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Posted: 14 years ago
Wowowww... Wonderful update.. Maaneet's part ws out of d world.. Plz plz plz update soon dear.. Can't wait 2 read more.. Luv u n tc.. :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmm..tat ws an awesome n beautiful update
lovely n sensuous.
u r a magical writer anupam i must say!
ur story drifted me in the gaga land.lovely!superb!!
plz continue soon n thnks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello anu...
wassup..hows life goin on
one hell of an update...
geet getting obsessed with maan...😳
vicky and yash are cute hilarious duo...😆

i am waiting for their past to get revealed...
awesome update
keep writing sweetie
love u and ur ffs

reva

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhh!! I forgot rahul.. Rahul??? Seems strongly connected wid their past esp geet's.. Waiting 4 d mystery 2 be revealed...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet_09

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wohooo lonnggg update!! loved it to the core anupam 😊 n technically i am first to comment

the starting with yash n vicky encounter was really funny...😆 poor yash had a broken nose n legs bechara maan ke hathon se yeh halaat 🤣 i could sooo imagine maan doing this to him knockin him black an blue 😉 but poor guys they are sooo wrong abt their FBI investigation... vicky wake up its ur bhai 😉 mission bangaya fascination 🤣

bechara rohan bangaya bali ka bakra 😆 hmm maan ko pata chal gaya hai geet unke peeche padi hai... maan tumhe kuch kehna hai... geet ko door mat karo mujhe pata hai tum usse kitne pyaar karte ho 😳

dev-meera scene was shooo cutey-putey 😳

ab vicky ki nayi gf gayi... sweet little words "its over" 🤣 seriously woman ur humor amuses me 😊

pata hai i was sooo scared that u may not include any major maaneet scenes (i mean only them alone 😳) magar voh last scene haiii ☺️ umuah (this one is for maan 😉) love maan's concern for geet. in my words man's concern for his woman always makes him SEXYYY 😉



thnx for the lovely update!!! 🤗


oh madhu u r really sweet...loved ur colourful comment😊😊
yup I am planning a shocker for vicky about geet's fascination😉..😆...his little doll is falling for his hitler bhai would be the ultimate shocker for him😆

yeah I feel bad for rohan...poor guy...pari ke aage piche goomkar uska attention to milta nahi but bina kuch kiye unwanted attention mil gaya...😆😆

thanks for the compliment...no one has ever complimented me particularly for good humor😳

love u

anupam
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow sexy update Anupam...maza aaa gaya..i could actually imagine the funny sequence between yash n vicky.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved dis ff.
Its awesome
superb.
Such a lovely concept.
Wow!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

thud thusd thud...such a long update. ahhh luv u sooo much anu🤗


so geet is doing anything to catch a glimpse of him. ahh geet i understand u'r plight. i can do anything to read about him. 😆

chalo this whole charade of investigating freed vicky from that weirdo. 😃 so wait maan was watching them ...ahh i feel like i'm at a loss of words at this update. all i'm feel like is drooling, oogling at the words and sighing again n again. 😍

so i'm guessing whn maan first realized that he is in luv with geet, it was hard for him to contemplate his feelings. he is very soft and tender on this subject, everytime he thinks geet may b is going through the same stage. ❤️

ooh luv geet's jealousy..she shud have left from there. u go girl 👍🏼

yaar maan ki himmat to bahut berh rahi hai.😉 first he used to go to her room whn she wud b sleeping...nowadays his feet move on their own accord...and obviously only towards geet.😉

oh yeah oh yeah oh yeah me liking it...no me luving it..wait ..
me drooling on it, me adoring it , me going ga ga over it ...yummm 🤪
i've already maaneet's parts 3 times.


arzoo I think like geet u too fall too much as most of ur comments start with "thud"...😆😆
is it on purpose to grab jiju's attention like geet do for maan😉

u r at loss of words for the update and I for ur comment...u r amazing yaar...just enjoy ur comment so very much😛

well u r a bit near of the hint but still too far😉...I m not going to say more

maan ko himmat ki kami thi hi kab...😳😳

thanks dear for the lovely comment

love u

anupam

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

Awesome update
loved it loadz
Ughhh hates that Bimbo
pooor yash bechara got sooo hurt
LOL vicky and them thought it was Rohan
poor him
Awww realli loved their friendship
Thyy are sooo cute
Ohhh sooo maan know now
i think he knows that geet doesnt like anyone in the team
love whn maan goes she is the best
geet was sooo happi
bless her she is sooo innocent
Loved the last maaneet part
sooo cute
love whn maan was staring at her
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx


thanks for the wonderful comment
yup he knows her that much to guess her actions😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Anu,

Loved the Update dear.⭐️

Thnx a lot 😃 🤗

Many things were happening & that was fun

Geet keep asking question & Sam might nail the reason. it will be fun as she does not understand her feelings fully 😉

Vicky & Yash's planing & taking revange with one another was amusing

Geet feeling even jealous of her friends. Love changes many things😈

Yash & Vicky's guess 😆 & Vicky's break up turned in fun & Maan was watching them😍

Meera will be in trouble with Dev's friendship😵

Maan trying to penetrate to the truth in Geet's eyes🤪

Poor Rohan caught up with "imbecile" detective Vicky & Yash 🤣

Maan knew everything😆, now feeling even more bad 4 poor yash

Detective Vicky is off the case now. Maan which path u consider dangerous? are not u on the same path?

What's with Sam & Adi?

Maan is in fix😛. If he refuse, Geet will be heart broken & if accept then Adi teases him but I love that.

Again terrace scene was highlight😳😍❤️

Continue Soon

P.S: About the hint, I might be wrong but I think when Maan was thinking about what Geet is going through at the time & she does not understand depth of her feelings & actions.


saba thanks dear...I don't know what to say, U have said it all

the update is well defined in ur comment😳

well I just thought of pairing sam with adi as its quite different and they compliment each other well in my ff😛

well the hint was more than what u have guessed so keep pondering over it😉

thanks for lovely comment

love u

anupam


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