone where all the flowers.. and other ingredients of offerings were decorated..she had to have a round of the temple alone with this heave plate...closing her eyes...Subhadra took her outside the temple...and then left her as she Durdhara had to complete the circle alone...guards kept all people away from the temple as there would be no obstacle on princess's way...so Durdhara started walking with eyes closed...
Chandu was reading the letter by hiding in a place so that none could watch him reading the letter...so guards didn't find him...now after reading the letter he became tensed and came out from that secret place and started walking towards temple..as his concentration was still in the letter he didn't notice someone is coming towards him...
Durdhara was coming with closed eyes..so there was no question of noticing Chandu...and the result was as expected
Dhara with her heavy plate of stone collided with Chandu..and all the flowers from that plate fell upon Chandu...and as an effect of this collision both of them sat down on land...

Edited by jhum_86 - 13 years ago

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