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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
nice SS,...

amazing start...

geet is deaf......y cant any1 c that...

continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
omg thats so sad on geet she is deaf and an orphan and o no the precap doesnt look so good :(
lovely update tho
continue soon this ss is really interesting!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice update.. poor geet.. sameera is so selfish... continue soon
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thats different...

i liked it... n maan being puppy dog in love for sameera more interesting.

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Waiting.when is nxt update 🥱 🥱
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT
THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 2

maan gave a disgusting look to her and came back near his car...he got into the car and left...Then geet slowly recalled all the incidents and understood what actually happened..Geet felt bad for not saying even thanks to that person who helped her. Then she looked at the paper she was holding...

geet: pragathi maidan...ab yaha kaise pahunchna hey...hmm...

Although geet was deaf...she was quick in grasping...she looked around...infront of bus station she saw metro railway station. She entered inside the station. As it was her first visit to such type of metro stations she was amazed. Then the route map caught her attention. She looked carefully at the map.

geet: iss mein tho pragathi maidan dikh raha hey...per yeh sara yellow aur blue lines kya hey...kuch samaj nahi aaraha hey...ab kya karu?

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"samyuktha...yeh kya hey beta...kamsekam ek phone tho karsakthi thi na...aap achanak aagaye...aur ab call karke batha rahe hey ki mein aagayi ..ghar mein ithna saare cars hey...aap metro mein kyu aarahahey" said savithri devi while talking to her grand daughter samyuktha on phone...

samyuktha: daadi...bas aapko surprise dena chahthi thi...aur rahi metro ki baath...aap ko patha hey na...metro mujhe kithna pasand hey...

savithri: haan mujhe patha hey..lekin metro hamare ghar thak nahi aayegi na...ghar pahunchney keliye aapko car mein tho aana hi padega na...

samyuktha: isliye mein aapko bhula rahi hu...aap seedha anand vihar pahuch jayiye...waha se hum ghar chalenge...waise woh angry young man maan kaha hey?

savithri:aapko patha hey na maan ke baare mein...tho aap kyu pooch rahge hey...khaie...mein bas anand vihar pahunchne vali hu...

samyuktha: teek hey ...bye daadi

savithri devi sighed and within few minutes she reached anand vihar metro station..she went inside and waited for her grand daughter...while she was waiting acidentally she looked at geet who was struggling in understanding the map...

savithri: yeh ladki...lagtha hey iss shahar mein naya hey...per aise map ko kyu dekh rahi hey

savithri went near geet...and stood behind her...but geet didn't notice and was busy in looking at the map...when she looked at the reflection of savithri on map...geet immediately turned behind...

savithri smiled...

savithri: aap aise map kyo ithni concentration se kyu dekh rahe hey?

geet carefully looked at her lips and understood what she was saying...

geet: ji...mein iss shahar mein pehli baar aayi hu aur ...mujhe pragathi maidan jaana hey...lekin mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha hey ki iss ghaadi mein kaise jaana hey...aur kaha utharna hey...kya aap mere madath karsakthe hey

savithri smiled...and said "sure...why not"..savithri devi then clearly explained geet where she has to take ticket...which line she has to choose and where she has to get down to reach pragathi maidan...geet observed her lips carefully while talking and kept in mind what savithri said...savithri sensed some trouble when she looked at geet...but didn't asked her as she thought it will not be wise to ask such personal things...geet clearly understood how to reach pragathi maidan...she then thanked savithri and moved ahead to ticket counter...savithri looked at geet while she was leaving...

savithri: patha nahi mujhe kyu aisa lag raha hey ki yeh ladki ko kuch problem hey...jo bhi ho...bhagwan uski raksha kare...

her thoughts were interrupted when samyuktha screamed "daadi" and hugged her...

savithri: aapki iss metro ki chakkar ne aaj mujhe kisi ladki ko help karne ka mauka diya..chalo ek tho achcha hua...aap ki iss sharath se...

samyuktha smiled and gave hi5 to daadi...both left the anand vihar metro to reach khurana mansion...

samyuktha: daadi maan bahuth yaad araha hey...kyu na hum unse pehle mil lethe hey...

savithri: samyuktha...woh shaym ko ghar aajayega na...

samyuktha: nahi dadi..he will come at late night...mujhe abhi unse milna hey...abhi maan ko call karke poochthi hu...ki woh kaha hey...

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maan after that incident became more furious...when he reached noida site...the workers were on strike...this irritaed him further...he controlled his anger a bit anf finally solved the problem of workers...he sighed in relief...just then he received call from samyuktha...
a smile came upon his face...

maan: samyuktha...kaise ho...

samyuktha: maan...mein yaha delhi mein hu...

maan: you little devil...mujhe yeh baath bathaya kyu nahi..ki tum aarahi ho...

samyuktha: haan..agar bathadiya hotha...tho kya tum mujhe lene aathe..nahi..na..tum tho apne kaam mein busy rahthe ho...

maan got hurt with her words...he felt very bad as he was unable to spend time with his little sister...

maan: chalo yeh sab baath chod...tum ghar pahunchgayi na...mein abhi ghar aaraha hu...

samyuktha: nahi man..hum abhi rasthe per hey...bathao...tum kaha ho...mein aur daadi waha pe aathe hein...after that sab milkar bahar lunch karenge...

