~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar !! loved it !!!
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!shivika...
An AWesome update...
continue soon...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyy nice part!!
Maan saved geet!!
Continue soonnn.
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Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
REALLY AMAZING ...👏👏👏
READ BOTH D PART AT A TIME !!!
MIND BLOWING ... SUPERB ... AWESOME...
LUVED D WAY SAMEERA GOT INSULTED !!!
COME SOON...😃😃😃
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wow lovely ff.. plzz add me onto ur pm list... continue soon
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Both the parts were wonderful!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!
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Originally posted by: swetha10

wow lovely ff.. plzz add me onto ur pm list... continue soon


no problem dear ..i will add u into it ...
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PARt 11

maan - aur arohi ko bolna geet ke change karne ke liye kuch kapde lekar aaye ...
saying dis he hanged up the call..


and looked towards geet ...he can still see trails of tears on her cheeks...
it was paining him inside to see tears in her eyes ...
he wanted to finish off everything dat brings tears in her eyes ...
den he noticed she was sleeping ...and her head was moving little bit becoz of the speed of the car and it was about to bang the window ...when maan slowed the speed of the car ... and made her head rested on his shoulder ..so dat she did not wake up...
after 15 minutes dey reached arohi's house ...
arohi and arjun have already reached dere ..
dey came out listening the horn of the car ..
maan moved out of the car ...
went towards the passenger seat ..
he opened the door ...removed the seat belt ...
and picked up her in his arms...
geet was fst asleep..
arohi and arjun got shocked seeing geet's condition ...
arohi led him to the guest room...and made her lay on the bed...

maan - arohi tum geet ke kapde badal do ..
me and arjun r waiting outside ..okay...and den i will explain u ...

arohi nooded ..
maan left the room..
arohi closed the door...
took out her nyt suit from her bag ...and changed her clothes...
she took out a napkin and wiped of the kajal trails from her face ...
she could clearly understand something bad happened wid geet and maan saved her .. he was actually her saviour ...
her angel...
her farishta ...
after changing her clothes...
she made her lie and coverd her wid the duvet ...
she switched off the lamps...
and made her way out of the room..
after exiting from the room...
she found arjun and maan walking here and dere restlessly..

when she came out arjun said - kaisi hai voh...

arohi - voh ab thik hai ...

arjun - maan kahan mili tumhe geet ...

arohi continued - aur uski saree bhi fati hui hai ...

maan explained dem eveything wat happened wid her and how he saved her ...

arohi - mujhe lagta hai ab humme dia ko bta dena chahiye ki humme geet mil gaye hai ..
voh be matlab pareshan ho rhi hogi ...


arohi called dia and told her dat geet will be living till tomorrow wid her ...
and told her not to worry about her ...
after saying dis she hanged up the call ...

she turned towards maan and said - thanks jo aa tumne geet ke liye kiya ...

maan - isme thanks ki baat nhi hai ...meri jagah koi bhi hota toh voh bhi karta ...
ok i will take a leave ...dhyan rakhna geet ka...bye..

saying dis he leaves and moves towards his house..
he reaches his house and moves to his room ...
he changes his dress and lays on his bed..
thinking about the today's incident ..
thnking it ...his eyes filled wid tears ...
thinking about it he drifted off to sleep ...
on the other hand ..
arohi and arjun also sleeps ...

next day ...
maan got up early ...so he can reach arohi's house on tym...
he moves to the washroom... and takes a shower ..and gets ready

arohi gets up ... she knew when geet will be up..her mood will be bad ..and dey have to cheer her up...
arohi gets rady ...
denshe goes and wakes up arjun and tells him to get ready before geet wakes up...
he goes to take a shower ...

geet also gets up..
she gets up..
prays to babaji ...to make her day gud..
den she move out of the bed ...
she realises dat it was not her bedroom...
she takes her dupaata ...
and moves out of the edroom..
she moves out of the room...
and sees arohi , arjun , andmaan sitting having tea and coffee...

arohi sees her ..and says - aree geet tum uth gaye aao na ....
arohi pulls her and makes her sit on the sofa ...
all of dem notices dat her mode is off...
she is not in her chirpy mood...
maan wid his eyes assures dem ...he will do something ..

maan - accha geet tumne kuch socha ...arjun arohi ke shadi ke liye mandir mai kounsa theme thik rahega ..

geet said - nhi maine kuch nhi socha ...

maan - tumhare mood se toh lagta hai u r not interested ...

geet - nhi aesa nhi hai ...

maan - arjun tum iss pagal ko apni shadi ke preparations ki duty mat do ..tum chinta mat karo sab kaam mai karlinga ...akhir mere dost ki shadi hai ..
dis was enough to turn on geet ...

geet - haw ...!!!!! yeh sirf tumahre dost ki shadi nhi hai ..mere dost ki shadi bhi hai... mai bhi help karungi ...

arohi - accha accha thik hai tum dono mat lado...aaj tum dono jaakar cards dekh lena ...aur mai aur arjun thodi jewelry shopping karenge ...

geet and maan together said - ok...

arohi - geet tum jaldi jao taiyar hokar aa jao ..

geet - mai abhi aayi...aur khabardar tumne mere bina ya mujhse consult kiye bina koi bhi decision liya ...(says to maan )

maan - han thik hai thik hai ..tum jao jaldi taiyar hokar aao ..agar late kiya ..toh mai akela chala jaungi cards selcet karne ..

geet - nhi tum kahin nhi jaoge ...

geet goes and locks the main door properly so dat no one can go outside ...
arohi rolls her eyes ...
geet goes to her room..to get ready ..
after geet leaves towards her washroom..

maan and arjun hi-fys each other ...as dey were able to bring the old geet back ...

PRECAP - cards selection... , jewelry shoping...

plz..do comment gyz...!!! love u alot...
~~ shivika ...
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wow geet back to normal !!!
i loved it !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovee the part!
Maan is sweet!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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