Dil,Dosti etc,.~MG~3 Note pg150 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
loved it. oh god. suberb.
i have already read it 3 times.😊😊😊😊
this song is my fav.

thanks for update.
Edited by mannu1988 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
The part where Geet cleanly dissects Naintara's mistakes, the flaws in her thinking and her actions was brilliant! simply brilliant.Its soo easy to loose focus on such rational options such as studies , and a career cause they require consistent hardwork and dedication, and don't have romantic or dramatic thrills associated with them... easy for NT to forget of a career but persist obstinately on the other ridiculous argument of which marriage is better...

wow.. what else did Geet have to go through cuz of that?Her line about loosing her parents trust, friends and her love , confounded both Meera and I😕... what can be soo grievous that she was in soo much pain?sinking in it?

I liked this one thing about what you wrote- that even though Geet knows the precise reasons for what changed her, made her retreat into a shell, she still is unable to come out of it. Sometimes knowing everything about yourself , and others , all the rational cause-and-effects, still cannot necessarily help you overcome what has been dealt with through emotions.

A very sensitively dealt ff, this. loved the update. DO continue soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
such a long update thankyouu x
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
oh wow girl ..u did it👏
what a beautiful encounter between geet & nt.
geet's sarcastic laugh was so emotional.
geet's argument was well written. instead of yelling at her, geet was narrating nt's life story to her. trying to make her c that geet does understand , y she is so bitter with the world. 🤢
wow meera...what a great friend she is.
slaps were awsum. i'm so happy u made meera listen to all of nt's crap. with meera, yash and maan around..what can nt do to her. coz of meera, nt actually saw her mistake in judging geet. 👍🏼
really i'm thankful to u that u didn't drag the whole thing unnecessarily. meera's and nt's exchange was fast paced and brought the result of nt's realization. i'm at loss of words...how slick the whole update was.
geet's dance was so gracious..full of emotional termoil. maan was the spectator. no wonder he cudn't take it any more. whn she said maan...😍 wonder how maan lived through the moment. i wud've had a heart attack.

thanx for the wonderful read.
it was worth the wait.😃
thanx for the pm too.
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Fantastic Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Wow what an amazing update
Awww feel so sorry for geet,,she lost so much cuz of thi naintara,,,glad dat meera told NT that it was rajji that ruined her life not geet
Luvd geets dance moves,,maan was just tearing apart by seeing geet in this state
Now maan can't afford to lose geet whatsoever
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
wow awesomee
bt seriously hate NT
im just speechless
n cryinggg😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
Brilliant update Shika. Loved it thoroughly.

It almost seems like time for Maan and Geet to know their parallel identities, Rocky and Pari. Waiting to read more.

Edited by Soapoperasrfun - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
congrats
so it was evil NT
would never guess it
sh taking out all her pain
through the dance
finally accepted that geet his
life
wow meera confessed yash
simply fantastic
love it
now the story turning interesting
waiting waiting
thanks pm
Edited by sharmake11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
i like the way she replied back NT,
though it is sad to know she still cant trust anyone
and the way to let out her pain, beautifully written dance movements ... eagerly waiting for the part where they will come to know about rocky-pari

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