FF M&G'KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI' pt24@120 31/1/2013 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part!! please update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
good that maan scolded sasha!
poor maan!...vicky kissing geet infront of maan!😆
continue sooN!
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏awesome update👏
loved it❤️
waiting for next part😊
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
this sasha spoiled our maaneet moment...
oh bechara maan gonna miss out the dinner with his geet...
cant wait for next...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago






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" KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI"

" PART 16 "


Both geet and vicky jump on there place geet did not know what hapened to maan why he is shouting .vicky smile with in as he look at maan fake fear in his face as really dont know why maan yell . Daadi maa also come running she think something hapened to vicky but the situation is nothing like that . Vicky hide behind geet and said " di please dekho na bro ko kitna ghusa aya he mujhy daant parry gi ab " Geet try to console vicky " kuch nahi hoga mein hun na " she whisper back

" to phir pucho na bro se why he is shouting at me i did not do anything wrong such " he is grining now he want dance and jump at maan's plight now the way he is trap

" maan kya ho gya he apko esy kio chila rahy hn ab vicky ne kya kiya he " Geet ask him little angry

" haan maan bety btaye na hum to darr hi gaye thy " dadi maa also ask in concern


" kuch nahi dadi maa mein to vicky se keh rha tha k ab chalein dinner k liye der ho rahi he " Both geet and daadi gasp n looking at each other in shock is they hearing is right vicly is so happy his plane work very well . He patted his shoulder and rise he collar in his thoughts

" AA haan bhai chalein u right der ho rahi he lakin 5mint wait kro mn abhi aya " vicky said with a huge grin and before geet could ask vicky he run inside Geet seeing both brothers in aaww she could not dijest the fect maan is going with them . She think vicky and she have fun togather but now maan is with them GOD knows what happen now . Infront of maan vicky also got some reserve wih her . Geet made a baby face and loked up (Baba ji ab kya ho ga iss se acha to mn ghar mn hi reh leti mujhy lag raha mn diner per nahi kisi school ja rahi hun) Maan see her looking up first he got confuse what she is doing he looked up there is nothing he roll his eyes he think he cant understand this girl . He clear his throat to gain her attention geet look at him and give him a slyly smile . Daadi left for her room and Both set in hall waiting for vicky geet avoiding maan . Not able meet gaze with him . But maan's eyes drinking her angelic beauty shamelessly he did not remove his eyes from her for a second . He is having a very hard time to controling his emotions he can still tast her creamy delicat skin . Her beautifull hazel eyes her soft butter like cheeks , her rosy lips he want to feel them . He slap his mind whos running this fast he took a deep breath to calm himself. Its going almost half an hour now but no sign of vicky .


vicky come after another 5minut all change geet look at him crusiely top to bottum he wink at maan and turn to geet before she could speak

" chalein di sorry ap ko waot krna parra " maan is not understanding vicky what he is upto now , Maan is sure something going fishy but what he shook his head and come with them at porch vicky open front door for geet and ask her in a very rumantice way to sit . Geet is confuse and scared sitting in front seat with maan she gulp her sliva and look at vicky he smile and indecate her to sit . he close door turn to other side geet see him going other side and ask him where he is going

" wo sorry actuly mn btana bhool gya k mera plan change ho gya he mn apny friends k saath movie dekhny ja raha hun " he turn wink at maan and left with his friends

geet's mouth droped open in shock what is this now she is going with maan that to alone . Maan who is standing outside understand vicky's plan he want to hug him tight what a plain trick he play with them . All his anger on vicky just vanished in air he recieve a msg from vicky

" GOOD LUCK BRO " Maan grin when he saw msg now its his turn to make his surpresi date in a rumantic one . Maan make few calls and sit in car where geet is waiting him with a foul mood . Her eyes are close but anger viseble on her face her cheeks r red now with anger and she did not notce maan . Maan patted her shoulder she jump in fear but when she see maan she leaned back to her seat

" Chalein geet " maan ask with a normal tone " hmmm " she responce meekly as she did not want to go but now she has to ,

