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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Where did they end up? 😆 ☺️
But I still don't understand what Priya is upto.
Looking forward to next part. I wonder how the conversation will go between Maan and Geet...
Edited by rahmona_pakswe - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi all I am back with my next update
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Geet looks back at Maan angrily..

Geet: Maan...what are you doing here...
Maan: Geet...I should ask you this question..you said you want to go shopping n I find you here in such a party.
Geet: acchaa...I just wanted to give u a surprise..i didnt knew it is all gonna happen here..but u..u just walked into ladies night out . u danced with those ladies...n it was so visible that u were enjoying the party...u were doing that to tease me...isnt it...
Maan: Geet listen...I was concerned so followed u

Geet: I dont wanna listen...

Priya, the music band guy, and Vicky holding his clothes pulled off by the ladies approach Maneet n stop...the guy asks Priya for money she promised...Priya looks at Geet who looks at Maan...

Maan: What money??
Priya: I promised him to pay him if he switches off the lights...

Maan pays him and he goes off thinking what is gonna happen of the rest of their band...Mean while, Vicky goes aside and gets on his clothes.. He comes to Priya and thanks her...Vicky and Maan come face to face and are shocked...


Geet: Maan...this is the surprise I wanted to give to you..
Maan: Vicky...

Maan tries to talk but Vicky ignores..and starts to walk off..Maan blocks his way.

Maan: Vicky..dadimaa is missing u...lets go home
Vicky: I am not coming home..
Geet: Vicky ..dont be stubburn...at least u meet her once...
Vicky: I am never gonna come to that house again...

Vicky tries to leave..but Maan holds him...Vicky tries to set himself loose but Maan tightens his grip and drags him to the car..

Maan: I promised dadimaa that I will bring u back to her.
Vicky: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. u cant force me...I am not going with u..

Geet and Priya stand staring whats going on...Geet suddenly realises they are left behind and alerts Priya. Geet and Priya go and sit in the back seat of the car. Maan pushes Vicky in the front seat and gets into drivers seat and starts the car. Vicky starts shouting that he does not wanna go with Maan...Maan closes the car windows. Vicky starts pulling and throwing things in the car, pushing all the buttons, and making it hard for Maan to drive...Geet and Priya keep staring in between saving themselves from the things Vicky is throwing...Maan gets all angry and suddenly stops the car. He gets down and opens the door on vicky's side. Vicky gets off the car looking all victorious...Geet and Priya step down the car but stand near the car holding the open car doors on each side..

Vicky: I told u..I am not gonna come..you should have listened to me..but u dont listen to anyone...isnt it (taunting..)

Maan gives him angry looks. Vicky walks towards the way they just came thinking how he is gonna return..Maan walks to the back side of the car and opens the dicky...Priya signals Geet as if asking what Maan is doing..Geet shrugs as she does not know..

Maan: Vicky..

Vicky turns back. Maan holds him and lifts him off the ground and puts in the dicky as if throwing..Vicky gets shocked and before he can fightback..Maan closes the dicky and walks towards the drivers seat...Geet quickly sits in and pulls Priya in who is still shocked of what she just saw...Vicky keeps shouting in the dicky...n Maan starts the car, plays music with loud volume, n head towards Khurana Mansion

Security get scared of the speed with which Maan's car approaches the gate and open it quickly. They get amazed how come Maan is driving the car so rashly... Maan enters the KM and give a sudden break..which jerks 4 of them...Maan gets down and signals security to come
Maan: I dont want anyone to leave KM without my permission..
Guards; Ok
Guards look at Geet if Maan is talking in her regards, but she shrugs. Guards look at Priya who is like what...not me...n looks Geet..who smiles...Maan opens the dicky n Vicky comes out all sweating..Guards are like ohh...
Vicky: How dare u? I will take u to police. what u think of urself?...I too am Khurana n u cant just force me like this..
Maan does not even look at him but holds him by shoulder n drags him in. Dadi, Dev and Nano are sitting talking when dadi notices Maan bringing Vicky. Maan drags Vicky and leaves him before dadi almost pushing...Dadi gets all emotional and hugs Vicky. Vicky too gets all happy to meet dadi..
Dadi: where were u dear? I missed u so much...
Vicky: I missed u too dadi...I love u soo much...but I dont want to be in KM...
Dadi: Its ur house as much as ur brothers...u want to go away from me again?
Vicky: but dadi.
Dev interrupts and whispers in Vicky ears..
Dev: Do u think Maan bro is gonna give u another chance. you know his anger...if u walk out again now after he brought u in here...u might not get another chance..think before u act stubborn..
Vicky gets thoughtful...Geet and Nano ask Dev what he said..Dev smiles..and nods his heads as not to worry...
Vicky: ok dadi...I will stay back but only for u...
Precap: Geet: Maan what is strippling...Maan chokes..
I got a banner guess who is who😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update...loved it to the core
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fablous Update!
Brillant work dear!
Update soon <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update naz di.. thanx for the pm!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part dear continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Karan Wahi as Vicky???? That's awesome...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awsome prt,omg maan dragged n put poor vicky in dicky.msk kuch bhi kr sakta h
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha...🤣🤣🤣🤣
hillarious dpdate...
VICKY in DICKY... sounds cooolll...😃😃😃😃

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