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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

Awesome update

loved it loadz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da PM

Muahhh

Xxx

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@DrashtiDhamiNo1

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

loved the update

really enjoyed it

looking forward to the next part

cont soon please

thanks for the pm!! :D

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

Edited by serenelove - 14 years ago

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mirnalini

@mirnalini

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Hey!!😃

I've been a silent reader so far.

But I have to tell you something.

You're a gifted writer, and I mean it when I say it.

It's very rare when one reads exceptional writing.

The way you describe the emotions and feelings of people is truly beautiful.

You should try and publish.

I've read so much literature, and I'm not reffering to the FFs on this forum when I say that.

And I am telling you that you definitely have a gift when it comes to creative writing.

So, I hope that you heed my advice and try and publish something.

Start with magazines, and may be someday you'll become a bestselling author.

All the very best.

Love

Mirnalini⭐️

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

wud you plz add me to ur PM list I came across ur writing through after reading window pane ... ...nd now m fan of ur writing plz add me to ur pm 😊

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Personaly thank you to honeygrape 😊

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
Geet ... Hmmm... She is crazy.
So she think the only key to maan's happiness is her absence.
silly girl , she is hurting maan and herself.
All she evr does is think about maan , that's y she is always ready to walk away.
Their luv is complicated. I hope sumthing knocks sense into her.

Thank u Lena for a wonderful read

wel, hopefully she realizes soon how stupid she is behaving, na? 😉
thats her problem. she finds maan more sacred than love. if that makes any sense?

Originally posted by: Nazmaa
when are you updating x

Editted ...
Okay i have seen the next chapter lol :)
Poor maan why does geet alwys do that...
Maan made love to her n she just walked away...
How can she be sooo mean xx
Maan is just gorgeous n i hope he sorts those asha's out x

the thing is. she has been persuaded by him to be with him. thinking she wud b able to handle it. wen it actually happened. she cant handle it.
maan is definitely the bigger person for still goin after her.

Originally posted by: libra25
awesome...
our maan is a sher...
but geet.. i really dont understand her...
instead of pity i feel like hitting her...
if she could not carry the relation she should have never confessed and finished it of earliar
she is neither letting him go nor letting him enjoy...

i wonder what he is upto...press conference...
really looking forward to next part..
continue soon

geet is very complicated, yes. but if she was with him, it was for him. nd now she is letting go of him, for him.
our maan is smarter for sure 😉

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
So Emotional for Maneet. 😭 Happy that Maan has threatened Asha's. B******. Hate them.😡 Press conference???😕 Can't wait for update. Update soon plz.

lolz. i think he wanted to show him who they r messing wit for most part 😆
yep, press conference 😆

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Personaly thank you to msrt809, -dia-, mandymore, gangesegb 😊

Originally posted by: pushpi
Oh man cmon you had to split it into two to torture us more...

Update soon

lmao...sry 😆

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun
OMG Lena... this is the most touching story I have read I think... The situation is so complex, I cannot even imagine how things will or can get resolved for these two. Although I don't know how I would personally react to a similar situation in real life, I hope I will have the ability to not judge such emotions just superficially and still respect everyone's individual choices...

And for the sake of Maan and Geet, I hope they can be together... I really hope they can.

Please make this story a happy ending for them. Both of them have suffered so much, they deserve nothing but happiness. And I do hope they get more than their share.

Brilliant work.

is it rly so complex. it seems so easy in my mind. 🤣
oh god. lets hope u dont hav such a situation. lov shudnt hav to b so complicated
they wil be sooon 😉
there wil b a happy ending. 😊

Originally posted by: MaaneetLuverr
Beautiful update x
Urrghh hate geet for leaving maan
Poor maan for the first tym he fell in love and she left him
Love his threat to the asha'z
Cont soon Xx...

aw, dont hate geet 😆
he took out his rage on the asha's 🤣

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex
😲 Press conference?
Will Maan make his relationship with Geet public?

...maybee...😆

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 14 years ago

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

my genius, over achiever lena..u r amazing.

it's adorable of u to reply back to every comment.

that's a whole lot of time putting in the update and then all the replies. if u r ever too bust to write back, then don't worry about me atleast. if i c that u've replied to every1 and not me..i won't b offended. i'll know u were short on time 🤗

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

uh oh!...what is maan upto?...i wonder how old they are and what year in college aare they in?...🤓...i really loved this update and maan's determination!

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Personal thanks to kiran99, rosesana, kashforever06, milliemaaneet

Originally posted by: humz_786
Edited:

First of all sorry for not commenting for ages, I was so busy with college the exams and coursework deadlines that I hardly got the time for coming on IF, but got some time so commented 😃
No apologies needed 😊

Awesome update 🤗

Loved both parts that you updated

Hated it when Geet said to Maan that she is probably just another one of his flings even though she knows his feelings for her are love.. I can't believe she still said that even though she knows that Maan can read her eyes like a mirror..

Hey, she had to try, right? 😉

Can't believe Geet is leaving Maan, because she thinks that by her being in Maan's life his life will get ruined, but if he is willing to stay with her then what is her problem? 😭

She doesn't believe. That's her problem. Her pessimistic has impacted her decision towards love.

For the first time Maan has fallen in love and his love has left him to burn in that fire... 😡

lolz, seem like u've taken his side.

Loved Maan's threat to the Asha's that was well deserved 👏
Can't believe Geet just stood there watching him knowing that he will be going through so much pain

lolz, she cudnt stop him evn if she wanted to. 😆

Yash's reaction was 😕 he had nothing to say to advise Geet, to stop Geet from doing wrong or helping the problem from being sorted out!?!?

B/c he cannot relate.

Press Conference 😲
Is Maan planning on making his and Geet's relationship public? But will that make anything better?

u'll see. 😉

Can't wait for the next update to see whether the press conference is on, and if it is then what will be the consequences?

xx

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Update! :D That was a great update! Maan went up to the Asha's, but where was NT? She's the one that needs strangling.. Waiting for the press conference. :)

I wud say the whole team needs stranglign, not jus her 😆

guess u noe wat its gonna be then 😛

Originally posted by: KaSh-Maneet-Fan
hiii
awesome update
loved it
poor maan
i dont like geet running away
cant wait 4 more
loved da cliffhanger
what is maan planning 2 do
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

i dont think anybody likes geet runing away. after all, it doz mean they wont b together, rite? 😉