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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey I just read all the parts to your FF and I think it's amazing
Really like the concept
Love maan's character
Continue soon
Looking forward to the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
okay ... Now i am confused that which ff of yours is better to say a awesome storyline?

Dev is a real ba***rd, brij is a real evil crook, MSK is a real confuse with great power and Geet is a real beauty with dare. These two are impossible. The best scene untill now in this ff was where Maan was really angry like wild thunder on those pigs. Other than this, i am running out of words as i have just finished reading your all ff updates and the stories were totally different & awesome that i have no new appreciation left for now.
Will be eagerly waiting for update of each ff.

Do cont soon & do PM me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi...thanks 4 da pm n wonderful update. U portrayed Maan;s ineer feelings n turmoil well. N geet's feelings as well. Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

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Posted: 14 years ago
hello all lovely people🤗... happi friendship day 2 all🤗... thank u every one for loving updates... guyz enjoy reading😉... give lots of comments😃... your feedback and suggestion are always welcome😳... hit the like button and silent reader plz come out of your silent mode😛... enjoy!!!!!!!!!😉

Part 9

Geet took her all clothes out which Maan brought other day and threw it all over the bed. It was really tough task for her to choose dress for their outing. First she never went out with a guy before second she never got chance to go out of castle walls and third she has no idea where Maan was taking her.

Al last she turn to only person in her sight and asked "Maan what should I wear?"

"I don't know your highness, put anything on and let's go!" he said grinding his teeth together.

"But I have no idea?" said Geet.

Maan rolled his eye ball and went near princess and picked first jeans and shirt that came in his hand and gave it to princess.

Geet looked at clothes and said making face "these are too plain!"

Maan threw the clothes on bed pick skirt and shirt and showed it to princess but she rejected it saying "Not comfortable!"

Maan pick another dress again rejected, princess almost rejected five dresses before she agree to wear black summer dress.

She took it from Maan hands and went to change she was about to close the closet door when she said with cute smile "Maan please put those clothes back in suit case!"

She closed the door after her sweet request and Maan was fuming with rage "What does she think I am her servant!" but he have no other option other than to bear her royal demands.

He was throwing her dress in the suit case when he heard her walking back in the room. She walked slowly towards him and waited beside him. He turned beside him and saw her standing she was looking so, his mind couldn't find right word to describe her so he just stick to beautiful. She hasn't applied even tiny bit of makeup yet she was looking more beautiful than all the girls he have seen in his whole.

"Where do you want to go princess?" he asked her.

She thought about a moment and then said "amusement park!"

"What? No way! It totally boring place!" he said while calling himself names in his head for asking princess where to go.

"It seems interesting! I have seen it on T.V." she said with curiosity.

"Your highness that place is for crazy people, I mean what's the point of going some where and have a ride just to scream your head off!" said Maan hoping that princess could get his point.

"Maan! I never got chance to go to such place before and I have no hope of going there in future this is my only chance and even if you say no then I will feel really bad!" she said with sad face.

He closed his eyes and asked his conscious not to effect by her emotion blackmail but his conscious was out of his control and Maan witness his lips saying "Ok let's go!"

He dragged his feet behind happy princess cursing himself but forgot everything when he saw innocent smile on her face.

They reached amusement park after half an hour due to have traffic. Once he parked the car and they went inside the park where moms were yelling at their small kids to be careful and young girls are giggling on jokes boys are showing off, couples are making out or impressing each other.

"Did you ever came here before?" she asked Maan as she held his hand so she doesn't get lost in crowd.

He smiled at her action and replied "Yes once! I have to arrest a bas***d and he entered inside the park while I was chasing him!"

"Did you catch him?" she asked with curiosity.

"Maan singh khurana never left his job incomplete!" he replied her.

"So you think you can take me back to palace?" she asked him.

"Offcorse! I will take you back to palace and that too with your will!" he replied back.

"You can take me back home the day my parents change their decision" said Geet.

Before Maan could say anything she looked at roller coaster and pulled him towards the ticket booth.

Maan bought two tickets and the got theirself settle in their seats all buckled up.

As soon as ride started Geet started screaming and till the end he mouth never closed for a moment.

Maan who was first irritated with princess scream want to shut her mouth. But when he saw her he couldn't control his laughter. He was laughing like mad when she was screaming like mad. He laughed till the end of ride. Once the roller coaster stopped Geet held his hand once again while walking. Her head was spinning and still he could stop laughing.

"What's so funny?" she asked him once her head got better.

"You know princess your husband won't need entertainment channel in palace with you around!" he said laughing while holding his belly.

She pushed him away and said "You are pain in butt!" then walked away he ran behind her and held her shoulder.

He wiped his tears that was flowing out due to laughing so hard and said while holding his ears "I am sorry but you were looking super cute while screaming!" I could hold myself.

Geet smile at his stupid action and excuse then pulled him towards the other side of the park.

Maan really enjoyed all the time in the park with princess, she is really different from another girls. The thing that attracted him most was her innocent. They went to house of mirrors, dark tunnel, water slide and all the rides in park from slow to fast at last they go target hitting stall and Maan won huge cute Garfield for Geet.

"What now?" he asked.

"I am hungry!" she said and her stomach growled as evidence.

He smiled and took her hand and guided her out of park.

They went to fast food restaurant as princess want to eat fast food. While eating Maan asked "If it's not too personal can you tell me why you ran away?"

