maaneet FF...Alwayz Mine... Part 16 ... pg 104 - Page 7

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superb update...thanks 4 da pm. wonder what happened to Geet? Update soon
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Part 4

She slowly opened her eyes. As her senses make her way back to her head her nose could pick sweet smell surrounding her. Her body was wrapped by another body and she opened her eyes at once and came face to face with kidnapping angel. She wanted to jump away from him but his arms held her firmly by waist.

She looked at his face and she doesn't know what force her to keep looking at him. He was sleeping just like innocent baby with faint smile on his lips. "Devil will take over his body as soon as he opens his eyes" she thought shaking her head.

Still she keep looking at his face and without any command from her brain her hand raise and she started stroking his face with her fingers. It moves from his cheeks to his jaw and it move on his stubble for moment and she liked the roughness under her skin. Her fingers then move from his stubble to his lips. She traced his lips gently with fingers. Strange desires to touch his lips with her lips woke inside her. She wanted to taste them, kiss them, lick them bite them. Memory of their first kiss play inside her mind and followed by how he kidnapped her. She shook her head and threw the indecent thought away. She was about to move her hand away when one hand from her waist moved and held it.

Maan slowly opened his eyes and they were filled with strange emotions she couldn't name.

He held her hand over his lips for few seconds and then kissed each finger tip of Geet's hand.

She felt current pass through her body and for a moment she felt something she couldn't give name to.

But no doubt she enjoyed the feeling. He slightly remove her hand form his lips but held it in his hand while his thumb was stroking the inside of her hand.

"Good morning Geet!" he greeted her with wide smile.

She kept looking at him but his next sentence reminded her of her up coming mission.

"Looked like my magic has started working on you"

Anger took over her and she pushed him away with all the power she have. She didn't realize that she pushed him so hard that next moment Maan was on the ground.

"I guess you got your answer!" she said to him. He started laughing and she ignored him and got of bed and went to bathroom.

She took long bath and got ready and when she came out hot breakfast was waiting for her.

She was very hungry that without waiting for anyone she attacked the food.

"It is still considered as bad manners when you don't share!" said Maan as he entered the room.

She smiled and honestly told him "I was very hungry!"

He smiled at her innocent reply and joined her in breakfast.

After the breakfast he looked at Geet and said "Geet I am going out for while, you can visit anywhere inside the house you want but main door is locked for your safety purpose, if you need anything press that red button on the wall maid will be there to help you"

Geet was shocked by his statement and she asked him without stopping her self "Maan aren't you going to lock me inside the room?"

Maan smiled at her question and came near her and cupped her face in his hands and said "Geet you are not my prisoner, you are my love, my life, my would be wife, how could how I lock the owner of house inside the room."

His words touched her heart and she thought of saying something nice in return.

"Thank you for last night!" she said and she meant every word as he was there for her when she needed him most.

He smiled and said "I will be always there for you when you needed me"

"Thank you doesn't mean I am staying here!" Geet said getting back to herself "enough of these emotional talks" she thought.

Maan give her challenging smile and said "You can try! It will keep you busy, but you can only leave this place when I want!"

She rolled her eyes and thought "he really thinks he could stop me, poor guy will be shock when he doesn't see me tonight"

Maan kissed forehead and said "I will be back soon, surprise me!"

Geet once again rolled her eyes and said "You will be surprised any way please be back by evening if I am still here."

He nodded and left the room.

"If he think he can stop me he is so wrong!" she thought to her self and then got busy in searching her way out.

As soon as he reached his headquarter he asked Adi to get all the information about Geet's mother.

After one hour when Maan was going through one file to another to see which case need their immediate action and which can wait Adi entered the room and gave Maan clipping of newspaper.

Maan read the news as horror struck him.

Piya Handa the great lawyer had been mercilessly murder last night. Piya Handa was tackling the rape case of Miss Nimi Patel, in this case many high up politicians were involved. Only witness to murder was her five year daughter Geet Handa. He husband was away on a business trip when this cruel incident happened. Geet Handa is under a shock and is not able to give details. The chief investigating officer state that "Mrs. Piya was killed last night and she was stab several time in stomach, there was no witness to murder except her daughter who is under shock and we are trying to find who was behind this murder." Let hope Mrs. Piya Handa culprit is caught soon.

Beneath the article was the picture of a couple holding three or four year baby girl.

"Did they ever found the murderer?" Maan asked Adi.

"No sir!" he replied.

"Fine! This is our priority case and I want all the information and result soon." Ordered Maan and Adi left the room.

Few minutes after Adi left Maan cell phone start ringing and when he answered the call he was surprised at hearing latest update about Geet.

"I will be there soon!" he said with smile.

to be continue...😊

Edited by somakazmi - 14 years ago
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nice part continue soon dear
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nice part...

maan really care for her...
who killed her mom?..

thanks for pm..
count soon..
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Awesome!!! aww poor geet... wonder wht she is goin to do.. continue soon

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