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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
I really didnt expect this would be the problem btwn Dev-Naintara.
As usual I tot Dev was being irresponsible.
At least Dev was able to open up his feelings towards Maan
and Naintara also got to know about Dev's feelings.
Really feeling sad for both of them.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
thanks for the update

so sad to hear abt Dev and NT
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey..Jwalamukhi...ab main ban gayi hoon asli jwalamukhi..two updates and no PM..that is not fair...but its ok...now u have send PM and I read both lovely parts.

Dev loves NT so much that he wants to die instead of watching her suffer now he has shared his problem with Maan...and now our problem solver Maaneet will do something for them I am sure.
Thanx for PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
great update n thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

THANKS FOR COMMENTING


Part 35

When maan and dev reached dining table nainatara tried her best to act normal as if nothing happened. maan and dev silently sat near the dining table without uttering a word. nainatara started serving food to them silently.Geet looked at them in confusion. Not able to take any more silence geet got up and screamed...

"its enough...yeh kya horaha hey...yaha pe...sab log ithna chup kyu hey...koi mujhe bhi bathyega ki kya hua hey yaha?"

nianatara looked at maan after listening to geet's words..dev was lost in his own sorrow that he didn't even heard what geet said...geet turned towards nainatara and said...

geet: didi...aap hi bathaye...hum dinner keliye yaha aaye hey..thaki hum kuch pal khushi se bitha sakhe...lekin aap sab aise mu phaila ke baite hey...kyu?

nainatara gave a weak smile to geet and said...

nainatara: aisa kuch bhi nahi hey geet...bas dev ko khane ke samay baath karna pasand nahi hey..isliye woh chup baita hey...aur inke saath rehke..mujhe bhi yeh aadath bangaya hey...

having said these she looked at maan and lowered her head...geet was not at all satisfied with that answer...she sensed something terribly wrong...when she was about to speak maan shook his head...signalling geet...to stop...geet instantly sat down and started eating silently without speaking a word after that.

After that silent dinner...dev stood up and started to leave...maan tried to stop him..but dev didn't listened to maan..dev hurriedly walked into his room and slammed the door with a force...nainatara ignored it and started clearing the things on dinning table as if nothing happened...geet observed everything silently...when she tried to clear the things on the dining table nainatara refused her politely...geet tried her level best to talk to her...but nainatara avoided her to maximum extent because she was scared that she may cry her heart out before geet which she hates to do in her life...with no choice left geet came back to the hall where maan was sitting...maan looked sad...which bothered geet...she came near maan...and sat beside him...

geet: kya hua maan...aap ithne udaas kyu ho?

maan sighed and looked at geet who was worried about him...he smiled..took her hand in his and was about to speak..just then nainatara came...seeing her maan kept quiet...geet looked at maan and nainatara in confusion...maan stood up...

maan: nainatara...ab hum chalthe hey...

nainatara nodded...geet got up and hugged nainatara...

geet: jiju se ek baar...bolkejaayenge...

nainatara: woh kya hey na...woh aaj thoda tired lag raha hey...mein unhe bathadhungi...

geet couldnot understand nainatara's behavior...maan understood geet situation...he tried to to manage by saying...

maan: geet...chale...

geet nodded and followed maan towards the door...tears rolled down from mainatara's eyes when maan and geet were leaving...when they left nainatara ran to her room and cried her heart out until all her energy flowed out as tears...

