Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the scene btwn Maan and Komal
She is really an cute gal. Can u attach a pic of her??
Glad he found some happiness in this new angel.
Maan able to make Komal to fulfill his condition.
I loved the part of Komal's mind speaking with Maan.
Really cute...


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee!!!!
I am so glad to see maan happy after so many years!
loved maan and komal's meeting!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sry di didnt check ma pm read all 4 part now n i shocked OMG geet hv daughter ?? hmm yash n pinky seems to b best buddies of geet nyc..Komal is such an angel n sweet luv her..luv d way maan connecting wid her..thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Everyone...šŸ¤—
Thank you all for liking this FF and wonderful comments šŸ¤—
Please read and comment...will give the next update soon!
Posting now, will check for spelling and editing mistakes later
PART 5:

Happiness? Babaji...do you really intend to give it back to me? Tears rolls down her cheeks.

Geet continues with the rest of the day with her busy office schedule. Komal wakes up later and has good time with Manisha, Pandeji, Romeo and rest of the gang till the time her mamma finishes with her office work.

Later in the evening, Pinky and Uncleji were eagerly waiting for them to have the usual evening get together.

Uncleji had prepared nice tea and served them with some readymade snacks

Pinky takes Komal to the play area.

Geet bete...I don't know why I am feeling this by looking at you today, I could make out some glimpse of happiness in your face...If my assumption is right, your meeting with the headmistress went on well yesterday. Geet lost in her own world of thoughts...Sorry bete...Myself and Pinky had to leave for that wedding and I missed to enquire about what followed in Komal's school...please tell me.

Geet tells him what ever happened yesterday and today in Komal's school

Hmm...so, this is the reason behind your happiness... I appreciate your decision...I know you so well...you are happy with Komal's new found happiness.

Uncleji...my life is over...If I am alive physically, its only for Komal

He rests his hand on her shoulder...Please beta...don't ever tell this again for god sake...you are a brave girl... just close your past chapter thinking bad days are over and happy days are here.

HAPPY DAYS? Hmmm...Geet has a sad smile...Lets see it uncle

Komal runs to Geet...Mamma...Can I get one chocolate please?

Uncleji couldn't believe what he heard... Arre Komal bitiya...Aap kab se chocolate khane keliye permission lene lagi? (From when did you start asking permission to have chocolates)

This is the strict order by her new friend...he has given her a box full of chocolates with strict condition that she has to take her mamma's permission.

Oh...that's good...Komal listens to whatever this new friend says...that's amazing.

Dont call him friend...he is my Papa Making a baby face

Tho yeh baat hain...challo...acha hi hain...I must say your papa is so well cultured...so, listen to what ever he says...Hun?

Geet gives her one chocolate and Komal back to play area

Geet bete...This person seems to be good...see, he is not trying to spoil Komal and seems he has a way to deal smartly with the kids... But I have only one concern...

Boliye Uncleji

What if there is a situation where this person has to stop meeting Komal sometime in future...I am worried as Komal is really getting attached to this person and She will not be able to face this grief of missing him...And...

Uncleji...I can understand your point...but what could I do? I cannot bring back Dev...Is it possible? And how can I tell this bitter truth and hurt that innocent angel who is the only happiness of my life? That's why I agreed to the Headmistress request...Over and above all, I heard from the headmistress that even this person has gone through with his tough life and has seen a glimpse of joy in Komal.

Par beta...

Uncleji... Babaji has not left me with any choice. What can I do? At this point of time, Komal's happiness is what matters to me and I cannot hurt her at any cost...and cries endlessly

Uncleji hugs her immediately...Beta..I am really sorry...I didn't mean to hurt you...I was only worried about few things in this regard...

Geet still cries in his embrace...

Main ne kaha na...sab tik ho jayega (I told you right...everything will get back to normal)...Please don't cry.

I am sorry if I hurt you...

Na beta

What to do? I am forced to take each and every day as it comes without worrying about my past and without expecting anything out of future.

Sab tik ho jayega...Apne babaji pe barosa rakho (Everything will get back to normal...Have faith in your God)
Later in the evening, Geet buys a "Thank You" Greeting card for Komal's papa with a written note which she hands over to Komal the next day

Beta...Please give this card to papa when he comes to see you today.

Sure Mamma

And...Dont open it...Your Papa is the one who will open it and Dont forget your papa will get angry if do so.

Komal Kisses her cheek and promise not to open.

At Khurana Construction...9:00 AM

Pinky at the reception...And she stands up immediately after seeing Maan

Good Morning Sir...says Pinky

Hello MK...Good Morning says Sasha

Good Morning Sir says Tasha

Go...Go...Go...Good Morning Sir Says Aadi

Aadi, Sasha, you both need to meet me at my cabin in next half an hour

They have a usual meeting...

MK...Good News is that our London project has got approved

That's good

Ss..Ss..Sir...this is the Gurgaon project file...its progressing well
Hmm
The meeting goes on till 11:00 AM and then Maan happens to see his watch

Ok Guys...I have some task to complete...will be out of office for an hour...see you after 12:00 PM

Sure MK

At the school...11:30 AM

Maan and Komal meet...

