Jisha FF ADDICTED 2 U-Final Update 5 Oct pg 106 - Page 57

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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update aysha 👏👏 really liked the pia-maithli convo and I am sure abhay will reach Pia on time as usual 😉
Jisha was simply rocking --- they just set everything on fire ... 😉
It was just like a dream , the anger , the abuses , the confusion , the passion and the kiss under the moon ...you have written it so beautifully that I can actually visualize its happening 👏😛😛
you are such an amazing writer yaar 👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

hey ayesha😃

awesome update dear👏👏👏👏👏...omg hope pia is fine n hope that abhay will save her in time...thnk god alina decided to help abhay in finding pia...jay shdnot hav done that to misha...now i think misha will hate jay more...hope they come around soon...plz update soonhav a nice dayluv usunita
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice...update plz cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
:::Precap 17:::Me against U:::

Pia ran as fast as she could run from Maithali. From past memory she could remember how demented she was over Abhay. The vampire wanted nothing but revenge and she wanted to cllect the ultimate prize. Abhay was wanted by her but Pia couldn't let her take him away from her. Pia didn't know how to function without Abhay even with or without her memory. Abhay was tattooed in her HEART, SOUL, BODY, MIND. He resided in every breath she took and if Maithali or anyt other woman took him away from her then she didn't know how she could go on living.

If she died Pia would rather it be fighting. Vampires were prone to getting their prey and Maithali was going to make her suffer for keeping Abhay away from her and for ruining her plans. Pia could only frantically call for Abhay in her mind. Pia just wanted one last time to say she loved him and forgave him. Abhay was all she could think about. Pia prayed Maithali didn't get to him.

Misha was still under Jay's spell. He had painted her brain with a fresh dose of sensuality she hadn't known existed in her. Misha wasn't even Misha right now. She wasn't sure what Misha was feeling because the feelings were so abnormal. They were too much for her. Misha could feel the heat of Jeh burning through he skin. His lips were still tingling on hers. Misha had forgotten everything. All that remained was the here and now. Jeh was all she could feel in every fibre of her being.
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Posted: 14 years ago

:::UPDATE 17:::U against ME:::

Pia was cornered into the walls caving in on her with nowhere to run. Well if she was going to die she might as well go in fashion out with a bang. There was no way Maithali was going to take Abhay away from her. And if she did then it was a good job she wasn't going to be around to see it happen. Did Abhay even love her like she'd remembered he had in the past? In her heart she knew he did but why did he keep himself away from her for all this time? Was he punishing her for listening to Sid? For not trusting him enough or for just being the unbearable stalker girlfriend who he'd gotten fed up of? All he questions and only one person to fill in the blanks. Abhay. Pia wished so bad that she could understand what was going on. Abhay had protected her every step of the way. Surely he still loved her. Pia had faith he did but Maithali had a way of twisting her mind. Pia armed herself with a wooden chairs leg she broke against the wall making sure the sharp end was pointing the right way.

Maithali sped through baring her razor sharp teeth-got U! Booo!!!!!!! U are still as predictable as ever. I have no idea what Abhay ever saw in U. Oh yes me! He sure has bad taste when it comes to choosing someone with a personality. U are as bland a they come. U have no backbone. U can't make a man beg for mercy like i can. I had Abhay in every way possible Pia while U have only had him in his heart.
Pia felt her heart being stabbed by Maithali's vicious declarations-What's stopping U from getting him back?
Maithali gritted her teeth-U! But now its not an issue.

Alina came in with her powers in full blown use. She was going to make a sweep of this area so she could find Pia. Abhay's link to Pia was so strong it was uncanny not to trace his presence on her. Alina concentrated really hard.

Abhay could only stare and whisper-Alina are U OK?
Alina hushed Abhay and creased her forehead showing her full attention was in finding Pia-Show me Pia? Light the way! Light the way! Show me Pia. Show me Pia!

The lights came on showing Pia's footprints on the ground-There Abhay! MAITHALI has her! U see the residue there shows black dust. Vampire decay. Its a females and it matches Pia.s
Abhay frowned-Pia was right. The lady in red i should have known.
Alina patted Abhay's shoulders-U weren't to know Abhay. Maithali has been following U and Pia for some time and now she has her theres no stopping her Abhay. U have to act fast.
Abhay quizzed-How do U know its Maithali?
Alina grew dark-Pia and Maithali are one Abhay. They are two parts of the same coin. Its a long story and i'm not in the mood to explain ok. (Alina was a little heartbroken her first crush turned into dust so fast. Just her luck. The first guy she showed ineterst to turned out to be a vampire and in love with a human.) Just go save your girl ok.

Abhay whizzed through to Pia's rescue with Alina.

