ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11 - Page 72

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

ohkay...ohkay...tumhari aadato ko main samajh gayi...!!! lekin tumhe shock kyoun laga...yeh toh pahle se hi maine bata diya tha ki jaldi hi fic khatam honewala hai...😊

aur rahi baat new RN fic ki...!!! toh agar dimag me pressure dalu...toh kuch na kuch ajeeb phul toh khilega hi...😆
par prob yeh hai ki LRL based nahi ho sakta...!!! kyoun ke jo likhna tha wo toh main Ankahi me likh hi chuki hun...toh phir aur kya likh sakti hun...😕
haan...Army based fiction ho sakta hai...
ab tum bolo...agar tumhare paas koi ideas ho toh...mujhe batayo...😃



tum army per zaada achche se fics likhti ho isliye army per hi likho with rn ofcourse😉 😃 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello Priya
Update was worth waiting for and it as it is the last part of this fiction u have written it exceptionally well⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏
All of them were really sad at the thought of leaving each other once again..Pooja was specially angry on Raj but she cudn't say anything infront of his wife.😆😆😉
But every1 knew in their heart that watever distances mayb in between them they can never b apart in their hearts.
Naina was a bit upset and Raj like always cheered her up.Dooriyon se pyaar sach mein badta hi hai..😃😃
see I am so excited to meet my parents after one year.I am coming to India for full one month during Christmas.😃😃😃
Gunny and Naaz ka pair mast hai yaar.I always knew that kuchh kuchh hota hai between them😉
Iss fiction mein saare ladke itna sharmate hain ki propose ladkiyon ko hi karna padta hai..Pehle Raj,phir Yudi aur Alekh and ab Gunny😆😆
Naaz agar train se nikal kar nahar nahin aati to Gunny to kuchh keh hi na paata.
same goes for Ali..Pooja agar kiss pe itna zor na dalti to woh hamesha aap aur hum mein hi reh jaate.😆😆
ab dekho kitnio speed aa gayi pyaar mein😉😉
I really loved Huda's part.😆😆😆😉 .Raj ne usse apne tareeke se ek sweet sa revenge le hi liya.😆
Ek to Raj ka room upar se apne jaise hi ek flirt cadet se pehle hi din mulakat ho jaana uske liye kissi sadme se kam nahin tha..😆😆
and same like Raj he is finding his cadet cute..Now that is a beginning of one more love story in KMA.😃
Noor is wanting his help and Huda is trying hard to control his feelings..😆😆
No doubt he is dying to meet Raj😉😆😆
Alekh and Neelu r the most funny couple..Neelu can't cook but atleast she tried and when Alekh tasted the food he thought to eat it whole..😆😆😆
He didn't wanted to break Neelu's heart..sooo cute.😃😃
Alekh kitne romantioc tareeke se khana bana raha tha ki I am shocked woh jala nahin😉😆😆
Yudi is confident abt his love for Shalini but she is still hesitant..But wat Yudi did for her simply opened her eyes.she cud never find any1 who cud love her more than him and she accepted his ring.😃😃
Now coming to my most favourite couple Raj and Naina.
Raj has always surprised Naina with his wonderful gifts but this time he made her speechless. He took her to Point 1857 and in white suit too.😊
They both became nostalgic..Naina remembered their first visit to this place..so many things had changed since then.Raj was her mentor,her teacher but now he is her soulmate.😊
They both were lost in old thoughts when Raj suddenly talked her abt their honeymoon and Naina wanted to go to Laddakh.
That song is very beautiful and perfect for the situation.Finally they were one in every sense of the word.😃
Nav's dad is jealous of him 😆😆 Papa Raj doesn't get enough time to romance with his wife now.😉😉😆 Raj is such a cute daddy..😆😍
I would have loved to read more Ankahi but its ended at a perfect note.👏👏
Each and every character was happy in the end.They got everything they wished for and thats wat we all wanted to see in LRL too.
This journey was indeed beautiful..😊😊😊 I am in a habbit of saying continue soon after every update .It seems like I'll miss it very much..All your fictions ended this year apart from ZTMK which u r in no mood to continue..
anyways u can write one more RN fiction as only WILYS is left now.😃
Thank u for writing such a beautiful story...😊
Edited by suhana.dixit - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Priya

