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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Naz_Angel

stop getting scared...i am not gonna get deeper into thaat😛😛😛
ofcourse..s...what u thought ...after reading..y Priya was slapped😆😆😆

you are not going to reveal what happened in the elevator???????...i think geet slapped priya because she was worried...but that was pretty harsh!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: undisclosed

you are not going to reveal what happened in the elevator???????...i think geet slapped priya because she was worried...but that was pretty harsh!

yep..so harsh😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

.....dear...😛

...4 PM me...😃..
dear...in all updates...👏👏👏..
ur updates r n ......😳
4 ur ..👍🏼..
all ur updates...... really ...just ... n ...
... sorry 4 being late n short comment..but dear it's my exam plz forgive me......
tons of ...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
again i said that.....😃.
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only mae it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself my componets donn't coppied it...😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
such a sweet post Tama...best of luck for ur exams dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi friends
here I am with my next update...

Next morning, Priya wakes up and gets ready for office. She feels her face hurting badly and notices in mirror her face is swollen. She remembers Geet's slap and feels dizzy. She manages to reach the bed and sits all cold. Geet walks in. Priya notices but does turns her face to other side. Geet comes and sits beside her.

Geet: Sorry. Priya does not respond
Geet: I am really very sorry. I had no intentions to hurt you, but you know after you cried that night. I was so concerned about u.

Geet notices Priya's swollen face and tries to touch it, but Priya moves off. Geet feels bad...

Geet: Priya. if you dont speak out, how will I understand what you are thinking
Priya: No one ever slaped me before. Infact no one even spoke to me in high pitched voice. What I did that you did that to me.
Geet: I am sorry. You didnt return till midnight, I got concerned, scared, worried... n it just turned to anger as u didnt inform.
Priya: how do u expect me to inform u...am I carrying a phone...i dont have ur number either..i had no money...

Priya turns to Geet who is looking at her amused...

Geet: Are you angry...(claps her hands happily).chalo...thank you babaji...at least there is some expression on ur face...ok..I will pacify u later...now tell me where were u..

Priya looks back at Geet all shocked.

Geet: what..quick..tell me..

Priya blinks...still in shock with Geet's behavior..

Flashback of Priya returning home

Priya walks out of the office and starts walking how she can returns KM. She tries to take lift and a car with 2 guys offer her the lift..

Geet: You took lift from 2 known people that too guys..
Priya: there was reason behind that. One of them was Vicky.
Geet: Vicky. U saw him. U didnt tell him how much daadi maa is missing him...U should have called him.. U took his address..or at least his number...
Priya; Geettt...Priya interrupts Geet's marathon run

Car guy: Where r do u want us to drop u
Priya: which way u r going..
Guy: We are going for some party near Delhi heights

Priya: They dropped me somewhere..dont know where...but I just followed them to the party. I could not dare talk to Vicky...They were part of the music band which performed for the party..
Geet: Then...
Priya: Then...they left.
Geet: What...Priya..how can u do that...
Priya: Geet...am I supposed to do all this..I was going cranky there. waise bhi..it was not my job

Priya looks at Geet who is upset

Priya; I heard them talking about some party today

Geet: Ok..so we are gonna go meeet Lucky there..
Priya: What...what are u talking..We dont know whose party it is. what exactly is the party about...n on top of it...it is night party..
Geet: Take rest. n be ready...we are going
Priya; No..at least i am not going

Geet leaves...Priya walks in garden, takes her meds after food and goes to sleep...

Geet goes to office as usual with Maan. Maan notices her to be happy and asks the reason, but Geet just simply denies. After returning,

Geet: Maaannn...Shall we go shopping
Maan: Today????...we will go some other day dear
Geet: (thank u babaji..he said no...) No..i wanna go today. ok..i will go with Priya.
Maan: You forgot what u did ystd...
Geet: I remember. i even said sorry to her..so we r going...Maan tries to interrupts...but Geet just leaves to make sure Maan does not ask any more questions.

Geet comes to outhouse. Priya is awake but still dozing off because of medication effect
Geet; Lets go..
Priya; where..

Priya; Please Geet...dont do this..I dont wanna go..
Geet drags her off bed, forces her to dress up, and takes Priya with her.

Maan sees Geet n Priya leaving. he remembers Geet being happy all day n wishing to go shopping n decides to follow them.. Priya n Geet reach the venue n find it a open party exclusively for ladies n enter happily. Maan comes and tries to enter without noticing the board reading Ladies Night Out, but is interrupted.

The organiser notices security stopping Maan n comes out with her friend...
Organiser: who is this guy n why is trying to enter here..
Her friend: Wow...he is sooo hot..is he the surprise u were talking about..??.
Organiser: but thosse guys r already in..
Her friend; he might be with them...come on yaar..look at his muscles. ufff...
Organiseer: Hm...may be...she signals security to let him in..

Precap: Maan is surrounded by girls and Geet is shocked to see thatt...

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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG so priya met vicky... is she opposit to him??? maan followed his wife and was entering ladies night out thats too funny... ab maan ka kya hoga??? geet is not going to spare him... lovely update do continue soon... thanks for the pm
Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
GREAT YAAR...THNKS FOR PM😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome

precap sounds so interesting ...con. soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely...

yey priya is really a mystery queen...

paya nahi kahan se aayi n kya kar rahi hai...

maan surrounded by ladies...😲..geet will defo kill him..😆

dont tell me the that the ladies think he is some dancer or some for their enjoyment...🤣🤣

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fab prt,maan ki to khair nahi,mrs.msk not gonna leave u maan.cont soon n thnxs 4 pm

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