|| Make Me Fall In LOVE || 2# - Page 9

Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

Hey manjari congo for the new thread dear🤗 Hey Charmee 🤗 Thaaank youu so much! ❤️
Fabulous updt dear.. Loved the way u described sajan's feelings n awkwardness in the morning, that seemed so natural after d stuff happened last nite..Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed the update and thank youu soo much for your lovely comment! i truly enjoyed that part... And on breakfast oww poor sam he wanted to spend time with her but was not able to bcoz of his work!! Haha.. Mr.Work-a-holic! Uff. but though made up to come home early n their excitements.. Gunjan too on other side was prepared with the dinner n waiting for samrat but to her shock it was neil.. N on other hand Samrat somehow prepared himself to confess infront of gunjan... but then to his surprise there was a shock-neil waiting for her... Loved the way samrat held gunjan when she was all shattered n loved the way gunjan buried her sorrows in his arms by hugging him at that time n she told neil to leave... This always happens in life. What we plan never happens and when we dont plan anything. Then the best things happen! Well.. we know samrat loves gunjan alot so he had to be prtective of her in front of neil. and he was very worried as well.. and previously neil had hurt gunjan alot and that was definately WRONG! 😕

And about this turn in the story line is actually a perfect turn u gave to it... I totally agree to you without neil being +ve n without gunjan getting chance to chose samrat wouldn't have justified "Make me fall in love" Exactly. Thank you! I am glad you understood. Exactly. Samrat would keep doubting if Gunjan loved him all his life. He would think it was just another sacrifice she made. or something like that. So "Make Me Fall In love" would come no where!
Dear u say u r not a perfect writer yes may be but u r rectifying ur mistake u did n making this ff perfect symbolizes that u r a perfect writer otherwise u wouldn't have clutched this mistake of urs... Aww thats really sweet of youu. and yes. I am also happy that i realised my errors. and I was able to rectify it before it got TOO late.
M really glad that u brought back neil as +ve character n giving gunjan a chance to choose whom does she love.. by this gunjan will get know whom she actually loves but even samrat will learn that gunjan is here with him bcoz she loves her n not bcoz anyother damn reason... Yes Exactly. The main thing is to satisfy Samrat now. He has been there all along when Gunjan needed him.. now its Gunjans turn to be there for him!
A hug for giving this turn to d story n making it PERFECT🤗 Thank youu so much for such an encouraging comment 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: aashizin

manjiii 🤗🤗i wanna hug u tight for this outstanding and superb update standing ovation for this update the way u handled whole update 👏loved the way story got its high turn with this update 👍🏼 Thank youu sooo much Aashii.. I always wait for your comments! I love reading your POV and it actually helps me as I can see the whole story from someone elses prospective. So it becomes easier to write that way! (: starting with first scene new dawn and new feelings sajan feeling new with their closeness their new path of relationship their trust she wanted to be in his arms and he wanted her in his arms their new start of life as husband and wife loved the way u described gunjan asked him for movie no doubt he crushed his fate for busy schedule and more unknowing fact fate will test them again with hard phase of life which will again change their lives loved the way he tried to make her cheer with dinner thing their first official date and who knows destiny again will play with them with neil's return Well More than destiny, here you could blame me. If I wouldnt have shown neil as a negative character then maybe this FF would have just stayed an SS and would have gotten over ealier and like I already mentioned that I am not a perfect writer so obviously I made a mistake! :) But yes. It could be difficult for Gunjan but at the end its her choice. She would have had to choose anyway. Whether she wanted to forget her past or not. Well everything happens for good so I hope neil's return will help this story to move ahead.

i loved the way neil confessed this time genuinely no doubt he had done wrong but as its said all is fair in love and war he did he was most prob felt betrayed with gunjan as without saying anything she got married to samrat yes her intention was clear not to hurt him and thats why she hided but it gave him more pain n it reached to height when he saw her with samrat and he played game and also he realized his fault But the case would have been different if Gunjan would have told neil. She would have had to choose there and then whom she wanted to be with. Samrat or Neil. And that time her decision wud have been Neil. Only If.. she had told him earlier. Imagine what Neil would have gone through when he came to know that his love had betrayed him. A person whom he loved so much. And then his mother passing away. It left him alone and angry. He must have hated Gunjan that time., here none is in fault but destiny played wicked game with them gunjan who only obeyed her bui's order as she always considered her mother who always thought best for gunjan and she respecting her choice she got married to samrat , in all this samrat became part of this destiny's game though he was most innocent here not knowing anything only loving gunjan his love for her love at first sight ,I have always loved Samrat alot. Thats why he is always the best char in all my ffs! ❤️ 🤣 Samrat is just samrat. I can never make him a negative one. He just has to be there as the HERO! ❤️ Hahah. Where do you get Men like Samrat (in MMFIL) nowadays. A person who loves unconditionally. irrevocably! 🤗 I just love him sooo much! he was always alone after his parent's death but gunjan came in his life becoming one ray of hope but his life shattered and he got his life's first heartbreak with gunjan's truth though he always supported her with his unconditional love for her and after all that hurdle she also felt his heart his care and may be his love she is not aware it was Love now as gunjan started feeling new with him feeling his love neil came back now it will be interesting what will gunjan do how gunjan will realize samrat's love as now gujan has to decide to choose her love , neil whom she loved and samrat who gave her unconditional love and once again thanks a tone sweetheart for this awesomest update i read it twice 😳🤗

