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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Congrats for the new thread...

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SiniHanda

@SiniHanda

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

Never before have I read as perfect a consummation scene. NEVER.

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zaqxsw

@zaqxsw

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Beautifully written...
A difficult part indeed... After I read it completely, I was just wondering how difficult it must have been for u to write this part...
Great work... hats off...
and I love the ending line... 😊😊😊😊😊
Thanks for the pm
Please update soon...😊

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Congrats on the new thread.

"...his exhausted and desperate gaze that awaited my response".

In face of Geet's constant running away, Maan did what he thought would finally anchor her to him.

Hope it stays that way, rather than creating another wedge between them.

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Huner

@Be.edgy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Amazing part . . Their first intense moments . . I guess Maan did it to confirm that Geet is not leaving him . . He lost it when Geet ran away from hence the intimate moment was outcome of it . .
Beautifully written . . 👏

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gangesegb

@gangesegb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

congratzzz 4r new thread...

awesome update...

loved it...

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609931

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Congrats on the new thread
I always look forward to your updates because I love the way you write
I can't help but think that Maan forced her to sleep with him, especially as poor Geet has a million & one thoughts running through their head about their relationship. I do get it from his point of view though, that he wants her to accept what she's always trying to deny - I hope this makes sense lol, it doesn't make much sense to me but I hope you'll understand what I'm trying to say 😊