~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
love the part...
do continue...
loved the nature of geet...
egarly waiting for maan's entry...
but sameera kissing maan...
arrggghhh...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
louvly part...but waiting 4r maan entry..n huhhh sameera kiss...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
a big big big thanks to all the members here for reading and commenting on my post ...







thanks..alot..


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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
awesome start
love handa family so adorable
love it
waiting next part
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
nice concept...waiting for the next update..!!
plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
part 2

maan was dere in his excerise room ..practicing tai-chi ...

nakul enters and
says- maan sabh apko niche bade sahb ne nahte ke liye bulaya hai ...

maan - hmm..tum jao mai aata hun...

nakul leaves...after five minutes maan leaves for his room ..

he goes to the washroom..and freshens ..and comes out wearing a bathrobe ...
he goes to his closet and tooks out his clothes and wears dem ...after getting ready he moves downstairs ...while he was moving down the stairs ..a skateborad was kept dere ..maan didn't notice it and steps on it..and falls down very badly he starts massaging his back as it was hurt ... vicky maan's younger bro starts laughing loudly ...

maan- vicky ke baache ..yeh sabh tune kiya hai na ..ruk ja mai abhi btata hun ...
vicky runs from dere and goes and hides behind his father ..mann was trying to catch vicky...but he escapes from there...

mr.khurana-yeh kya ho raha hai...ruko tum dono abhi ka abhi...

mann-dad isne mjhe stairs se geriya sab iski galti hai

vicky-dad maine kuch nahi kiya...bhaiya apna aap use par chad gaya aur ghir gaye

mann and vicky both started there argument den
mr.khurana shouts nd says bus bahut hu stop it...table par jaakar betho...
vicky shows his toungue to maan ..and goes and sits on the table..maan also goes andd sits opposite to vicky ...
aftre 5 minutes mr. and mrs. khurana also arrives on the table and sits dere ...
mr . khurana - maan bete tum kounse colledge mai admisssion lena chahte ho ..mujje btao ..i will submit ur name dere ...

maann- ji dad mujhe XXYYZZ colledge mai admission chahiye ..mere baaki ke frends bhi issi ccolledge mai aa rhe hain. ...

mr.khurana- ok..

mrs. khurana - suna hai iss baar bhi best bussiness man award of the year mr. handa ko mil rha hai ...

mr. khurana - tumne bilkul sahi kaha ..

mr. khurana - unki badi beti geet kafi samajhdar hai ... top karti hai har class mai ... aur mr. handa khud hi etene hard working person hai ..mai toh khud unka fan hun...dekha jaye to mrs. handa ke jaane ke baad unhone apni dono betiyon ki dekhbhal badi acchi tarahki hai ...

mrs. hurana - hmm...

mr. khurana - accha bhai hum chalte hain ...aur han maan tumhara admission XXYYZZ coleedge mai ho jayega ...and tum shaitan vicky khabardar bhaiya ko aur pareshan kiya and after dis go and study ...
ok ..good bye everyone..

maan and vicky - bye dad ..

after some time ..maan got up from the table and moved towards his room..

while he was going his phone rang he picked it up immediately as it was sameera ..he attended the call and answered - hey baby ..how r u ..??

samerra- darling .i m missing u ..

maan- missing u too..

sameera - tumne apne dad se baat ki XXYYZZ colledge mai admission ke liye ...

maan - han sweet heart ..dad mann gaye ..and voh mera admisoon ussi coleedge mai krava rhe hain ..

sameera- alryt.. i m getting bore widout u ..??kahin chale

maan - ok..lets go on a long drive ..i will be dere to pick u in 15 minutes ...

sameera - ok bye ..

maan - bye...mmuuaahh ...!!!

maan cuts the call..

he reaches his room ... dresses up nycly ...
and moves out of the mansion ...

he sits in his car ..and drives off

he reaches sameera's house ..
sameera comes and sits in the car ..he comes and gives a tight kiss on maan's cheek ..
he doesn't like it ..
when dey were moving and sameera's was not looking towards maan he wiped off the place where sameera kissed him..
while maan was driving sameera places his head on maan's shoulder and holds one of her hand tightly...

on the other side...

geet comes and sits in the cafe ..
he waits for 5 minutes and den arohi comes..
geet-kitni der laga di ..i was waiting for u ...

arohi-aree yaar thod weak feel kar rhi thi...phir maine medicine li isliye late ho gaye ...

geet - abhi tu thik hai na ..

arohi - han han ..baba...bikul thik hun ...

geet - accha sun ..hummein bohot taiyariyan karni hai NGO ke liye..

den a
waiter comes and says - mam would u like to order some thing..
geet - yup..bring 2 cold cofee...

waiter - thank u mam ...

preacp - maan and sameera at maan's farm house ...and a candle lut dineer
arjun's entry ..

plz...do comment gyz...
i m waiting for ur comments...

and dekha jaye toh sameera ki insult ho gaye when maan wiped off his cheek where sameera kissed
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
good attempt really
liking the way u r moulding thestory
want o see wht ll happen next
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
loved this ff...
nice one...
loving this geet and the idea of NGO was also nice...
doesnt maan love sameera r wat y he didnt like her closeness...
can u pl add me to ur pm list...


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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
Really Nice...
LIKED IT A LOT ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
LUVED IT ...
WAITING FOR NEXT ...😊😊😊

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