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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it nadiya. my express nadiya is back loved it loved it the way u r updating now. sooo nice that maan is falling in love with geet unknowingly and also listening to geet now😉. ohhh maan found her parents. sooo good. hopefully they accept her.

pls update soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the last two updates! He found her family?! I can't wait for the meeting! Geet is going to fall in love with Maan even more! I hope Maan realizes that he loves Geet!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ... loved part 43

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
Edited by maaneetsangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates
loved them both loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
Con soon
thanks 4da PM
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part

maan is such devil, on the one hand he doesnt accept that he is in love and other hand keep bringing geet closer

very nice part

i think geet's parents will b happy by knowing geet, but when they'll get to know it they'll reject her and she'll feel sad and then agian mneett, but u'll fo something more intersting iknow

update soon

waitinggg

i hope maan confess soon, poor geet

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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful updates i hope geet's parents accept her and hopefully soon that maan will tell her that he loves her.

continue soon and pm me

keep up the good writing

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 44


Recap; Maan wants Geet to be close to him. Maan has tracked down Geet's parents in Kashmir.


Maaneet entered Kashmir. "Maan yaha kaun si business hain?"

"Chup bilkul chup sab raaste dimaag khaa diya mera, waha chale ge toh pata chal jai ga" Maan snapped his finger. Suddenly there car came to a halt. "Driver kiya hua?" asked Maan impatiently.

"Saabji ghari kharaab ho gai hain".

"Teek hain tum isse teek karwao aur Paara chanaar gao main ponch jaana, hum paidal chalte hain". Maan got out and Geet saw the view. "Maan kitni pyari jage hain, waise nahin iss ko janat ka tukra kehte".

"Teek hain Geet chalo jaldi".

"Maan aap choti choti baate kyon enjoy nahin karte" asked a concerned Geet. She went forward near the river that was flowing and boats going to there distination. She came close to Maan and began to sing.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wXDUsHPcfaU[/YOUTUBE]

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

Is pal mein jeevan saara

Sapnon ki hai duniya yehi

Meri aankhon se dekho zara

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

Is pal mein jeevan saara

Sapnon ki hai duniya yehi

Meri aankhon se dekho zara

Geet grabbed Maan's shirt and he grabbed her by the waist.

Gehra hua, phatne laga

Kohre chhate

Dekho chaaron taraf ab noor hai jannat ka

Geet dreamingly began to dance.

Ujli zameen, neela gagan

Paani pe behta shikara

Sapnon ki hai duniya yehi

Teri aankhon se maine dekha

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

Geet began picking flowers and gave them to Maan. He smiled at her being so happy.

Aasha ke par lage, panchhi banke main uddi

Jinki thi aarzoo, un raahon se main judi

Kuch paa gayi, kuch kho gaya

Jaane mujhe kya ho gaya

Jaagi jaagi soyi soyi, rehti hoon khoyi khoyi

Meri bekaraari koi jaane na, jaane na

Rut hai deewani badi, chhede mujhe ghadi ghadi

Aise mein anadi dil maane na, maane na

Maan pulled Geet close and began singing

Sapnon ki hai duniya yehi

Teri aankhon se maine dekha

Geet fell in his embrace.

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

Maan began chasing Geet and he hugged Geet from the back.

Mausam ka ho gaya, jaane kaisa yeh asar

Chehre se ab tere, hatati nahin meri nazar

Koi kahin na paas hai, bas pyaar ka ehsaas hai

Khushboo ka jhonka aaye, humein mehka ke jaaye

Humko na kuch bhi khabar hai, khabar hai

Door shehnai baji, yaadon ki dulhan saji

Seene pe tumhare mera sar hai, sar hai

Both are lost in the moment and Geet hugs Maan while his head is on her chest.

Sapnon ki hai duniya yehi

Meri aankhon se dekho zara

Rain drops begin to drop. Maaneet look hot in the wet look.

Gehra hua, phatne laga

Kohre chhate

Dekho chaaron taraf ab noor hai jannat ka

Maan hugs Geet. While Geet sings in his arms.

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

Is pal mein jeevan saara

Maan breaks the hug and looks lovingly in her eyes.

Sapnon ki hai duniya yehi

Teri aankhon se maine dekha

Both are closing in.

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

Maan pulls her in his strong arms.

Teri aankhon se maine dekha

Chupke se sun

Teri aankhon se maine dekha

Geet surrenders and rests her head on her shoulders and both are satisfied in their embrace.

Chupke se sun, is pal ki dhun

For a good 20 minutes they remain in their hug. Suddenly a cockerel sounds. They are startled and break their hug. Both move away awkwardly.

"Geet chale?" Geet nods her head. They enter the village and see all very religious Muslim people. He asks for her parents address. A young boy guides them. They enter the house and Maan talks.

"Jim era naam Maan Singh Khurana hain aur ye Assia hain". They all looked puzzled. He continues "Aapki beti jo aaj se 17 saal pehle kidnap ho gai ti". Geet looked shocked. She felt numb. She looked at the old couple. These were her parents. "Beta wo baat toh teek hain lekin hume kaise pata chale ke waqiya hi ye humari beti hain".

Maan took Geet near them "Ye taweez aapne apni beti ko pehnaya ta na?". Her parents recognised it straight away. "Humari beti Geet..." . They looked emotional. Suddenly the father turned around. "Nahin ye humari beti nahin ye aik tawaif hain, chale jao yaha se".

Geet began sobbing hearing her parents not wanting to even give her a hug. "Aunty Ji Uncle Ji iss main Geet ki koi galti nahin hain toh pir aap isse kyon saza de rahe hain? Aur waise bi Geet ki shaadi mujse hui hain aur hum khaandaani log hain".

"Muje nahin pata magar humari yaha izzat hain aur main haat jorta hoon isse yaha se le jao".

Maan was shattered for Geet. Geet moved forward "Ammi muje aik baar gale laga lo main chali jao gi". Her mother felt helpless she had to obey her strict husband. She ran inside crying.

Geet once again walked like a broken egg shell. "I'm sorry Geet main tume surprise dena chahta ta".

"Koi baat nahin meri kismet hi kharaab hain jaha jaati hoon kcuh bi teek nahin hota".

"Aisa nahin hain Geet".

"Meri kismet main har kisi ki nafrat likhi hain koi mujse pyar nahin karta, kisi ko meri zaroorat nahin, iss se acha hain ke muje moth aa jai". Maan looked pained and grabbed Geet by the arms. "Muje tumari zaroorat hain, tum meri biwi ho aur meri pasand bi". Geet took in his words trying to figure out what he meant. "Aur haan aaj ke baad humari dooriye ahista ahista mit jai gi I promise". He took her in his arms to give her the hug her parents should have given her. "Aaj se main hi tumara sab kuch hoon samji aur marne ka sochna bi mat". She melted in his arms and cried till her tears dried up. "Ghar chale Geet?". Geet smiled and Maan walked hand in hand and made there way to Khurana constructions.

Precap; Maan tries to woo Geet.

Hit the like button and comments please.

Edited by Mahi-Maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superbbb,amazinggg,excellent yaar plzz update soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

thnx 4 giving back to back updates ...
Edited by maaneetsangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow great
doryia mit gaye gi?
ahem ..ahem...ahem
waiting 4 next

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