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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
congratz for new thread
awesome update... very beautifully written!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
This is indeed a very difficult story to write but I wonder if the problem even has a solution from the society point of view. Of course true love doesnt give up for hurdles like these. May be you have answers during the course of the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG..OMG..LOVED THE UPDATE. and wow.. The dark angel.. MAAN will never leave geet. OMG. IM shocked. Such a big step they took. Well love it. I think for maan it was necessary to make geet only his. And make her realize how strong their love is. Just love geet POV. well u r great as always in ur every update. Hats off to u... Love u.. For giving such a beautiful update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I luvd the mixture of emotions. Geets' denial to maan was only for the sake of aashas. Everytime she thought about maan, she would give in but everytime she thought about how their relation is percieved , she would deny him... So in the nutshell , I'm not taking this as if maan forced himself onto her rather he didn't submit to the acusations ppl had for their relationship.
It was just a little sad coz geet didn't get to enjoy her body uniting with her soulmate and viceversa. Even maan was very disturbed and scared of loosing geet forevr. It was more of his last choice... Any desparate measures to claim geet forever...
I guess since their relation is so complicated, their first time couldn't b all that rosy n happy. It had to b complicated.
I'm scared if guilt will prevail maan in the morning. He is quite a jaanu dude... His pov was the confirmation.
I really really really hope nxt time it's initiated by geet... So we can have some settlement of scores.
Btw Lena this mustve been a hard part to write. Good job dear.
Waise if u get any harsh comments, dil pe mat Lena. U have to have seen the world for long to understand ur update. It wud b very easy for sum1 to think that maan took advantage of her. It's kinda hard to distinguish between her rejections for the world and submittance for him. Geet also craves for him but she thinks too less of herself to think that she can b a part of him. So much so that she wud luv to b united with him, she would nvr ask for that... Atleast not for the first time.
That's it for my ranting.
Thank u for a rollercoaster of emotional ride.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dat was quite unexpected but passionate sometym i use to doubted abt Maans intentions i feel he taking smkind revenge 4rm her but anyway. . . .
But wats prblw in maan geet relation i know maan is her foster brother but u know in chennai their is a tradition elder girl of d family will get married wid her maternal uncle. . . . Even cousins can marry . . . . I m talking abt getting married wid ur blood relative. . . . Den wats wrong in Maan geet relation.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lena... I m so sorry havent been able to post comments on previous parts... but i ve been tryin to keep up with ur updates...

Loved this part... its just so heart wrenching to see this relationship.. i dont know wht u ve in mind for the future but for now it almost feels like it's a love which has trials, tribulations and loads of heartache written all over it...

Please update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
omg that was one hot and beautiful update...loved it immensely...and congrats for the new thread..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE MAAN HAS FORCEFULLY MADE LOVE TO HER SO THAT SHE WONT GO AWAY FROM HIM I KNEW IT HE WONT LET HER GO SO EASILY
I HATE these ashas they are such witches hate them so much
maan is realy a dark angel for geet
waiting for next part eagerly want to know what will happen now
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
OMG. It was brilliant. I cannot even imagine what will happen next. I realized that while reading the update, i was barely breathing. Loved it Lena. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
congo shongo
new thread
uff i hate those evils
wow maaneet became one
love this line
I fell asleep with my lover beside me, until I would have to awaken to the catastrophe that anticipated my arrival.


simply fantastic

love it
waiting next part
thanks pm

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