Congrats for completing 100 pages of Ankahi...👍🏼🥳

I was so excited that after exams i will enjoy reading Ankahi...but tumne mujhe shocked kar diya 😲
m feeling sad😔...it ended...Ankahi has always been close to my heart ...m gonna miss this ff
Update was brilliant, Superb...👏
Naaz & Gunny scene was sweet
Huda scene was funny 😆😆...enjoyed it
Ali n Pooja so cute.😊...Alekh n Neelu scene was gud ...Yudi n Shalini are together
Finally Raj n Naina scene so sweet n romantic..loved it to the core
Papa aur bete ka scene was soo cute ...😊...Raj jealous of his own son😆😆
It was an perfect ending...👏👏
Hope u start new RN ff...based on LRL or Army
Continue soon with new ff...dekho mene "continue soon" bol diya...😉

Luv u 🤗
Radhika



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Posted: 13 years ago
a biggg hiii !
you know what? i really feel guilty...that pichle 3 updates se maine ispe comment nahi kiya n tumne kuch bhi nahi kaha...i dint mean tum readers ko force karti ho comment karne keliye par...jiss haqq se main tujhe update karne bolti thi ussi haqq se tu mujhe jhaad laga sakti thi na...itna samajhdaar ban ne ki kya zaroorat hai? maana ki tum jaanti thi ki main comment kyun nahi kar pa rahi hoon...parr yaar..sirf yeh dikhane keliye ki meri comment se tumhe fark padhta hai...sirf ek baar keh deti ! kya bigad jaata tera??? haan?? bataaa !
ahem...isse pata hai kya kehte hai?? nahi pata...well isse kehte hai...ULTA CHOR KOTWAAL KO DAANTE !!! 😆 😆 😆

khair...ab nautanki bandh karte hai...fic pe aate hai...

mujhe bilkulll bhi achcha nahi lag raha ki ANKAHI finish hogaya... tu kuch bhi bol...main firse wahi kahungi...I still feel ki ANKAHI died a premature death...main bhi tujhe fic khinchne nahi bolti...par...yeh toh achanak hi khatam hogayi yaar...though mujhe iski bhanak pehle se thi...

par agar woh bhoolkar main update ko dekhu toh it was superrb !!! full marks !!!
cafeteria mein saare friends ka scene...wowww !!! mujhe bhi pooja ki tarah hi lagta hai...😛 woh sab saath hote toh kitnaaa mazaaa aata !!!! Naina n Raj toh hamesha hi woww hote hai !!
Par yeh kya? main Shalini ki baat se khafa hu !! kyun shalini maam? maana ki aapka dost lajawaab hai...par dimaag toh Naina mein bhi hai...yeh toh iss fic ki writer ne yeh idea Raj ke dimaag mein daal diya...warna Naina khud gifts leke aati ! woh song achcha tha !! kaunsi film ka hai yaar? yaad nahi aaraha...

Epilogue was complete n perfect !! har ek ko tune achcha footage diya hai !! good job !!!

but most catchy of it was HUDA !!!!! 😆 Jaisi karni waisi bharni stuff !! 😆 too good pri !!!! i loved it!!!

aalekh n Neelu ka bhi superb tha !