PAPA...PAPA...and hugs him and kisses him

Papa, Mamma has given this for you...and hands over the Greeting Card to him

Maan was surprised...he was actually worried what if Komal's mom is upset with the Greeting...now getting a greeting card in return states that she is not angry with him...THANKS GOD

Ji Papa?

Kuch nahin beta...will open it later.

Now...be honest with me...Did you give the chocolate box to mamma?

Yes Papa...I did.

And you are taking chocolates with her permission?

YES PAPA... PROMISE

That's like my good girl.

They spend a quality time together till 12:00 PM and then Maan returns back to his office holding Greeting card between a file he was carrying...He calls Aadi into his cabin

Aadi...review this file and give me your opinion about this project

SS..Ss..sure SS..Ss..Sir

Aadi leaves and Maan just remembered the Greeting Card...Oh Dear...how did I forget that...I need to take it from Aadi.

Aadi gets back to his cabin and runs a check and finds a Greeting Card Enveloped in between the file. He takes the Greeting card envelope out and was about to get back to Maan's cabin and handover to him and just then Sasha walks in.

Arre Aadi...what is this?

This was in-between the file...I need to give it back to Sir

Oh Aadi...use your brain! Who will dare to give a Greeting card to him?

It might be some card from a client

Mmm..doesnt seem to be...There is no name written on the envelope...I dont think its from a client...let me open it and see

STOP IT Sasha

Sasha and Aadi turn to look at Maan...he was fuming with Anger

Sasha...how can you open an envelope which belongs to me?

Sasha was getting nervous now... MK...I dint know its yours...Moreover there is no name written on it and that's why I was trying to open it

Henceforth you find any letter or envelope which has no name mentioned on the cover, you should hand it over to me...IS THAT CLEAR? Maan gives a glare at her and snatches the Greeting card that she was still holding...and leaves from Aadi's cabin. She is wondering and despirate to find out the details wrapped up in that envelope... I am sure this card is from someone special If MK is so possessive about it.

Maan comes back to his cabin...sips water and try to compose himself before reading the Greeting Card

He is opening it wondering what could be the content...It was a Greeting Card with "Thank YOU for your kind Gesture".

He instantly smiles and He opens the note...

"Dear Sir...Friend...Komal Papa...I am confused and don't have a clue of how to relate or address you...But All I would tell you is THANK YOU"

Why is she thanking me? I am the one who is thankful to her. He continues to read.

"THANK YOU for being Komal's PAPA...She misses her PAPA...I can fight with this world to give her all happiness but not her PAPA as he is no more...I have hidden this harsh truth from Komal as her tender heart does not have the ability to face the loss of her father and to accept the fact that she will never get to see him in her life."

Maan closes his eyes to feel the pain in this note

"I have been in a helpless situation whenever Komal used to ask about her PAPA...God only knows how difficult it had been to lie to her... but what could I do...I was really HELPLESS...I have been telling her the lie that her PAPA will suddenly appear in front of her one fine day and the moment he sees her...he will take her in his arms and Kiss her...and she was living with that dream..."

Maan is gaining courage to read further...

"...and she found YOU in reality. I couldn't explain to her that you are not her PAPA..as she is not willing to believe...I left it as I am happy with her new found happiness..."

Finally, a smile appears on his face...

"I have one request from you...When the time comes where you plan to quit meeting Komal, please let me know sometime in advance so that I can prepare myself to handle the situation"

Why is she thinking in this term? Maan is actually worried

"I can make out that this sentence in the note might have hurt you...I am SORRY if I have hurt you knowingly or unknowingly...but believe me, I never intend to hurt you... Its just that I am concerned about my daughter...she is the one and only happiness of my life and I can never ever bare to see my little angle getting shattered"

Now he is able to clearly understand her point of view.

"Anyways...I hope my little angel is not troubling you...If YES, then I apologize on her behalf...The thing is she is very naughty and at the same time she is very very innocent. Please...Please share your true concerns if any. You take care, BEST REGARDS, Komal's MOM"

Maan runs thru a mix feeling... He is finding her pain to be much more severe than his own. For the first time, his mind is seriously thinking about something which is keeping him away from his past.

PRECAP: Oops...Yash decides to sell "Indian Paints" 😲

WILL SEND PMS LATER
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaar this mind blowing but it will be even bettr if u can update more faster plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part . loved the thank u letter and wants to congraluate u for becoming mother hope u r doing well and enjoying the new phase of ur life with ur husband . take care of ur health and keep writing for us as we enjoy to the core .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part dear...yash wants to sell indian paints...To whom...??? Maan... Hope m right... Updt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
dear plz tell me is komal dev and geet's daughter or not
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz reply dear or atleast give a hint
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

nice update
dear plz tell me is komal dev and geet's daughter or not
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Hie Dear...I had posted this if I remember just before part 3...need to wait for some time to know the answer...PLEASE

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