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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

Oh dear where is the update?

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
Oh dear where is the update?

Half done. It'll be posted in a few hours. 😊

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

<font color="#ff0033">Half done. It'll be posted in a few hours.😊</font>

Happy writing :)
hope they find sum peace and us too ;)

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Happy writing :)
hope they find sum peace and us too ;)

who, maaneet?

Idk. My hearts stirring. Hopefully it dosn't translate on the paper.

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Personal thanks to zooni20, myedward12, zarqaa_x, bhanu_rekhag, princessrashida

Originally posted by: PurplePetal
An update!!! YAH!!!...i thought i missed it..but i didnt!!!..i think😕

The beginning was completely bittersweet. It had the essence of geet's undeniable love for Maan along with her decision of self- sacrifice...all in all bittersweet. But it was sad to think that Geet truly doesnt understand the complete meaning behind Maan's love for her, and vise versa.
yep, thats her flaw. 😊
I loved the simile you used about the last resort in Geet's POV. it simply perfect and nothing less...
Lolz, didnt notice i put it there 😆
She left😭...but to tell you the truth, i expected it...so you are completely random😉...but it was heart wrenching feeling Maan's side of the suppose break up...it was awful. They love each other so much...
i am what u call cliche 😃. wonder if i will ever fall in lov that way 🤔
Yash, oh Yash. Can you be my best friend...seriously. You can be the sweet nice person that is always there for you, and calls you stupid when are, and is just fun loving. Im jealous beyond measures...Yash is simply amazing. And than there is Maan who is always hating on him, not that i dont mind the jealousy, but still. Yash is fine for me...
lmao, i want a friend like him too. but friends r rare gems. that cuz maan is crazy 🤣
and the Ashas. Truly Tasha is the smartest of the bunch, and Sasha is b**tch, along with her fellow gossip team. Maan is truly assertive, but he didnt really hurt her that bad, according to himself and Geet. Hope it works out. and make sure he gets leader of the pack as well..
i wish he did. i was holding figners before i typed something too violent. i was like...hold it...hold it in. 😆
press conference, i can only think what this means, I really hope that i am right, although scared at the same time...but waiting for what you have in store for us!!!
press conference...hmm
Loved the bittersweet update. Amazing, and loved the new flipping POV thing you did. I was really nice to understand both sides of the story. Loved It or maybe more!!!!!
i did it cuz i cudnt debate on wat pov i cud use. they were both needed.

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Personal thanks to ShaIve, jyoti_I, maaniqra, maan4eva, riddss,

Originally posted by: JayaR
OMG OMG OMG...Maan actually threatened them and warned them to stay away from his Girl...

woow... I dont have words for that part... Asha's u guys are in kneww deep trouble...u betta watch out...

lolz i guess the triple OMG's indicate ur happiness 😆
lmao, yep, nobody messes with MSK 😉

Originally posted by: zahra15
good for the ashas...i hate them for making geet sacrificing her love for maan...i wished maan gave them a few slaps...press conference...this sounds great...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

they definitely spread poison in her mind.
lmao, i was going to do that. but it nvr makes a man lok good if they hurt girls 😉

Originally posted by: spvd
part 29
nice part...
though Geet is not gonna be with Maan...
what is Maan gonna do?
the next part is gonna be interesting...
vont soon...

maybe win back geet? 😉

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Personal thank you to zaara2212, gcddfan, simi91

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans
Sorry if i hurt you. But i am fed up with this in one part Maaneet is toghter and next they have breaked up. And Geets behavouier is annoying me. If i would be her i had tell Maan the truth.

