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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#721

Part 29

Hawww...mera Tag khatre me tha...and mujhe pata bhi nahi tha!! Actually...main bahut regular nahi hu aaj kal (since a while rather)...isliye itne parts miss ho gaye!! Aage se achhi bacchi banne ki puri koshish karungi...😳

Coming to the part...RN convo...was again awesum!! 👏Rajveer was being sweet and romantic types...and I was like..."is it really him?"😆...and then as Naina said..."aa gaye apni asliyat pe"..😆😆😆.he asked her not to repeat her act again and risk the safety of her or the mission...hehe!! He is actually MAJOR Rajveer!! Hail You...sweetheart...😳😉😆😆😆

Waise aaj kal ye Huda kuch zyada hi bolne laga hai...huh!! Raj ne end me achha jawab diya..😆😆

Maj Rajveer:-"mission abhi baki hai Lft Huda...toh aap ko bhi pata chal jayega ke main inshan hun ke kya hun...

And waha Yusuf ko Naaz pe shaq hone hi laga tha...but sab kuch sambhal gaya!! And plan is going well...after all...plan kiska hai!! Hamare DEAR MAJOR ka...😳😳😳😉

Baki kuch ke bare me zyada nahi kehna hai...just bich me Col. Gupta ke sath rajveer n Gunny ka convo achha tha...specially this portion...😆😆

col Gupta:-"toh capt...main aap ko bewakuf type ka banda lagta hun... nahi...

Gunny:-"sir...maine khud ko kameena bhi toh kaha na...

Now...I'll move on to the next part to see how the plan is executed and all..😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#722

Part 30

Lovely part once again!! Isme zyada Rajveer-Naina scenes nahi the...but I agree ki hona possible bhi nahi tha...as isme Mission ko darshaya gaya hai...and wo bhi bakhubi se...Love the way u wrote it...👏👏

That lil bit of RN scene was nice...dono ko sath me sochke hi achha lagta hai...and yeah...Naaz ne achha kaha...ki Naina Rajveer ko bina doubt ke pehchan gayi...haha. But as Puriji said...Hum bhi pehchan jate hai..😳😳

Plan bilkul achha jaa raha hai...Rajveer & Gunny ka tevar...haha...Akram hopefully zyada input dene ki koshish nahi karega...darra hua hai na...😆😆😆

Aur Naaz ko gun dene ka tarika achha tha...😛

Waise iss baar finally Huda ko akal ayi...uski dimag ki batti tubelight jo hai...thodi der se jalti hai...😆😆 fauji ke bare me kaafi achha kaha usne...😃😃

And end me...Rajveer ka determination...isnt that wat makes him so special? uff...LOVE YOU MAJOR!! 😳😳😳

Iss part me mission ki tension ko achhese se portray kiya tumne...lekin mujhe koi tension nahi hai...sab thik hona hi hai...tum jo likh rahi ho...Am I ryt or Am I ryt?...😆...Jaisa ki tum samajh chuki ho...mere right hone ke alawa koi aur option nahi tumhare paas...so every1 better be fine...😈
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neha10.for.u

@neha10.for.u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#723

Reserved 😊

Ye reserved ka board isliye taang rahi hoon, coz I later want to post a detailed comment on this fic..

but one thing is sure, i m really going to miss thic fic, and i m sure, other readers too are feeling the same.. So u better gear up and start a new RN ff.. ( and if possible, a LRL one..)

Btw, ud was awesome 😊

Detailed comment later 😊

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#724

Part 31

Awesum part!! Cud feel the victory at door..😃😃...Gunny ne bahut hi chalaki se pata laga liya ke unke paas kitne aadmi the...😃...after all he cudnt ask like Gabbar "Kitne aadmi hai re"..😆😆...achha achha...pata hai mujhe...joke bahut hi lame tha...huh!! So me moving on...😳

The part was veryyy nicely written...I cant say much...as details pe kya comment karu mujhe samajh me nahi aying...😆...but I love all the ideas...like Rajveer ka sab ka phn bandh karwana 😉...and then Nadir Shah n Akram ko ek alag jagah pe le jake..unhe achha khasa daraya!!😆

Loved Aalekh n Huda's attitude...while Rajveer & Gunny's calmness was worth watching (in my imagination😆)...😳😳

Then finally they got cracked...😉...and achhi khaasi planning thi Raj ki...main to flat ho gayi uski planning pe...😳😳..

