maaneet FF...Alwayz Mine... Part 16 ... pg 104 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! U explained what happened to Geet;s mom! Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanx 4 da pm
awsome update relii relii lykd it i wonda wa geet iz ga do nw plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the update...
this is the one of my fav in ur 4 ffs...
so geet is getting attracted towards maan...
but who is maan is he some secret service agent?
loving the challenge she poses to him...
lets c if geet found out the way out...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ... interesting ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...
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hello guyz... silent readers come out and please write whatever you want to say. all other readerz dont be kanjoos while writing ur comments and feedback... plz write whatever u feel while reading the story... i love to read what my reader think while they read... dont forget to press like button and comment...
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Part 5

After Maan left Geet started to work on her mission escape plan. She roamed inside the house to gather all the details. There was no phone or any other communication device in the sight. She observed that there is no watchman inside as well as outside house. There was not even single maid in sight for a moment she felt that she is roaming inside empty house. She walked to the window and notice that there was no single person outside no gardener, cook or sweeper. Looking through the window she realized that she is kept in very big house. House was surrounded large tree and main gate was not visible.

Escaping from this house seems like an easy task as there is no one to stop and even if some tries to she have a plan. As much as she came to know about Maan she is dam sure that he must had forbidden everyone to harm her.

She took the sharp knife out of kitchen drawer and instead of going down the window or breaking the front door lock she decided to leave reminder for Maan hence she walked to the glass door which open at pool side.

She picked the chair up and threw it at the glass door. As chair went through glass it created lots of ear shattering noise. Geet pulled out the knife incase someone came to stop her but even after five minuets not a single soul appear to stop her. She smiled and walked carefully through broken glass door and ran towards the main gate with huge smile on her face. Her smiled was wiped off her face as she heard the barks of dogs behind her.

She turned her face back and saw six large dogs were chasing her. Now she understood what Maan meant about front door is locked for her safety purpose. She ran as fast as her feet could run.

Her heart was beating fast with fear and sweat has covered her forehead. She climbed the first tree that came in her sight. She climbed as fast as she could and settled herself on strong tree branch. Once she is settled her breathing and heart beat went back to their normal pattern. She looked down and saw that all six dogs were circling the tree. She had never seen dogs this big before, they were all grey, their tongue was hanging out of mouth and they were wiggling their tails.

She waited for someone to come and rescue her from this situation but no one appeared. She waited and waited and as time pass she got more mad over Maan.

It was really hard to balance herself on the branch of tree that long but she don't have any other option she can't climb down because of monstrous size dog.

After lots of times has passed when she saw Maan walking towards tree with I told you so smile on his lips. As he approach the tree all the dogs ran towards him and jumped over at him. He fell on the ground and dogs started licking him, he was stroking their fur and hugging them while laughing.

After Dogs and Maan reunion he called Jay who came and took all the dogs away.

Maan came under the tree and gave her winning smile then said "Don't tell me you were Jane of Tazan in your previous life."

"Ha ha ha very funny!" Geet said.

"Maan I am going to strangle you with my bare hand" informed Geet.

"For that you have to come down, are you coming down or I have to come up to get you down?" he asked her enjoying the scene.

"No! thank you! I can come down myself!" she shot back.

He smiled and folded his hand over his chest while watching her.

Geet slowly and carefully try to climb down. She was putting her steps carefully but accidentally she looked into Maan's eyes and she got so lost into them that she lost her grip and her foot slipped over tree trunk. She closed her eyes waited to hit the ground. She was ready to feel pain in her body but it never came instead very strong arms caught her before she hit the ground.

She held him firmly and waited for her heart beat to resume its normal pattern but that never happen because it started beating faster as he held her in his arms.

"Are you alright?" he asked her with concern leaking from each word. She nodded her head as she didn't trust her voice.

He took her inside and on the way she saw the glass door was just like before. There was not even scratch on it. She was amazed by the speed of repair. He took her to the room and made her sit on the bed.

"He held her face in his hands and said "Next time please try risk free way, I can't stand if something happen to you"

She just nodded after seeing so much love and care in his eyes. After that he left the room. In evening they had dinner together and then Maan went outside and Geet went to her room. She took long bath after she return back in her room turn on the T.V. while drying her hairs. She was thinking of her next plan to escape.

After rejecting several plans she got angry and went to window she opened it and was hit by shock. She saw Maan doing work out in open air. There was large punching bag in front of him and he was punching it. He was looking beautiful, desire to touch his body woke up in her. She so much wanted to go down right now and touch him, she wanted to see how his skin feel under her touch.

She was lost in her thoughts when Maan stopped his punching session and wipe his sweat over his head with back of his arm. It was when he looked up and saw Geet was checking him out.

When he saw he she turned and hit her head "What were you doing Geet?"

She ran once again in the bathroom and end up having second bath in same hour.

After second bath she came out, she put on the small black nighty. She was drying her hairs when she heard him entering inside the room. He locked the room. The towel in her hand fell on the floor. Her heart stopped beating and her breath refuse to move. She closed her eyes. He came near her and she could feel the heat of his body and knew he was standing right behind her.

After few seconds she felt his finger over her neck. Gently he moved her hairs aside and held her shoulders then kissed her neck. As soon as his lips touched her skin, she forgot everything around her. She doesn't even remember her own name. Only thing she remembered is that he touched her.

She then felt his one over her waist and other one slowly slide from her shoulder to her hand. His hand held her hand. He gently pulled her towards his chest. She rested her head over his chest waiting to be kissed again.

His mouth move near her ear and her whispered in her ear in his sexy husky voice "You are looking sexy!"

She opened her eyes at once and her mouth drop open at her own reaction. Her body has betrayed her. She recovered at once and said keeping nervousness out of her voice "I know I am sexy that's why you are drooling over me"

Maan was surprised by her sudden change. He is the only one who knew how hard it was for him to control when she was looking so desirable. She trusted him so much that was the only reason he stopped otherwise he would have thrown her on bed and show the world of pleasure she had never seen before.

She moved away from him and said "Stop drooling otherwise you will wet the floor"

He smiled at her and went to the bed. He start going through one of the important file of his new case. She got back to her pervious task that was drying her hair.

After she dried and combed her hair she went to the bed. She sat beside Maan and took file from his hand and put it at side table. She then held him and rested her head on his chest. He put his protective arms around her. She have no other option, she have to keep nightmare away and this is the only solution to her problem. She warned her body, heart, soul and brain to behave in his presence.

"Maan I am really sleepy?" she said to him.

Maan smiled and said "Geet can I ask you something?"

Geet nodded her head praying that he don't ask her anything regarding their last scene.

She looked in his eyes waiting for his question he try his best to keep straight face while asking his question.

"Geet how do you feel after your first failure?" he asked her.

She got irritated by his question and pushed him away. She got out of his arm and turned her face on other side.

He chuckled and took her back into his arms and said in her ears "Just use more creative way to escape next time"

She rested her head back over his chest and said "I will be out of here, I promise you Maan!"

He chuckled once again and wished her goodnight. She wished him back and closed her eyes as sleep overtook her.

to b continue...😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you every one for loving my ff... i really love to read your comments and views abt my ff please keep them coming... thank you once again 4 showing ur love...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update
luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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The concept is unique and Im loving the story right now 😃

I can so imagine Geet running for her life and climbing a tree 🤣

Please continue 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I lovve your style of writing!! its amazing!! thanks for the pm!

Aisha.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow
love your FF
awesome updates
please pm me..
wanna read more
and continue soon
thank u

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