Maan is enjoying geet restlesnes he look at her with corner off eyes when geet turn her face towards him he look straight on road . Because of this she get more angery she turn toward maan talk to him thats when she notice first time maan she look at him top to bottom he is looking dashing , Hot , handsome and whats not , He wore a black armaani suit and the clogone he use always took her sense away she forgot the world with his scent there is always something else when ever thy both r alone its just like that world is not exist anymore for them . Maan having a very hard time with geet contineu drooling over him . He try hard not to get effect with her gaze on him but she always has an effect on him . His harmons getting wild with her she is his sducssing angel who should not have to do any affort to sedusse him he already loos his control over himself when he is with her . Maan dont know what to do now he is loosing his concentration on road he is waiting for her to return her gaze back but she is lost in him having no choice at least he speak .

" geet agr mujhy check out kr liya he to mn drive kru " geet who lost in maan come out of her world . she is already not in her mood and maan's comment work as a feul on fire she twist her lips " to kro na mn ne koi app k haath pakry huwy hn " she turn her face to other side and murmer under her breath "sarru " but it is loud enough for maan to hear this . Maan look at him in a shock no one dare to speak to him like this and she is caling him with names when he is exrta polite and carring for her . He stop car with a jerk and turn to her .

"geet i am not a sarru " he said with a angry irritate tone . Geet jump on her seat she did not think he can hear her but now first she is going to say sorry to him but when she remember where is she become more angry

" yes u are a sarru " Maan got more angry but then he notice geet never talk to him like this . She is a new geet who retort back this thing he missing throu out the time he try little more to bring real geet out that is hiding behind this

no i am not a sarru " he said with same tone

" yes u r or mujhy ap k saath kahein nahi jana" she make a cute frowning face and open the door and step out of car . She stand there with arm cross on her chest and she turn her face other side . Maan look at her in shock as she got more angry he also come out

"Geet how u can say that ab mn ne kya kiya he"

" app ne kya kiya ye pucho kya nahi kiya " she snorted

" lakin geet kuch btao to i dont know anything " he is enjoying her little cute fight

" acha to apko ye b yaad nahi " she get more angry when maan nod in no

"app ki waja se vicky humaary saath dinner per nahi aya " Maan roll his eyes and think meri waja " hum ne kitna plan kiya tha k fun krein gy but dekha wo movie chla gya or mn yahaan bore ho rahi hun " Maan got another shock " tm yahaan bore ho rahi ho mery saath "

" haan to or kya last half an hour se hum saath hn lakin ap ne koi baat nahi ki esy lag raha he k mn dinner k liye nahi sachool ja rahi hun " maan looking at her with mouth half open in shock and he is amuse this really a new geet . Thet is hiding behind that scared and sad geet and he is loving her more her every gasture is so cute when she got angry her frowning face and then complaining like a little kid , her comments on him the way she call him sarru with her sweet voice OH GOD how much he is loving her he want to love her hug her crush her in his strong arms . He is smiling at her , loving her Maan did not listen any word of her that she is speaking . Geet turn to him in full anger but find him smiling " ay lo mn inko baatein suna rahi hun or ye yahaan khary muskra rahy hn " she poke on his shoulder maan look at her " app sun rahy ho jo mn ne kehaa " but instead of answering her he put his arm around her slim waist and bring her more close to him there s a smile on his face , geet is dumb stuck with sudden change in maan and her position " maaan ye ap kya kr rahy ho " geet is fumbling now maan strong arm around her waist and her heart beat is rising dont know what to say geet rest her hand on his toned chest and look in to his eyes that is full of love .

Their eyes met they both lost in each other . its just like they both r in this world no one else .

PRECAP :- maaneet on date 😉

sorry sorry i know i am too late but please please forgive me😊
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it give me energy to write more and more


Edited by love4all - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,

Wonderful ff.
Please add me to ur pm list
and please update soon...waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guess what?
I thought there were only nine chapters...cus on first page it only had links to 9 chapters...
but now i know u have 16 chapters
loved them all
thank u so much
vicky the cupid...and dadi too to a certain extent...

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOVED IT 👏

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago

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