ANKAHI...{LRL-RN} #2 last Ud wd EPI n PG 100(21/11 - Page 45

Created

Last reply

Replies

738

Views

139.8k

Users

42

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi

res...😊

priii ne update kiya aur hum chale aaye..prii ka ff padhne chale aayeee..ohhh. ohhh...😆😆😆😆 hey...mujhe nahi pata tha ke tu meri yeh fic bhi padhti hai...😃

abhi padhke comment karthe hai...😃😉😃 aur tera wo 'ABHI'...kabhi nahi aata...😆

Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sainiayshi14

Hi Priya 🤗 Hiieee Ayushi...🤗

im soo much shocked😲😲 😲no not with update but itni jaldi update kar diya woh bhi time se pehle😆😆 😆well done...👏👏👏 lo kar lo baat...agar update jaldi karo...toh khinchai...na karo...toh bhi khinchai...huh...bhailai ka toh naam hi nahi hai...😛😆
Gunny:-"kyoun ke aaj Roshan jahan bhi hai...usi Maj ki wajah se...aaj uss ki jo bhi halat hui hai uss ka zimmedar bhi wo Maj hi hai...!!! isi liye jab bhi koi uss ke samne uss Maj ka naam leta hai toh baht violent ho jata hai ye...!!! apna badla jab tak pura nahi ho jata...ye aise hi rahega...
yeh baat toh gunny aka Taufiq ne bikul sahi kahi... he he he...double meaning se kah tah uss ne...😆
wah naina ne bhi kya jawab diya thappad se...😆😆😆 haan...after all apne rajveer sir ki private property hai wo...aur uss ek owner ke bare me koi kuch bura kahe toh naina kaise chup chap sunegi...😆
calm yourself down... hamara yeh mission khatam ho jane do...uss Maj ko pakad kar tumhare hawale kar denge...!!! tum apna pura badla uss se le lena...koi kuch nahi kahega...wo shikar pura tumhara hai...han han Naina shikar pura tumhara hi hain..😳😆😳 he he he...Gunny ne ji bhi kaha...naina ne bhi samjha...aur hum sabhi ne bhi...hai ki nahi...😆
Naina ne kaha:-"iss root ki sabhi line vyasht hain... kripiya thodi der baad dail kare...aur agar aise daantna hi hai...toh kripiya samne aa kar de...dhanyavaad...
wah Naina ne kya jawab diya Major ko jab dekho dante rehte hain are koi uske pati ke bare me kuch bole aur woh sunti rahe..nah😒😉 aur nahi toh kya...naina ne apne hath pair maar ke dikha diya na...😆
aur Naaz ne bhi kya khoob acting ki hain..👏👏👏 uss ka charch bhi toh strong hain na iss mission me...
oho toh yeh yusuk hi nadir saha hain😡🤢but main ab bhi thodi si confused hoon ki yusuf hi nadir saha hain ya nahi woh kya hain na mere dimag ki batti thodi der se jalti hain 😆😆 ab yeh raaz toh mujhe agle part mein hi pata chalega...😊😊 nahi agle part me toh nahi...par haan...jaldi pata chal jayega...😉
update.soon lo tumne hi kaha ke...'ud soon'...aur agar ud jaldi karrti hun toh khinchai bhi karti ho...😆
'n' take care of ur self😊⭐️ wo toh main hamesha karrti hun...😛
Love
Ayushi.⭐️

Thanksss Ayushi...😃
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

awesome part
loved the new twist
plz continue soon

Thanksss Prerna...😃
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
Thanksss Nisha...😃
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome, brilliant part
loved it

Thanksss Rakhi...😃
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

priya u r an amazin writer...awesome it is :)