N apne RN ke scenes ke baaremein kya kahu??? They were just so beautiful !! Aur toh aur Navs bhi aagaya hai unhe pareshan karne...😛

main phir kahungi...mujhe achcha nahi lag raha ki ANKAHI khatam hogaya...
hope to See u soon...with ANKAHI part II 😉😛

luv...
mana😃



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Posted: 13 years ago
oh shit...main already reserve kar chuki thi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Congrats for completing 100 page for second thread and thank you for this superb , mind blowing FF awesome sweet ending going too miss this ff please start some more ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi pri...
update parh k acha nahi lag rha tha as it was the last update na😭..but someone has rightly said "All ood things come to an end" 😊
waisai last part n epilogue were just awesome..especially i like huda's part...it was relly funny n fun to read 😆..n yudi shalini n alekh neelu was also a nice one and ye achanak sai ali ko kia hogya..😆😆😆...n han how forget naaz n gunny kitnai cute lagain k sath sath😛 😛 😛 😛 ...n when she said ye top mera hai to kisi aur ko dhoond lai...iai main kisi qeemat p nahi chorongi..😆..n in the end RN...as always they are mind blowing n luved the navs part..he is really swet...😆😆😆...ok now please i told u befre n phr keh rhi hun please strt thinking of a new plot as well as start writing it along with WILYS...
cont soon to keh nahi skti so only take care 😛
n in the end thank you so much for writing such a wonderful fic...

thanks a ton dear...
Edited by Innocent_eyes - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
cant believe its ended...😲

such an awesome fic...Last updt was brilliant...👏👏👏

and d epilogue was amazing...specially njoyed huda part...😉

loved both ali ,yudi and alekhs part...u brilliantly described evry1s life after their posting...👏👏👏

RN part was most romantic and beautiful part...also njoyed raj talking to his kid part...sooo cute...😳😉👏

Ur fic from the start till this updt was awesome...had every flavor of emotions...very beautifully written amazingly expressed...👏👏👏

u had every reader of fic Glued to ur fic...dat is superb...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Will miss dis fic...😊

Again wud like to mention dat dis was gr8 fic...⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 27

Sorry main bahut late hu, but...*sigh*...I really cant explain why. Isliye zyada bakbak na karte hue sidhe point pe aungi...coz ye fic khatam bhi ho chuka hai...and I need to reach the end ASAP.😳

Talking abt the first RN scene...(and guess the only😆)...It was very very nice...I have always said I love the way u portray Rajveer's character...subtly!! And in this scene...even his concern was subtle...but veryyy intense!! 👏😳

Rajveer & Naaz scene was also beautiful 😃..whereas Gunny & Naaz scene was funny!! Bechare ko Kyunki ki kahani suna di Naaz ne...arre koi mujhe suna de to main pagal ho jau...ye to bechara ek Army officer hai...kuch to khayal karna tha na 😆😆😆😆

Waise flashbak khatam hone ki kaafi khushi hai mujhe...sab kuch clear ho gaya...hehe.😆 Btw...maine kaha tha na ...uss blast ko lekar mujhe Rajveer pe hi shakh hai...😆😆

Anyways..Rajveer ka plan ek dam point to point work kar raha hai...Aalekh & Huda uss ward boy ke pichhe lag gaye...aur waha Yusuf bhi bechain ho raha hai...😉

Abhi to next part me jana banta hai..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 28

Umm...mujhe ye part chhota laga!! Abhi to shuru hua tha...and abhi khatam!! Anyways...can I complain? Nah...coz am the one running behind time.😳

So am continuing wid my comment...😊

As planned...Taufiq & Roshan pohuche Yusuf ke paas...Ye Roshan mujhe bada achha laga...haha!! Kya tamacha lagaya!! 😆 But Rajveer ki baat bhi sahi hai...isse mission ko khatra tha...but Gunny ne sambhal liya...and all is well that end is well...😃

Waise...part ka highlight to tha...the RN convo...thru phn!! 😆LOVELY!! 👏👏Major Rajveer ki Major giri dhari ki dhari reh jati hai jab saamne Biwi ho to...waise to Rajveer ka mazak bante dekhke mujhe zyada maza nahi aya...but end me wo khud hass padha na..isliye main bhi hassi...hehe!! 😆😳It was a really cute scene!!😳👏
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Khair...next Naaz pohuchi Yusuf ke waha...usse thoda aur bewkuf banane..😆😆.& aakhir me Gunny ne jackpot crack kiya!! Yusuf hi Nadir Shah hai...hmm...interesting revelation!! 😃

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