Geet looked at Maan and she doesn't know what in his eyes convinced her that words started falling out of her mouth "I can't marry Dev! He is not loyal, he is cheating my family and me I saw him accidentally making out with one of maid in our library few nights before our engagement I ignore it but then I saw him again with other maid half naked in kitchen, since then I don't respect him how can I marry someone when I don't respect him?" she asked him.

"Did you loved him?" he asked he don't know why his heart was begging her to say no and his mind justified his heart action with excuse "That Dev is not nice guy so she shouldn't love him"

"No! I was only marrying him because of my family but when I saw Dev womanizer side I tried to talk to my grandma twice when she didn't understand me I have to take extreme action!" she told him and her answer left him in peace.

"Tell me about yourself?" she asked nibbling French fries.

"Oh I am under cover agent for last six years and worked on many cases!" he replied casually.

"Tell me about your family and girlfriend?" she asked.

Some part of her question raised pain in his eyes but he hide it well Geet notice. "I don't have family, they are dead and I don't have girl friend I just flirt sometimes for time pass and all the girl knew this!" he again replied casually.

She didn't want to say sorry for his family as his words show no sadness so she said "You are lucky, at least you are free!"

"Grass is always greener at the other side!" he said and took the sip of coke.

Geet don't want to talk more about him as this subject turn him bitter so she changed the topic and asked "Where are we going now?"

Her question did the trick and his mood changed at once "Since you choose amusement part this is my turn and we will go some where wild!" replied Maan.

"Lead the way!" she said with wide smile.

After twenty minutes drive Maan parked his car in parking lot of club named night life.

"Are you ready for wild time" he asked her with wide smile.

She replied back him with dazzling smile. He took her hand and guided her inside "Stay close to me!" he told her and she held his hand more tightly to assure him.

Geet was shocked to look see club filled with people this late. The dance floor was filled with people dancing senselessly on loud music.

He took her to the bar and shouted due to loud music "What do you want to drink?"

"Juice!" she shouted back.

He started laughing at her reply and ordered cocktail juice for her and vodka for himself. She took the glass of juice and took a sip and saw Maan laugh at her again. That irritated the princess and she took glass of vodka from his hand and drink it whole in one sip before he could come out of his shock.

Maan saw princess giving him wide toothy smile after finishing the glass. "Come on!" she pulled him to the dance floor.

She did some crazy dance steps and Maan was laughing at drunken princess.

After few minutes she rested her head over Maan's shoulder and then when few more minutes passed she raised her face covering her mouth and he understood that princess is about to throw up.

He took her hand and guided her towards the women washroom. He pushed her inside the washroom and waited outside. Several minutes had passed and princess still didn't come out and he was getting restless and tension started eating his head off. He forgot all his manners and went inside the bathroom. He saw several girls in the bathroom. Few were refreshing there makeup, one girl was sniffing white powder in the corner while her friends were smoking, one girl was in her underwears only as she putting her dress on. He ignored all the girls and towards the princess who's face was bend over basin and she was vomiting.

"Geet! are you ok?" he asked her as he put his hand over her shoulders.

She raised her dirty face and shook her head. Maan opened the tap and washed her face with water and then pulled tissue out off stand and dry her face.

"Are you ok?" he asked her again. She assured him with eyes and rested her head over his chest.

He put his arms around her back and he felt at peace which went missing few minutes ago.

"Maan in love is to see dream come true!" said voice from behind.

Maan turned and saw Sameera standing near the door.

"She is just job for me!" replied Maan.

"Maan I was your job too but I never got this treatment, I remember getting more sick than her" said Sameera pointing at Geet.

"Well she knows how to behave, and she don't try too seduce me after every hour" he shot back.

"Whatever Maan love is written all over your face no matter how much you deny!" said Sameera with smile.

"You have sight problem Sameera!" he said to her as he carried almost unconscious princess in his arm.

"For how many girls you went into women's bathroom, how dirty faces of girls you cleaned, how many girls you took in your arms with care, as far as I remember you didn't came near me whole after smelling my morning breath, you can deny as much as you want but you are in love with this girl" said Sameera.

Maan laughed at Sameera and walked out of bathroom and went towards exist.

Maan rested princess in passenger seat and was about to go when princess held his collar and said his name in sleep. He doesn't know what emotions filled him but his eyes filled with tears. He slowly moved her hand from his collar and went to driver seat.

They reached their room after twenty minutes and Maan carried unconscious princess to her bed.

He put her in the bed and covered her with comforter. He was about to leave when she held his arm and opened her eyes slowly.

"Maan thanks for entertaining me, you should really apply for the post of royal jester once we go back to palace!" she said with sweet smile over her lips then she closed her eyes.

Maan smiled at her silly suggestion and slowly pulled his arm from her grip and went towards the sofa and closed his eyes. He knew he had long night ahead because he had lots of thinking to do.

2 B continue...😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
that was SOOO CUTEEE!
i love their Maaneet moments!
goshhh cont soon please!!!
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow the outings were amazing and so were the subtle hints of their inclination towards each other...;)
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED this update
Their moments in th theme park was so cute
Even at the club it was so cute
Was sameera maan's past?
LMAO this cracked me up!! "as far as I remember you didn't came near me whole after smelling my morning breath" hahaha!
Awww Geet is so sweet n innocent :)
Can't wait for the next part!
Continue soon
O yeah happy friendship day to you too :D <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hapi friendship day 2 u 2 x

awsome update
relii relii cute luvd maneet
n poor sameera lol update soon x

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