Thanksss Tina...😳
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: backy

hi priya Hiiieee😃

what an awesome part... thank youuu...😃
good job he he he...thanksss 😃
awww...why did u burn ur hand?????...i guess it wasn't ur fault...god bless u!!!! nahi yaar...meri galati nahi thi...main toh aarati karte karte bass so rahi thi...😃
loved the part Thank you...😃
its toltally fine if we didn't get some RN scene ...atleast the mystery have been solved...i colud not believe it... nadar/yusuf/navan...is one person. abhi tak ye pura clera thode hi na hua hai...😛
...LOL...naina really hit akram n yusuf...wow...it was hilariuos!!!! ab uss ke hubby ko koi kuch kahe toh wo kaise sunn sakti hai yaar...ha ha ha...😆
naaz's acting was superb...the way she act like she was depressed n sad...was amazing...even yusuf didn't get any hint!!!! ab direction raj ne diya hai toh Naaz ki acting bhi toh achhi hi hogi na...he he he...
RN phone scene was really good...and funny!!!!! thank you...😃
priya...i hope u get soon...god bless u!!!!! arey wo toh minor burn tha...main thik hun yaar...😃
love u sweety...plz try to cont soon love ya...😃
esha

Thanksss Esha...😃
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Priya hiiieee suhana...😃

Update was just brilliant..👏👏👏 Thank you...😃
Missed RN in this but the story requires this separation.😃 The turning point was where the biggest mystery is revealed that Nadir saha is none other than Yusuf.😲😲😲. chalo tum ne RN par mera POV toh samjha...!!! par Nadir saha ke bare me abhi tak clear nahi hai...😉
Gunny is really intelligent.👏👏 tumhe shaq tha kya...😛
Yusuf was eagerly waiting for Gunny to call him..he is quite impressed with his talks.he really believes that Gunny belongs to some big terrorist organization. ab script aur direction raj ka hai toh ache achhe bhi maat kha jaye...aur Yusuf toh phir bhi villian hai...😆
Naina and Gunny took a gr8 risk by visting Yusuf but raj's planning was brilliant.
he knew that his plan is gud but still Naina was involved in it and this was making him nervous. ab ek lauti biwi hai toh Major saab ki sitti-pitti toh gumm hogi hi...😛
Akram and Yusuf ab poora trust karne lage hain Gunny par...woh uski saari shartein bhi accept kar raha tha..kahan jayenge bach ke...
Naina aka Raunak ne to Yusuf aur Akram ko ekdum chup hi karwa diya apne thappad se.😆😆😆 gud one..!! they desrve much more but abhi ke liye yeh hi kaafi tha. aur jyada kuch karti toh naina pakdi jati...isi liye maine risk nahi liya...he he he...😆
Raj was quite relieved to know that his plan was successful but he was shocked to know that Naina slapped Yusuf...nahi Naina ne toh Akram ko thappad mara tha...yusuf ka toh uss ne gala dabaya tha...😆
he called her to scold her and as usual apne Major to apni wife se theek se naraaz hona bhi nahin jante.😆😆😉 haan...ab yeh toh LRL ki zamane se chalta aa raha hai yaar...Naina tab bhi kabhi raj ko bolne nahi deti thi...!!! ek ek scene toh aisa tha ke...raj bass naina ko dekhta jata tha...aur naina bass bolti jati thi...😆
Naaz is playing her part well now.she is showing that she no longer trust Raj and Yusuf is convinced with her lie. ab wo bhi toh iss mission ka hissa hai na...use bhi sab kuch perfect karrna hi padega...😃
Now every1 knows the identity of Nadir Saha..
Pls continue soon
Bye

Thanksss Suhana...😃
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

😲... Is baar itni jaldi 😆😆😆 time se pehle 😆😆... credi kise du.. 😛😛 is baar toh Adil bhi nahi hai 😳...chalo Raunak ko de deti hoon 😳😆... raunak toh &th oct tak khisak gaya...!!! aur rahi baat adil ki toh...yehi samajh lo ke Adil ki yaad me Maj ki jaldi entry ho gayi... 😆jokes apart ... Thanx 4 a soon UD 😳😳...Good to have Major back much before i expected 😳😆... ab khinchai bandh bilkul...hadh hai yaar...thodi si tarif hi karr diya karo...par nahi...meri BAND bajane hamesha taiyar rehte ho tum sab...😆...khair bajane ke liye bhi shukriya...😆

