Maneet SS 'Love is Blind' NOTE page 151 - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update. read both updates today. Nice concept. Poor Maneet.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i liked ur ss its nice and waiting for thier meeting do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh ho...kya baat hai ji...so DEV THE DEVIL is gonna work with MSK THE GOD????


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Important Note:
*~*~*~*~*Hey gals i will be going out of state to attend a wedding on friday. As a result i will be gone for about a week...(like a mini vacation i guess) so i will not be able to update or even come onto IF. Will miss you all lotsss! Hope you understand and can bear waiting a little. oh and yeah i will update my other FF "two broken hearts falling in love" hopefully before i leave. ~*~*~*~*

Part: 3
First encounter

Maan runs his hand through his hair as he looks out the window to get some fresh air. " You don't want to leave me in peace brown eyes" he questioned God knows who? Now those chocolate brown eyes seemed to haunt him in broad daylight as well. What was fate playing with him this time? It never seemed to pave out a path of happiness for him, so what did it have planned for him is the question that lingers.

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He was still looking out the window in deep thought. The knock against his cabin door brought him back to reality. He looks to the side and sees Dev Chopra along side Vicky waiting to be allowed to enter. He didn't know why he was getting some strange vibes from him. He looked decent and his company was doing well lately. He brushed it thoughts aside and tells them to come in.
Dev: Good morning Mr. Khurana, I hope I haven't come in a bad time.
Maan: Hello Mr. Chopra, no you have not come in a bad time at all. Let's start.
After about thirty minutes of discussing everything becomes finalized. Maan liked his idea and style of doing business. They were going to work together to build homes for middle class folks. All that was left was to finalize the blue prints.
Dev: okay now I will take your leave. It was great doing business with you Mr. Khurana.
Maan: same here.
Dev gets up to leave and before leaving asks maan, " So I will see you tomorrow night right?"
Maan gives a nod, but Vicky looked annoyed. He didn't like this Dev Chopra. He never liked him and was hoping through out the meeting that maan would reject doing this project with him.
Once Dev leaves Vicky tells maan, " Maan I don't think he is a great person to be working with. I mean he drinks and gambles'.i have seen him once in my brothers place'.and just nothing about him appeals good to me.
Maan: I don't care about his personal life, only his professional life Vicky.
With that said Vicky kept quiet. There was no point in arguing with Maan once he has decided on something.
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Being a housewife she didn't have much to do. After doing the house choirs she would go out for a jog or go to the gym to get some exercise. She would also shop, go to dance classes, or write poetry. Now recently she started to go to the library and live a life of a fairytale in those books. Imagining herself as the heroine and getting the love she has been deprived from, from the hero. It is sad, but the grim reality and truth that geet has to live in.
Geet came home at 9:00 p.m that night after returning from dance class. She quickly went and made dinner and waited for Dev's arrival even though he told her not to wait up, but she couldn't. She could not sleep without knowing if he ate or if he ever came home safely that night so she stayed up.
It was 11:00 at night now she couldn't take it anymore and decides to call him. The phone was ringing, but he was not picking up the phone. She was about to give up and try calling again when he heard his voice, " Hello".
She quickly puts the phone to her ear and says, " Hello'Dev. Where r u?"
" Why are you bothering me can't you let me enjoy myself in peace" he says in a drunken state.
" Oyeee Rahul no cheating'stop looking at my cards" dev shouts at his friend.
"Geet don't call back I am busy" and hangs up.
Geet was shocked. What was Dev doing with Rahul? She never liked him and was only a bad influence on her husband. She decides to go get Dev and she had a pretty good idea that he would be in Rahul's place and that was the first place she was going to check. He was drunk and wouldn't be able to drive home so as any other concerned lover she went to go find him. She opens the door and the freezing air sent chills down her spine. She grabs a shawl and wraps herself around it. She get's inside a taxi toward Rahul's place.
Along the way the taxi breaks down. She pays him and decides to walk the remaining of the way because Rahul's house was just two blocks away.
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It was late at night Maan had just finished up working on some last minute details on their upcoming projects. As he headed toward his car he accidently drops his keys. He bends down and gets them, but when he tries to stand back up he collides with something so warm and soft that sent electric currents down his body. He didn't even get to see who it was as she didn't stop walking away. But when she glimpses back at him for a couple seconds, maan's breathe gets caught in his throat with the site in front of him.


(imagine it is night time...hehe)

His feet become rooted in place and he forgets for a second where he was because all he saw was the same chocolate brown eyes from his dreams. He only saw her eyes as she had covered half her face with a shawl in order to be warm from the chilly night.
All of a sudden maan feels a hand on his shoulder and turns to see it was none other than Vicky. He turns back toward the woman in his dreams, but to find that she was gone as if she had vanished into thin air.
Vicky: Maan are you alright? Why do you look so shocked.
Maan: uhh yeah I am fine it is just the cold air maybe that's why.
Vicky: Yeah it is so cold tonight. Anyways here are the blueprints you accidently left in the office.
Maan: Thanks Vicky.
Vicky: Okay take care of yourself I have to meet my brother tonight.
Maan nodes and Vicky leaves. After he was alone Maan runs to the last place he saw her. He couldn't believe it'was she real? Or was he seriously losing his mind? He felt her though'he felt her.
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Dev gets even angrier hearing the tone geet was using with him. He grabs her by the hair and shouts, " Who are you to tell me what to do'haan??!" and pushes her against the table. The table snapped in half and the alcohol bottles shattered, while the cards and poker chips scattering everywhere. 😲( poor geet it is not easy to write the pain that geet has to go through)

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Edited by zeynab111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I again saw your updating status 😆
But frankly I was dying for their encounter ; so me super thrilled 😃
Finally they met 👍🏼
And loved the built up atmosphere you created ; you know ... the entire... night time chilly weather , Maan drops his keys , colliding with Geet 😳 , Geet turning back ... & those eyes 👏

Fantastic part Glitter Star PinkGlitter Star PinkGlitter Star Pinkalthough pracap seems scary
Have a nice time in the wedding 🤗
Me first this time for "Love is Blind" ...wooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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gonna miss you ...🤗
Thanks for the pm ...😃
Edited by drashsree100 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update.
when will maaneet meet???
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10

awsome update.

when will maaneet meet???


thx dear.i think in part 6 they will come face to face and talk this time.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part maan feeling strange with dev hm interesting and sad for geet 😭 i m waiting when she would fall in love with maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet is so concerned and left late at night only to get him back safely
like their meeting, but it would leave maan confused as ever
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...finally they met...dev is so disgusting

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