Jeh had helped Misha find her way through the woods looking at the footprints set a light-Misha we have to follow this path.
Misha mused shaking her hair to one side-Why? (Feeling a little lightheaded now. She was still thinking about the earth shaking kiss she'd had with Jeh) How do U know?
Jeh let slip-My sister has these neat tricks where she can find anyone she puts her mind to. She's a little special. U can say her powers exceed the norms.
Misha rolled her eyes like Jeh had fed a load of bull-Cut the c**p Jhe.
Jeh shrugged his shoulders-Misha do U believ in the supernatural? U know in vampires?
Misha went still-Why?
Jeh came in front of her-Lets just say your sisters footprnits have been marked by the dead/
Misha gasped-Maithali! S**t! S**t! S**t! Pia oh Pia why have U done this? Why?
Jeh a little taken a back-Maithali!
Misha spouted venom-This psycho b***h attacked my sister for Power last yaer. Its her fault she's lost her memory. How do U know about vampires anyway?
Jeh's face grew a little shaken-Promise me U won't flake out?
Misha was in no mood to promise Jeh anything. He didn't deserve any of her trust-Spill it!
Jeh wary-Look Misha i know i hurt U but i am trying to save U girls dammit from them. your sister has a tendency to attract the supernatural. Pia had Sid after her and he was Maithali's sire. Maithali had a lover who was turned and for him she has made it her lifes mission to taunt and torment Pia. Power is not the only reason. LOVE is at stake too.
Misha was confused-Maithali is in love with U too. Just great.
Jeh liked the tone he was hearing in Misha's voice-No! She loves another. I hate this person with a passion but i can't explain here Misha ok. Trust me Misha. I can never lie to U. Not now.
Misha fumed-Not now why?
Jeh blurted-I love U ok. Its not easy for me to express myself. U just bring out all my closed of emotions i thoight i never had. All i feel is rage but with U i just i can't I just feel so bad at this stuff while U make it impossible for me to even get a word in edgeways and now i've messed it all up by acting on impulse and U hate me. I know U can't stand...

Misha gave Jeh the same treatment back. He was rambling and Misha hated people who mumbled things she had no way of ever understanding by slamming the brakes on. Yes Misha kissed Jeh back to shut him up but unlike the other electric shock she had this one was a little forced and filled with heat. Misha hadn't anticipated the kiss to last as long as it did but it sure felt damn good. Finally she broke off the kiss both staring into the others eyes feeling a little drained from their outbursts.

Misha blushed and held Jehs' hand-Jeh i don't hate U. I just don't apprecaite being used. Nor do i condone anyone getting close to my sister yet wanting to hit on the other sister for kicks.
Jeh finished-But U aren't for kicks Misha. U are the real deal. Do U think?
Misha finished-Once we get my sister out of there we will think of what this is Jeh. This feel like its happened too fast. So U aren't a vampire right? I mean U feel warm to the touch.
Jeh shaked his head-I am not a bloodsucker. Misha just leave this out for now ok.
Misha nodded and headed with Jeh to save Pia.

Pia staked Maithali's arms. She was too fast for Pia biting into her flesh when Abhay arrived in the nick of time hurling Maithali away from her. Pia fell to Abhay's arms. Alina stared back in fear at Maithali who was stalking her.

Pia held Abhay tightly-U came Abhay. U came.
Abhay's eyes saw Pia's blood getting a little carried away his eyes grew changing colour to colour and bore his fangs-I can't...
Pia touched his face-U look beautiful Abhay. I trust in your strength Abhay. In your love. If i die at your hands then its a death most welcome.
Abhay cradled Pia in his arms-Pia! (He closed his eyes trying to wade the beast within him locking it away. He opened his eyes and covered Pia's lips with his hand) Pia i won't let her hurt U. Its going to be ok. Its us against her do U hear me? I love U.
Pia nodded hoping to hear those very words she'd been craving to hear ever since she'd laid eyes on him-Abhay i don't care if i die now. If i have U i have everything.

Alina brushed Maithali with her power blast-Leave her alone! Stay the hell away from her dammit.
Maithali laughed evilly-U have no idea who sent me here. Your very own mother Alina.
Alina threw a bolt at Maithali-Shut up!
Maithali taunted AlinaMummy not give U enough attention little girl. U think U can outmatch me in strength.
Alina flung another bolt at Maithali and then saw the arrival of her mother-no! U have got to be kidding me.
Deepanita laughed-What's the matter Alina? Afraid of a little one on one action with your Mother. Neel filled me in on your stupid stupid freindship U have going with that vampire Abhay. My own flesh and blood so weak.
Alina grew angrier-Whatever. U think i'm afraid of U?

Jeh came on the scene and saw the hell about to break loose. Mother versus daughter. Ex-Lover vs her ex and a human and now Misha being present only added to his problem.

Jeh motioned to Misha-Whatever U do Misha please stay here ok.
Misha wasn't taking orders from Jeh but knew to shut him up was to just play along-Sure.
Jeh went into the whole nightmare he'd dreaded and wished to avoid.

Edited by matwamango - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb update Ayesha 👏
Finally Jeh confessed his love for Misha and Pia got her memory back and most importantly Alina understood Abhay is not meant for her and still helped him ... now I hope Abhay can defeat Dipannita and Metz... update soon 😳
Edited by princess_xeelan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow yaar awesome update I so loved it Jisha r together finally jeh confess his love + Pia got her memory back,alina realized tht Abhay is not meant 4 her but Pia & hope Abhiya unite soon.Lovely update ayesha😳

Edited by cuteshrishti - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

wow yaar awesome update I so loved it Jisha r together finally jeh confess his love + Pia got her memory back,alina realized tht Abhay is not meant 4 her but Pia & hope Abhiya unite soon.Lovely update ayesha😳

Well i wasn't going to make this FF drag. Jeh has done a U-turn lets see if he can do the same here.
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx for d pm
wow man wat an updt
wonderful gr8t fantastic 👏👏
misha n jeh luk gud together
cont soon
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Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Superb update Ayesha 👏

Finally Jeh confessed his love for Misha and Pia got her memory back and most importantly Alina understood Abhay is not meant for her and still helped him ... now I hope Abhay can defeat Dipannita and Metz... update soon 😳

I am wrapping this FF up. Its run its course we have had fun with it and now i can end it on a happy note. Besides Misha can digest Jeh being a supernatural thanks to vampires😆

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