Naveen's voice over was a treat...😃😃...me moving on to next part now!!😊

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#725

Part 32

Haii...itna dhasuuu part mere naam!! Jeeyo Priya ji..jeeyo!! Mera bday bhi kitna awesum tym pe ata hai...hehe. 😆Waise thanks for the dedication dear...(der ayi par durust ayi😆)😃😃

Coming to the part...as main pehle hi bol chuki hu...its DHASOO!!👏👏 I also thought...ki Rajveer ka plan unhe arrest karwane ka to ho nahi sakta!! Kyunki Arrest karne se kuch hota nahi hai...ye hum sab jante hai..😕.so yes...he had sum further plan...and it worked accordingly...!!😃😳 Manna padega Major ki dimag ko..👏⭐️and if he says..pyar me dimag aise chalta hai..then mujhe bhi koi dhundna hoga...kyunki mera dimag to fused bulb se bhi gaya-guzra hai...it has no bulb at all..😆😆😆

Anyways...coming back to the point...the lan was amazing..and I had expected no less from you!!😉😳😳

Col. Gupta bhi Major ki dimag se impressed hai...😉and Huda & Aalekh ki shaitani mazedaar thi...but becharo ko kaafi bhadi padhi...subah wali scene btwn Aalekh & Huda...and later wid Naina...mast thi...😆😆😆

Rajveer-Naina ke kaafi scenes the..and they were all so cute...Raj ka guldasta lene bahar jana...howww cuuuttteee!! 😳😳😳Love him yaar!! Love the way he chats wid Naina...thoda chedta hai...but kuch aise ki bahuuuttt pyar ata hai...😳😳😳😳😳

Gunny & Naaz ka scene achha tha..and I hope..there is more at the station...!!😉 Posting ke orders bhi aa gaye...gr8!! And RN are going together...hehe.😳 Bekaar me bechari ko pareshan kiya...but agar Raj ne kiya..then sab maaf!!😳😳😆

Last scene was FAB!! So smart of him...after all..bachpan se smart hai..😉😆😳😳

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#726

Last part

Okay...it feels really sad to be commenting on the last part 😕...as this is ur very first fiction for me..jiska sath maine shuru se diya hai...😊

Khair...anth ka dukh jaise hamein hai...(main to Raj ko miss karungi😳) uss tarah Pooja ko bhi hai..in fact wo apna mobile lingo bhi bhul gayi...but Ali ne usse samjhaya...as this was to happen always!!😊

Even Naina became upset...but Rajveer ne usse sambhal liya...😊😊and decided to give everyone sum thing so that they can always cherish those gifts as a souvenir of memories...😃😃😊

Aalkeh ne sahi bola..he cud never drink that bottle...and that one line was enough heart touching!!😳👏👏

And then..Rajveer ka gaana...it was all beautiful... 😳
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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#727

Epilogue

Okay...my very last comment on Ankahi...😕...am confused...whether to feel sad that its no more or elated that it has been such a wonderful journey all throughout...😊...guess I'll pic the second one...😃

Rajveer Naina ko tumne last me include kiya..keeping the best for the last...so me will do the same..😉

Coming to my 2nd fav jodi of the fic...Gunny & Naaz...Loved their scene...bechara ek hi anar hai...😆😆...and isse bhi Naaz le gayi...*sigh*...main apni dimag ki batti kaise jalau..?😆😆😆

Next was Yudi-Shalini...it was sweet & emotional one altogether!! Loved it..😃😃...

Ali-Puja was nice...it was funny at first...the way Puja was behaving...main to Ali ke reactions soch kar hi hass rahi thi...it was a marvelous attempt...& successful as well..😆😆😆

Aalekh-Neelu was beautiful too..😃...Aalekh is always a sweetheart...😃...but at the beginning...I loved the respect he received from that officer...😃

And then comes Huda...🤣...that was the best part u knw...😆😆...I was just laughing seeing everything happening...and his anxiety was the cherry on top...😆😆...Noor as Cadet...& that Samar Singh Huda from Haryana...😆😆...it was all too perfect for him...he so deserves it...😆😆😆

Now coming to Raj-Naina...they are as usual lovely...😳😳 Raj took her to point 1857...😳😳 and let her knw that he was so uninterested in bringing her here for the first tym...😆...it was one beautiful scene in the serial..and this one here...was again a beautiful one...😃😃👏

And then after 3 yrs...there came Naveen...😆😆...Raj ka usse yu competitively baat karna was sooo adorable...specially the last moment...when he shows him the tongue and leaves...😆... it was EPIC!! 😆😆

Lovely ending...👏👏...it was so beautiful and cheerful...that there is no shadow of sadness at all...thanks for this wonderful fic...😃😃

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#728

Ankahi

Now am gonna talk abt this entire fic on a whole...and after going thru the pain of having read all my previous comments...u have to read it too...😆😆

So talking abt this entire fic...its always been special to me...as I have already said before...this is the very first fic of urs that I have been following from the start!! And sumhow, I blv, the connection is stronger when u are a part of a journey all throughout!! 😳 So, yes, my connection wid this fic of urs is much stronger!!

I loved the character of Major Rajveer 😳 Just the way I have always portrayed Rajveer...😳...he is subtle and intense...he is not driven by emotion only...he has a big heart...but he very well knws that there is sumthing heavy inside his head (brains😆)...and he must use it...😉😆...So yes...I love the entire balance of this character!! 😃😃

All the other characters have been wonderful...👏👏...but of course...for obvious reasons...I have never really scrutinized them...😆😆...though I liked Gunny & Naaz inclusion a lot...(my 2nd fav couple from the fic😃)..

So the journey ends here...it has truly been an awesum one...😃...really loved ur view on the show...ur continuation is one of my favs...(may be I hav said it before😳)...just a BIG THANK YOU...for this awesome treat of reading!! 😃😃

With loads of love for Rajveer & You,
Sumi. 😳😳