UD as usual too good 👏👏... Loved the 2 brothers 😆😆😆 Taufiq & Roshan 😆😆... surely Major saab ka superhit plan 😳... 👏👏... koi shaq... maj saab hain toh dimag bhi majorly chalega na...😆

Naina 🤣... oops i mean Roshan 😆😆😆 ... Major koi kuch bole...control nahi hua na 😆😆😆 thapad laga diya 😆👏👏... bravo girl was abt to kill yusuf 😆😆😆 haan wo toh Gunny ne sambhal liya...varna Maj ke mission ek liye kuch bhi nahi bachta...naian wohi sab kuch khatam kar ke aa jati...😆

Hospital scene 🤣... Huda kisi din pitega Major se 😆😆😆...bahut tang khichta hai 😆😆😆 he he he...par kya hai na Maj saab kuch jyada hi meherbaan hain uss par isi liye kuch nahiu kahete...!!! after all maj saab ko confession ke liye final dhakka usi ne diya tha na...😆
& Naina 😆😆😆 ...phone par bade romantic dialogue bole ja rahe hai 😆... guess she didn't noticed Major naraz the usse 😆😆😆 tabhi wo bol rahi thi...use pata tha ke Maj saab aise hi react karrnewale hain...isi liye...😆

Good to know Yusuf & Nadir ki mystery solve hui... that they are 1 & same 😊😊... now Major ready for action 😳😳 maj toh fic ko starting me hi ready ho gaye the...maine hi kuch aur chiz daal ke unhe busy rakha hua tha...😛

All the best 👍🏼 for the mission 😳... tumhara wish unn tak pahunch gaya hai...aur maj ne spl THANX bhi bheja hai tumhare liye...😉

continue soon 😳😳...& yes take care of ur 2 fingers abhi sab kuch thik hai dear...

😊

Thanksss Purnima...😃
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago
Sweet-Lioness thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ridhz21

Hi Priya Hiii Radhika...

Wow!!! Itni jaldi update 😆...well done👏👏 he he he😆...Thank you...😆
thx for soon update...next part bhi soon hi aayega...😆
Update was awesome...loved it Thank you...😃
Major koi kuch bura bole...Naina aka Roshan ne laga diya na thapaad😆😆...Gunny ne sab sambhal liya haan...varna...naina kisi ka murder karr ke hi manti...😆
Huda ek din pitega Raj se😆 ab herkat aisa karr raha hai toh peetega hi na...vaise raj ne ek do baar toh apna hath saaf karr hi diya uss par...!!! RN ke shadi ke ek din pahle...aur jab ek din pond ke paas wo naina ke sath baitha hua tha...n Huda ne naina par Nazar rakhi thi...kuch yaad aaya...😆
Loved Naina phone conversation...wah kya jawab diya Naina ne...too gud😆😆 he he he...aur maj saab ki bolti bandh ho gayi...😆
Yusuf he Nadir Saha hai mystery solved.

Take care of ur 2 finger ...hope its better now haan...abhi sab thik hai...😃
'n'
Continue soon 😊

Luv 🤗
Radhika

Thanksss Radhika...🤗

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47 · 5 years ago

Kumkum Bhagya: Rishton Ki Ankahi Kahani - Chapter 108 updt on pg 22

Book cover by Prii @SweetButSpicy. Thanks a million Prii for this wonderful book cover.

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 4 months ago

COVER BY AISHWARYA (Mystic_Muse) SUMMARY Suzanne Miller , an Indian Origin Canadian Citizen adopted by the Miller family, who goes on a quest to...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: dellzcreationz · 9 months ago

In Your Memories Book 1 (Last Chap Pg 12+ Imp Note Bk 2)

Siggi by Sandhya (@sevenstreaks) (P.S this was my pitching picture to the production houses - which Sandy had done for me a couple of years...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".