The main story is still left. 20 parts and I havent come to the point yet! Make Me fall In Love. Uff. But now I know exactly how to start and how to end so wish me best of luck because now the updates are just gonna be flowing in! I am going to finish this FF in speed. Give me one month and this FF will be over! Now with my school started I dont get much time but I am still trying to write as much as possible!

ok i tried my level best to make siggy good way i hope it turned good 😆

Originally posted by: Ayesha_LuvSaJan

Aww! Manjari congratz on your second thread! 🤗
aww! I loved morning scene! 😍
What the hell Neil is back..😡 jab sab kuch thek hogaya toh why he came back? but yeah your right Gunjan will realise her love for Samrat because of Neil..
Continue soon!
Can't wait to read more!
Love 🤗
Ayesha

Originally posted by: ar_sajan4evr

heyyy manjiii *hugsss* Hi Richaa 🤗

sryyy 4 editing my cmnt sooo damn late...😳
i had sum pbms...:((((( Oh ? 😲 I was also very inactive on the forum..

firstly i vil thank u d lovely credit dat u gve meee...n dnt wryyy i vil keep on encouragng u to write as i lovvve ur ffs n ss n evn d os... Aww Thaaanks! I know you will always encourage me! And I am glad you love my ffs! Even I love them.. they actually help me to put down my feelings sometimes! (:
realyyy...jus loveee dem ol...<33333

n cmng to d update
jus lovvved it
thght neil came n spolied d entireee momnt dat was 2 take place..bt den d logic u gve after d update was sooo trueee 4m everybdy's pov
poor sam has 2 bear it oll..
it was for d 1st tym dat he thght he wud confess his feelings 2 gnjn...bt den..it was olll in vain
bt i was realyyy happy at d moment wen gnjn turned to neil n told him to do wat HER HUSBAND told him tooo... Aww.. Thank youu! Haha.. 🤣 I know Neil ruined it.. ROFL. Yeah. she loves samrat but doesnt know it! Silly girl 😆 But well when the tubelight will get an electric shock she will become just finee!😆😉 Just kidding ok! 🤣
waitnggg 4 d veryyy mch awaited scene now...😍

nwaz waitnggg to read ahead...
cont sooon
n
thnx 4 d pm Love Youuu!! 🤗

Originally posted by: sg-muskaan

heyyy Manji 🤗
dis part was Amazinggg
really loved d whole part
n as usual u wrote it so well.!
Umm neil seems 2 b like a negative character
bt story gng interesting way
do cont

love
muskaan

Originally posted by: fend

hey manji🤗
first of all congoo for ur new thread🥳
awesome update loved it 👏
loved sajan a lott so adorable😍
each n every scene potrayed soo well 👏
now sajan will realise their feeling for each other😳
hope neil is not negative😕
beautifully written keep it up👍🏼
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: sajanfan004

Hi Manu Di,

Wow! It was amazing!
Aww..Poor Samrat! He's right! *Nothing happens according to what one plans*😭

But I lovedd the way Gunji said * Neil, didn't you hear what my husband said? OUT*

Lol😆.. While Neil said all that I thought he was actually trying to put Gunjan in his trap!

Gosh! Everything would be perfect now but this NEIL came in the middle! But after reading that note of yours, You were right! And Anyway, I hope Gunjan realised her love now!

Now they wont be able to go for the movie also !

Overall, It was an excellent update!

And who said you dont write well? You write amazingly!

And thanks for the PM! And UPDATE THE PART SOON...I REALLY WANNA READ THEMMM!!

Continue the amazing word!!

Cyaa!

Originally posted by: SwaNia_1

Hey Manji ...it was the awesomest update ...loved it ...