I hope i didnt hurt you. I really like. Your FF bcs its diffrent consept. But the track is getting on my neourves. Hope you dont mind what i write. If i have hurt you then sorry

Amina

First, my apologies for disappointing you. Second, there is no need to be sorry. I am open to criticism 😊.
I know Geet's behavior is irritating. Her way of thinking can get pretty irritating, but I wanted keep true to her character rather than make her happy, happy. That's not her.
Thanks for giving your pov. I cannot say anything except that I'm sorry that the track is getting on your nerves.
I lost my hand in where the story flows the minute I began writing it. I just go where the characters take me, in this case Geet.😆
But if you are worried about them not getting together. I promise you a happy ending 😉

Originally posted by: seemamary
Amazing yaar, but i want to see geet coming back to maan forever. Iam just tired of seeing geet always denaying about her love for maan.plsss update soon.

yep, that's her flaw. she cant stop running away 😛

Originally posted by: sonali_N
all updates r awesome
loved it
sorryyy for d late commenttt

Apology accepted thought it was not needed 😉

Originally posted by: t_areeb
it was high time for maan to do something ... i really want him to answer back Naintasha

She will hav her time too. 😉

Originally posted by: SOLACEofEYES
Thank u 4 pm.
Oh even after cosummation she is not ready to b wid him. I want to ask u i dont knw whether read it correct or not did dey slept in garden, koi aspas tha nahi kya waha. I mean Oh God wat am i saying tumara ff hai kuch b hosakta. But plz clear my doubt.

I dont think, consummation necessarily gurantees a person to stay with another forever. Then, there wouldn't be so many single mothers in this world, right?😉
Nope, they did it in the garden, sleeping in a moon swing 😆
hey, i cant b that random 😛

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago

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Lena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#168

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Originally posted by: kareena32
AWESOME UPDATE AS USUAL I LOVE IT BOTH ARE SUFFERING ALL BECAUSE OF THESE ASHAS I HATE THEM SO MUCH WHAT MAAN WILL DO NOW AT THE PRESS CONFERENCE ITS SO SAD GEET HAS LEAVE MAAN 😭 I REALY HOPE THEY WILL BE TOGETHER AFTERALL THEY ARE NOT REALY BROTHER SISTER
UPDATE NEXT PART SOON PLEASE

AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR PM

WITH LOTS OF ❤️ LOVES

WAITING EAGERLY FOR NEXT PART CONT SOON

I know. Asha's definitely instigate it 😭
thats the problem. the reader may know about it but the public in MOE story doesn't.

Originally posted by: ajenn
OOh Geet. She thinks that their separation will help him find his happiness
Doesnt she realize all he need is her love. She is not only hurting herself but also Maan.
He is in love for the very first time, and Geet choose to leave him.
Though in reality I might react in Geet's way but since its Maaneet am in urge to see them together.
I wish to see an happy ending. Press conference, is Maan planning planning to declare relationship with as public.
Plz cont soon...

she doesn't know how he feels so she relies on her insecurity to be the judge of his words. she doesn't believe in him. and the base of love is faith.
ahahaa, aren't we all. MG rocks that way. they cant be apart 😆
Happy ending will happen.
lol, i guess since chap 30 is up already. u already got ur answer.

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
ohhh this is so sad...they are both hurting...god knows what maan is planning now...

maan is planning wat maan does best 😆

pink

Originally posted by: serenelove

Originally posted by: mirnalini
Hey!!😃
I've been a silent reader so far.

But I have to tell you something.

u r? ur name is so familiar 🤣

You're a gifted writer, and I mean it when I say it.

thank u 😆

It's very rare when one reads exceptional writing.

The way you describe the emotions and feelings of people is truly beautiful.

its not exceptional. its raw. stil developing here 😛. thank u. thought i dont describe enuf 😛

You should try and publish.

I've read so much literature, and I'm not reffering to the FFs on this forum when I say that.

And I am telling you that you definitely have a gift when it comes to creative writing.

i can try but publishing is like winning a lottery...luck. evn the worst writers can published if they hav good connections. evn the best writers dont get published b/c they are unaware of the real world.
thank u so much. hopefully i can use the gift for good 😆

So, I hope that you heed my advice and try and publish something.

Start with magazines, and may be someday you'll become a bestselling author.

i published a poem and essay based on a contest. i dont know how far i can get. we'll see, won't we? 😉

All the very best.

Love

Mirnalini⭐️
Thank you for believing in me.

Originally posted by: undisclosed
uh oh!...what is maan upto?...i wonder how old they are and what year in college aare they in?...🤓...i really loved this update and maan's determination!

college going. but b/c the years r unnecessary to the plot. it hasnt been mentioned. 😊

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago