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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
one mystry man here and one in the show ... babaji save our Geet from the stalkers...

nice update..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Helo Hi, I am back with the next update
Next morning, Vicky walks into the office. All are busy in their work so he takes a round in the office and checks out on the girls when Adi comes and warns him that any type of flirting can make Maan angry. Vicky ruless him out saying Maan will be angry if he will know but who will tell him. Vicky looks at Adi and says he was just joking.

Adi informs Maneet about Vicky being in office and Maan calls him in his cabin.

Vicky: Hi bro. did you call me?
Maan: Yes. so you have decided to join the business.
Vicky: Dadimaa said that its high time I start helping you in business.
Geet: HELP Maan.

Geet burst in laughter but controls herself seeing Maan in serious mood.

Vicky: I mean dadimaa said its time to learn how to handle business.
Maan: Ok. spend some time, watch how things are going around, and we will see.
Vicky: I have already done all thiss. its just so simple.
Maan: Simple.

Maan takes a file and gives to Vicky to study. Priya walks in and is surprised to see Vicky in office.

Priya: Maan. you said we have some presentation today.
Maan: Yes but I gave that file to Vicky. He is gonna handle it now. You can just assist him in the project.
Priya looks at Geet who gives a helpless look
Priya: Ok

Vicky and Priya walk out of Maneet cabin. Geet asks Maan why he asked Priya to assist Vicky. Maan says he knew Vicky cant handle this project, but Priya can and though they have difference they have to learn to work together. Geet agrees.

Vicky: so ms. assistant do you what this Project is all about.
Priya: Yes and..

Priya starts to explain but Vicky ignores and gives the file to Priya.

Priya: We have to make the presentation and..
Vicky: You make the presentation and I will see how good you are to assist me.
Priya: But. you were supposed to
..

Vicky walks off and gets busy talk with the female employees. Priya looks at the time and starts working on the presentation.

In the evening, Priya is done with her presentation. Maan asks if they are ready with the presentation. Vicky comes and says they are ready with the presentation and smiles.

Maan: Good. so you will be giving the presentation today.
Vicky: Me. aahh..I have not done this before.
Maan: Do not worry. I will be there and its Geet and Priya's Project and they both know everything about it so nothing to get tensed about.
Vicky: Oh..sure
.

Vicky is about to open the presentation file.

Maan: Lets go. we are getting late. we should not make cllients wait.
Vicky: NOW. I mean.

Priya hardly control her smile but is worried that Vicky has no idea about the project. Meeting starts and Maan signals Vicky to start the project. Vicky feels dizzy for a second and is lost what to say. Maan signals him to sit n signals Priya. Priya gives the presentation. Clients are pretty impressed and leave. Maneet along with Priya, Vicky, and Adi are left.

Priya and Geet go out leaving other three in the conference room.

Maan; What do you think you were doing?
Vicky: It was first time and and I got nervous.

Maan gets angry and holds Vicky by his collar. All the other 3 are shocked.

Maan: If you want to remain in office and at home get serious or else I will get serious about you. What do you think I did not see what you were doing when Priya was working on the presentation. I am the boss and I know who is doing what in this office. and once again I see you flirt with any girl in office. you will have to face the consequences.
Vicky: Sorry.

Maan pushes him and walks away. Adi tries to pacify shocked Vicky. Geet and Priya talking and Geet says Priya has improved a lot in her presentation. Priya thanks and says she has learnt it from Maan and Geet. Priya thinks she should tell Geet about what happened in store room, but thinks he should inform Maan rather. She sees Geet is busy talking to Adi and Pinky. She goes to talk to Maan.

Priya: Maan. I wanted to says something.
Maan looks at Priya who is pretty much disturbed and looking around.
Maan: Yes. Any problem?
Priya: actually yesterday.

They hear a knock on the door and Kunal Mehra walks in.

Kunal: Did I disturb you?
Maan: No. not at all.
Kunal: I came yesterday, I guess you were busy.
Maan: Yes. a bit.
Kunal: Sorry for coming without appointment.

Priya takes a leave from Maan and goes out of the room.

Maan: yes tell me Mr. Mehra.
Kunal: I have handled the guy who has sent the pictures and I am sorry for the humilitation caused becoz of me to you and your wife.
Maan: Its ok.

Kunal observes Maan is not so happy with the conversation and shifts topic to their project.

Priya thinks its better she talk to Maan later and remembers her promise to Surabhi. She lies to Geet that she is not feeling well so wants to visit a doctor and leaves to meet Surabhi. She looks at the card which Surabhi gave and goes there. She just shows the card there and gets a warm welcome.

Surabhi: Oh what a surprise. look who just walked in.
Priya: Hi Surabhi.

Priya walks towards Surabhi to hug her but Surabhi pushes her off.

Priya: I am sorry Surabhi. I could not talk to you properly in the office.

Surabhi: What do I say. You have completely changed. I wonder if you are the same I knew.
Priya: We have to change according to situations.
Surabhi: Ohh yes...so u even changed ur name.
Priya: hmm
Surabhi: May I know why?
Priya: To hide my identity.
Surabhi: What.
Priya: You know I belong to a royal family where ladies are suppossed to obey and do what they are supposed to or order by their elders no matter what their own wish is. Only thing matters is honor.
Surabhi: Yes n thats is what is more surprising. You was so silent in the college. Had very little friends and suddenly you are here in a pretty different avtar.
Priya: I ran away from my own marriage.

Surabhi is like what. She does not believe what she just heard.

Priya: I did not like that guy. He had very bad reputation, but my dad and bro never listened and I had to take this step.
Surabhi: You could have approached police or at least some friends.
Priya; Police. They will take me directly bacck to my family and friends, I dont want them to land into trouble becoz of me. I have changed my name and here no one knows me. Khuranas know Priya is not my real name but Geet has kept her trust in me whicch I will never break. I dont want my family to know I am here so I have not revealed the truth to anyone including khuranas as I dont want them in any trouble.
Surabhi: What next?
Priya: i do not know.
Surabhi: How does it feel being free. I mean being on your own?
Priya; Like a free bird.

Both spend time talking and priya leaves from there taking excuse.

Precap: Maneet shopping😛. Priya comes to know about Geet's stalker.

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Posted: 13 years ago
angel... u used my name😲
am phamous😆
nice update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow!priya comes to knw abt geet's stalker?waitng 4 next part.
Btw i just lovd the update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

woohooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!...we finaly know something about priya's identity🥳...oh wow she is from a royal family...and was going to be forced into marriage...and she ran away...awww poor girl has gone through so much...she even got hit in thehead by the stalker...and here come kunal again...i don't trust that guy for one second...😉...he he he vicky got a nice scare from maan👏...great job naz...keep it up!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

So Priya is not her real name.Its nice to know she dont want to create problem for maaneet.
I think Kunal is Geet's stalker..hmmm...I'll wait for u to update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
v nice update...👏precap is interesting...😃update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey naz... very interesting part... read d last 2 updates which I missed... reading this update I felt as if I'm reading sherlock holmes... lots of suspense... thank god u atleast opened priya's suspense at the end which I'm not at all expecting.. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part... want to know who the stalker is... update soon... 😃
Edited by saru.g - 13 years ago

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