~*~ PYAAR KA EK NAGHMA ~*~ MG ff ...COMplETED .!!! - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

wow idnt know u were updating...

can u pl mention in the ff title that u r updating...
its very interesting...
well maan caring for geet and falling for her and wanna prove himself for her...
well her father didnt believe her...
yeh sam ussey toh hate her...
pl cont soon


yup..
for sure i will mention in the title ... dat i m updating...
i hate sam alot..
uski insult toh acchi wali hogi yahan par ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

thanks for liking my FF..
i hope i will be able to do upto ur expectations...
savie_ thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
gyz...!!!
i m going to a water park tomoorow..
so may be update late at nyt or on monday not sure about it ...

and from 4th july..
my school is starting ...
toh pata nhi may be 3-4 days me one update ..
my examz r coming in 2 months ..
bohot preparation karni hai ...
so ...
i hope u understand me ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...maan managed to divert her attention
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part
love it
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW !!! Really Nice 👏👏👏
Truly MAAN is GEET's ANGEL ...
Her SAVIOUR !!!! HMMM DREAMY 😍😍😍
Luved d way MAAN cheer up GEET ...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Both Going For card selection ...
Eagerly Waiting For Next ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 12

after geet gets ready ...
maan and geet moves for deir card selection...
while arjun and arohi goes for deir jewwlery shopping ...

jewleery shop ...
arjun and arohi entered the shop...

arohi - arjun yeh shop eteni khali kyun hai ...

arjun - maine poori shop book kara li...
tumhe jo chahiye u can have dat ..no one will disturb us
abd deb the emplyess came and
were greeted by dem...

manager - gud morning mr arjun and miss arohi ..nyc to listen dat u both r getting married ...

arohi - thank u
arjun passed him a warm smile...

manager - toh aap kya dekhna chahte ho ...

arjun - hmm...can we see some engagement rings...

manager - ya sure ..come dis way ..
the manager shows dem many ..and finnaly arohi selected one ofdem ..

and arjun selected dis...

arjun - humme yeh dono chahiye ...

manager - ok...sir...anything else..

arjun - dat solve for now..we will come again tomoorow...
arjn and arohi leaves the shop ...

arohi - tumne aesa kyun kaha ki hum kal dubara ayenge ...

arjun - abhi hum tumhare liye bridal dress dikhne jaa rhe hai..den uski saath matching jeweelry ...
isliye ...

arohi - oh...!!!

on the other side ...
geet and maan were selecting cards ...

maan - yeh kaisa hai geet ..dis the best simple ..and wid royal look...

geet - nhi maan yeh zyada accha hai ..

maan - maine kaha na arjun ko yeh zyada pasand aayega ...

geet - tum sirf jiju ke bare mai mat socho... mai jaanti hun aru ko yehi pasand aayega ...
both of dem kept fighting on which card to choose..
dey were stuck between 2 cards ..


maan- ok...lets do one thing..
lunch tym ho gaya hai..
arohi and arjun ko kisi restaurant mai bulate hain..
and we wil decide it den ...

geet - ok..done..mai unhe call karke bolti hun..

maan - hm...
geet calls arohi..

geet - hello aru kahan ho tum..

arohi -- hum abhi jeweelry shop se nikale hain..kuch kaam tha kya ..

geet - hantu ek kaam kar ABC restaurant mai aa jaa..mai aur maan tera vahan par wait kar rhe hain...

arohi - aree par bta toh kaam kya hai

geet - tu pehle aa toh...hum wahin aa rhe hain..

arohi - ok..

arohi says arjun dat geet have called us to ABC restaurant ...
both of dem heads owards ABC restaurant...

geet - bol diya ..chaloh humme chalna chahiye ..
maan picks up both the cards ...as arohi and arjun will be selecting deir wedding card ...
maan and geet also heads towards ABC restaurant ...
maan and geet reaches the restauran 1st..
dey takes the table at the corner ...
after some tym..arohi and arjun also comes..
arjun sits wid maan while arohi wid geet ..

arohi - ab btao kya kaam tha ...

maan - aree hum btate hain..pehle aap log order do..mujhe bohot bhoook lagi hai ...i m starving man...

arjun - han chalo tum dono jaldi se order do..
geet and arohi gives the order ...

geet - hm...ab suniye ...
yeh rhe do cards ..aap dono ko inme se sabse zyada kounsa aacha laga ...

arohi - yeh accha hai ..(she chooses maan's fav. card)

arjun - nhi yeh zyada accha hai (he chooses geet's fav. card)

geet - mujhe yeh zyada psand aaya aur maan ko yeh...hum confuse ho gaye kounsaa zyada accha hai...

arohi - acche toh dono hai ...

arjun- toh ek kaam karte hain..kuch guests ko yeh card bhejte hain aur kuch ko yeh ...

geet - han yeh sahi rahega ..

maan- i m satisfied ..

arohi also nooded...
den the waiter comes ..
all of dem haves deir lunch ..
after the lunch..

geet - jiju ..
dono cards kitne kitne print hone chahiye ...

arjun - maine toh socha tha ki wedding mandir mai hogi ..i dont want much croud... toh i guesss 50-50 will be enough ..

geet -ok..

arjun - accha suno ..mai aur arohi shopping ke liye jaa rhe hain ..toh tum cards ka order dekar vahin aa ja na ...

arohi - han yeh sahi rahega ...vaise bhi mujhe geet ki bohot help chaiye hogi ...

geet and maan - ok...
geet and maan leaves to give the order of the cards ...
while arjun and arohi leaves for deir wedding shooping ...


PRECAp - ...???


plz..plz..do comment gyz...!!
and srry for being late ...
love u alot
~~ shivika ...
Edited by shivikasavvy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
m first yipeee
Awesome n thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveee the part!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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