maan: teek hey..then...iam at noida site...jaldhi aajao...

when maan was busy in talking to samyuktha...he didn't notice that he came on to the road while talking...he couldn't see the car coming behind him until it stopped with sudden brake infront of him...maan stood speechless in shock..the person inside the car looked angrily at maan...and said "marne keliye meri hi ghaadi mila hey kya?"...maan wanted to punch him right on his face...but before that the person left...

samyuktha heard some sound and after that maan stopped talking...

samyuktha: maan...maan...kya hua...baath karthe..karthe..kyu rukh gaya...

maan was not at all listening to samyuktha...the words spoken by that person in the car echoed...in him...suddenly he remembered the morning incident at anad vihar...

maan: mujhe uss ladki se aise baath nahi karni thi...mein kaafi rude tha..uss samay...per kya karu halath hi waise thi...

then he heard samyuktha's voice on phone...he continued with his call...

maan: kuch nahi...tum jaldi aajao...noida site pe...

having said these words he cut the call...but his rude behavior strated to make him feel guilty...

maan: maan...galathi tumhara nahi..uss ladki ka thi...tho tum kyu guilty feel kar rahe ho...chod...dur rahi iss type ki sympathies se...

He snapped out of his thoughts when samyuktha and daadi arrived...samyuktha hugged maan...all the three left noida site for lunch...

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Geet successfully reached pragathi maidan...there she enrolled her name...she started making her paintings...she was master in making glass paintings...she enrolled her name in glass paintings competition too...She was too much involved in painting that she forgot to take breakfast and lunch...when she completed her paintings it was almost evening...all the paintings were kept outside as an exhibition..geet waited outside in the hall for results...

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After lunch...maan,daadi and samyuktha reached khurana mansion...maan was busy doing his work on laptop even in thecar..this irritated samyuktha...

samyuktha: maan...agar aapko..kaam karna hi hey..tho aap office jaa sakthe na..kyu aaya hamare saath...

maan smiled...and said "yeh kaam bahuth zaroori hey"

samyuktha sighed and looked at daadi...daadi was looking at the magazine...which was on the table...then she looked at watch and got shocked..

savithri: oh no...maan...mujhe ab nikalna hoga...

maan and samyuktha looked at her ...and said at a time kaha?"

savithri: aaj painting exhibition hey...shyaam 6 bhaje...mujhe jaana hoga...

maan: daadi..not again...pichle baar aap..aise hi exhibition gaya aur ek sada hua painting ko khareed ke leke aaya...

savithri gave him an angry look...and said "maan...woh art hey..art...god gift hotha hey..usko aisa mazak nahi karthe hey beta"

maan: teek hey...ab art ke baare mein plz class math lijiye...

savithri: ok then..maan i will leave...samyuktha ...tum bhi aana chahthey ho...

samyuktha thought for a second...and said "chalo daadi...ghar mein baitke...mein kya karne wala...mein bhi aathi hu..aapke saath"

Both samyuktha and daadi left for exhibition...maan sighed in relief...then he called sameera...but her phone was switched off...in frustrtation he threw phone away...

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In painting exhibition daadi and samyuktha were impressed by geet paintings...especially her glass paintings...

savithri: wah...kamal ki paintings hey...aaj tak meri zindagi mein aise paintings kabhi nahi dekhi...

samyuktha: haan daadi...they are really amazing...

savithri started thinking...samyuktha looked at her in confusion and asked "aap kya soch rahe hey?"

savithri: mein soch rahi hu ki ktu na hum iss painter ghar bhulva ke...humare liye glass paintings banvaye...waise bhi ghar remodelling chal raha hey na...uske baad saare ghar mein tarahtarah ki glass paintings rakh liya tho achcha hoga...

samyuktha: teek hey..lekin glass paintings bahar bhi milthey hey na...

savithri: milthe hey...lekin is ratah ki amazing paintings nahi milthey...

samyuktha: yeah...its true...

savithri then contacted the organizers to know about the painter...but they refused to disclose the details until the completion of competition...

savithri: no problem...aap woh painter se kahiye ki..unki paintings mujhe bahuth achcha laga..aur mein aise paintings apni ghar keliye banwana chahthi hu...tho ap unhe mujhe contact karne keliye kahiye...

In a hurry savithri devi gave the visiting card of khurana constructions... instead of mansion...The organizers assured that they will inform the painter...savithri left the exhibition happily along with samyuktha...

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Geet waited impatiently for results...but to her bad luck her paintings were not liked by many...as a result she got a consolation prize that too out of sympathy as she was a physicality challenged person...as filled in the form...in which she got only a cash money of Rs 500/-..geet got disappointed...She couldnot control her tears...Actually she came to that competition with a lot of hope...she wanted that money for her treatment...for her surgery...All her hopes went to drain...With heavy heart she started to leave...But one of the organizers came near her and explained her with signals about savithri devi's offer...geet thanked god for helping in this way...she took the address from him and left for khurana constructions...that evening...

to be continued...



next: geet in khurana constructions (cont'd)😡☺️




Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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oh god ok nw i understood wt happened
argh tht maan cnt he ask first
god only know wt will happen next
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part...so, that is the reason for her to come in hurana constructions
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poor geet did not win the comp

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