Maaneet FF - Baarish. Link to new thread Pg 151 - Page 60

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Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part..
where s geet..?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome dear
Loved it
Superb
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
roops ki bachi...grrr😡
ru mein aa rhi hoon tere peechey danda pakad ke...
grrr😡😡
tune ash ki izzat ki dhajjiyan uda daali...
NAHIII😭😭
n mere puchki ko kya se kya bana diya??????😲😭🥺
n tht song...ahhh i hated iot...hate that song...😡😡
eee tujhe aaj mein maar daalungi...
aarrghhh..😡😡
tu please abhi real life intances lene band kar de daya kar mere upar meri maa🤢

not Adi...nahiii🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢 😭
mein kya karoon raam mujhe budha mil gaya!!!!!!!!

me giving u *deathly glares* ruk kamini...
abhi batati hun...😡

but at the end...
the update was fully 🤣🤣

conti soon re
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow so cute ashii
love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one but i want to know where is geetas i can see only maan's present not geet's.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice loved it do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
the up is good and funny too
but in the up i really missed geet
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
...😛
4 pming me dear...😃
updates dear...👏
dear...😃
just ...😃
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u r done really a
tons of to u...dear...😛
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry Roops for such a late response...but loved the update
I was so cute and funny...haye bas kaash ki Geet kahin hoti picture mein...
waiitng to know why they split yaar...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 32

Present

Ashiii "Maami alto baddd maami mumma paapa tall(talk) n Maama no hiii Ashiii" n starts sobbing


N All are like not again '''.


Avanii " aree mera bacha gussa hogayaaa'.."

Hearing this maan is remained of the past

Past

After Maan had talked to his mom he got to know that it was Geet whom he had rejected even without seeing n his Dad was still angry on him for that.


Now his main aim was to manofy his Misthy who was realllyyy angry on him n he knew just the way to manofy her n smiles evilly at his naughty brains idea.


Maan goes to Geet room n as expected it was locked,so he knock it for sometime n then just goes to the kitchen n takes out a huge scoop of DBC *death by chocolate it's the yummiest ice cream I hv ever had '. Muu mein abhi se hii paani araha haiii* n sneaks into her room from her balcony to see Geet cuddled like a baby in her blanket as if she is in her mother's womb n she looked sooo adorablyyy cute with her cute complaining pout n talks to babaji .


Suddenly Geet heard some slurping sound n peeps frm insie her blanket towards the door


Geet [self talk]"Babajiii door tho locked haiii tho yeh awaj kaha se arahiii haiii' kaiii koi chor tho nahiii 'vo mera murder tho nahi kar dega naaa '. Babajii bachaa lena meri abhiii shaadi bhi nahii huii haii..par yeh chor slurping kii awaj kyun kar raha haii.. sayad bhukha hoganaaa uske ghar mein meri Mom jaisi achi cook nahi hogiii'" n then gathering some courage but not looking outside the blanket



Geet " Mr.Chor kyaaa aap yaha chori karne ayee hoo??? Yaaa mera murder karneee???? Dekhiye meri abhi tak shaadi bhi nahi huiii aur mein gud girl bhi huuu n sab kii madat karthii huu tho aap mera murder kyun karna chahthe hooo '. Aur aap koo zyada bhuk lagii haiii ke aap itnaa awaj karke kharahe hoo n itna awaj karke khana bad manners hota haiii ' mummy ne nahiii sikhayaaa'haaan mujhe pata haiii sab meri mom kii tarah tastyyy khana nahi bana sakthee dnt worry yaha se right leke aap neeche javogena tho waha kitchen haii 'kitchen mein frigde mein mom ne khana rakha hogaa aap kha lijiyegaa' yese khalii peth kaam karna achi baath nahii hotii'" n then she heard someone laughinggg n wondered kee iss chor kii itni himat ke Geet Handa ka mazak udaye n in full shernii mood just sits on her bed taking off the blanket n is shocked to see Maan on floor with DBC ice cream smugged on his face.


Maan [self talk] "ohhh goddd kya ladkii haii misthii phele tho daar thi hai kii chorii aur murder karne aya haiii n then itna concern dikha thi haiii n tht maaners line ' oh goddd hw can I stop falling in luv with my misthy over n over again" n then just could not stop himself frm bursting into laughter on the floor.


Geet " Maaan aap yaha kyaaa kar rahee hooo????"


Maan " Mein thoo ice cream khaa raha huu vo bhi DBC"


Geet " Oooh tho aap vo chor haii joo mujhe daarahe thee???"


Maan " Mein koi chor nahi huu mein tho sirf ek dewana huu aur meinne kahii suna haii kii Geet Handa koo kisi bhi chiz se daar nahii lagthaa'"n starts smirking


Geet " Haan tho mene chiz se daar nahi lagtha bola tha insaano se nahii n aap koo sharam nahii aatha aise lafangagiri karthe huve vo bhi ek kuwarii ladkii ke room mein akee"


Maan "lafangagiri nahiii dewangii kahoo misthyy aur yaha koii kuwarii ladkii bhi haii maine tho dekha hii nahii mera bhi intro karva doo mein bhi thoda line marlooo"


Geet just becomes red in anger n pouts her lips so cutely that Maan couldn't resist n just went n sits next to her n Geet just turns her face away from Maan n when Maan went the other side she turns it the opposite side of Maan


Maan pouting just like Geet "Aree mera bacha gusssa hogayaaa???" n seeing Geet trying hard to control her smile n peeking frm the corner of her eyes maan continues "Dekha babajii merii misthy ne mujhe chor bola phir bhi mein gussa nahii hua aur v uss baath ke liyee gussa hai jab mein usko jantha bhi nahi tha 'yeh tho galat hai naaa mein tho bas apne aap ko establish karne ke baad dad kii chunii huii ladkii se shaadi karna chatha tha but mujhe tho dad ne baath karne se bhi mana kardiyaaa.. aab ismeee merii kya mistake haaaiii'"


Geet hearing this feels bad that out of no reason she was just angry on maan for a silly reason n also tht she called him a chor so she just saw Maan seeing upwards like she does n suddenly pushs Maan on the bed n comes on top of him'.


Precap-

Past continues

Geet's mom doubts Geet

a reminder to Maaneet abt Preet n Geet's marriage they hv to come out of their maaneet land naaa

4 days left for marriage


n i wont update till the comments reach pg 120+

as i hv xams also n nt getting gud response

so until it reachs tht page u all are left hanging between the past n present of maan n geet's life

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago

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