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Maan silently sat in the car...geet understood that maan was feeling bad about some issue...she slowly touched his cheek with her hand...he closed his eyes and allowed her to relieve his sadness with her touch...when she was about to remove her hand...maan hugged her ..tightly...as if he was scared that he may miss her...geet caressed his back...
geet: maan...kya hua...aap kyu ithne udaas hey...
maan came out of the embrace and sat straight...without giving any answer he drove the car towards the cottage...geet sat silently as she knew that maan will tell her about his reason for sadness...
while driving maan kept thinking about dev...then his thoughts got fixed on destiny...the destiny which destroyed the lives of dev and nainatara...the couple who were once the most happiest and luckiest in the world...today facing the wrath of destiny...when he thought about destiny the first person came into his mind was his geet...an unknown fear started to fill his heart...a fear of loosing her...a fear of destiny taking her away from him...his heart beat became faster...he felt like hugging geet and not letting her go in this life time...he stopped the car suddenly and looked at geet...she looked at him worried seeing his horrified face...
geet: maan...kya hua...aap ithna tense kyu hey...
said these words she started wiping his sweat on his face with her dupatta...she then took out water and made him to drink..this calmed maan to some extent...
he took a long breath and strated driving the car again...geet closed her eyes and started praying to relieve maan from this sadness...
When they reached the cottage maan got down the car and walked towards the beach...he sat in the beach looking into the sky...geet silently sat beside maan leaning her head onto his shoulder...
maan closed his eyes...trying to forget everything at that particular moment...he slowly turned and kept his head on geet's lap who was sitting beside him...he took her hand into his and kept it over his heart...geet caressed his forehead smoothly and lovingly...
maan: geet...
geet looked into his eyes...expecting him to share his pain...
maan: pehle baar mein zindagi mein helpless feel kar raha hu geet...pehli baar...aaj tak mein yahi maana ki insaan jo bhi chahtha hey woh haazma lega..lekin aaj mujhe patha chala ki kismath ke saamne insaan chah ke bhi kuch nahi karsaktha...
geet got surprised with maan's words...first time she she heard the words like destiny from him. She silently listened without interrupting him...
maan: geet...aaj mujhe azeeb sa darr lagraha hey...tumhe khone ka darr...
having said these words he hugged geet...geet got confused...
geet: maan...aap shanth hojayiye...aap kyu aise baathe kar rahe hey...
having said these words she hugged maan back and kissed him on his cheek to calm him...
maan: geet mujhe sach mein kismath se dar lagraha hey..pehli baar...jo kismat mere ma ko mujhse cheen liya...ab aage kya cheen lega mujhse...yeh sochke mujhe bahuth darr lagraha hey
geet: maan...aap kyu purane baathein yaad karrahe hey...aap pehle shaanth hojayiye...aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga
maan: ...mein tumhare bina jee nahi saktha geet...
geet: maan plz..mein aapko aise dard mein nahi dekh sakthi...kismat...kya karegi maan...jab aap mere saamne ho tho...mujhe patha hey aap kismath ko bhi badal sakthe hey...mere liye...kyunki aap mere maan hey...jo apna kismat kudh likthe hey...
maan got shocked with the confidence she has on him...
geet: maan...bala kismath kya keraga...jab aap mere saath ho...aap woh sab bhool jayiye..jab tak aap mere saath homge mujhe kuch nahi hoga...aap kuch nahi honedenge...
maan: per geet...mei..
geet closed his lips with hers ...interrupting his words...maan at that moment forgot everything and kissed her back which calmed his inner turmoil...
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nainatara wiped her tears...came out of her room and slowly walked towards dev's room...when she opened the door she saw dev crying holding her photo...he was drinking continuously to ease his pain...not able to see his pain..nainatara ran into dev's room and hugged him... crying her heart out...dev kissed her all over and hugged her back...he lost his control and started kissing her wildly...nainatara silently stood before dev without protesting...dev carried her in his arms and kept her on the bed...and started making love wildly and passionately...dev lost his senses ..he became wild with each passing second...he was enjoying everybit of her which he lost in this 2 yrs...
but for nainatara..it was not love making...because she lost the capacity and interest to do that..she lacked all the hormones necessary for that pleasure...every movement of dev caused an unbearable pain in her...she bit her lips trying to bear the pain...but couldnot as the pain was strong..her lips started bleeding...but she neither protested nor moved away..because the pain with which she is suffering now is far less than the pain ...of seeing dev suffering for her..she closed her eyes tight when she was not able to bear the pain anymore ...and lost her conciousness due to unbearable pain and bleeding...

to be continued...






Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
lovely FF...

loved reading it...'

plz add me to ur PM list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice part
I stalked you before i got the PM 😃
Poor geet is ignorant of the whole scenario and started behaving odd.
Had she known the situation she would have surely attempted to do some damage control.
Dont think Maan can keep it long from her.
Hope Maaneet work towards getting Dev tara together.
I am feeling so sad for Devtaara
Waiting to see Geet's reaction on the whole situation
Continue soon.


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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
loved it
thx 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
nice update. sad but love the concern of maan to loose geet. i hope nothing like happens to him. feel bad for him to be in this situation. thank for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh god poor NT n dev so much of sufferings. emotional update

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