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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 38

maan reached hospital and sighed in relief when he saw dev...out of danger...dev was brought to the room from operation theatre...maan sat beside dev...the sympathy which he had on dev vanished completely...because of dev's suicide attempt...maan was waiting to give dev a tight slap for committing such blunder...he snapped out of his thoughts when he received a call from geet...

maan: haan geet bolo

geet: maan...didi ko hosh agayi...

maan sighed in relief...

maan: chalo achcha hua...aur...ab nainatara kaisa hey...

geet: thoda kamzor hey maan...jiju kaise hey...

maan: he is out of danger..lekin ab thak hosh nahi aaya...naiantara poocha kya dev ke baare mein...

geet: haan man..lekin mein ne unhe jiju ke baare mein kuch nahi bathaya...

maan: teek kiya tumne...iss halath mein dev ke matter chupana hi teek hoga...

geet: hmmm..maan i love you

maan got surprised...

maan: ab achanak yeh kisliye...

geet: bas avyi...

maan: geet...tum jhoot bol rahe ho...kuch tho baath hey...tum tho avyi aisa kabhi nahi bolthi...chalo ab bathao...

geet: maan...kal aapko patha tha na...didi-jiju ke baare mein...lekin aapne apna friend ka personal issues...mujhse nahi share kiya...aur ek friend ka farz bahuth achche se nibaya...iss baath mujhe bahuth achcha laga...isiliye aap keliye i love you bola mein ne...

maan smiled...

maan: geet..iam sorry...hum kuch din...yaha happily spend karne aaye the...lekin yaha...pe..

geet: maan...aap aisa kyu soch rahe hey...shayad bhagwan hume didi aur jiju ke madath keliye yaha bheja hoga...

maan sighed...

maan: uff...geet...tumm ne phir shuru kiya apna bhagwan ka mantra...

geet: chalo woh sab chodiye...hum yaha se jane se pehle...didi-jiju ko kuch madath karna hey..mujhe unke halath dekha nahi jaa raha hey...

maan: lekin geet...yeh pati-patni ke beech ka maamla hey..aur isme hum kya karsakthe hey...

geet: lekin maan...agar hum aise hi chup rahe tho...yeh dodno patha nahi kya karke baitenge...aapne dekha hey na..ab kya hua hey

maan: geet..mujhe lagraha ki hume unke parents ko inform karna chahiye...woh hi saare baath teek karenge...

geet: nahi maan...unke aane se problem aur bhi bad jayega...

maan: haan geet..tum sahi keh rahi ho...tho phir iss problem ka solution...

geet: jiju...iss mushkil ka solution jiju hey...

maan: dev?

geet:haan maan...jiju hi ab iss problem ka solution hey...wohi didi ko iss depression se bahar le aaskatha hey...

maan: lekin geet...wohi khud...depression mein hey...unka kya?

geet: hmmm...isliye hume jiju ko depression se bahar lana hoga...let me correct hume..nahi aap...aap baath kijiye unse...aur samajhayiye unhe...

maan: mein...geet..tu pagal ho gayi kya...tumhe patha hey na..unka problem ...isme mein unhe kaise samja saktha hu...

geet: maan...yeh bahuth simple hey...agar jiju ko didi chahiye..tho unhe kismat se ladna hi hoga...yeh baath unhe samjana hoga...

maan: lekin geet ...

geet: maan...mujhe patha hey..aap..bahuth smart hey...aap kisko bhi apne baatho se mana sakthe hey...plz...baath kijiye jiju se...

maan remained silent...

geet: maan...maan...

maan: hmmm

geet: aap...karenge na...

maan:ji...kabhi aapka maan aapke koi baath inkaar kiya...

geet smiled...

geet: woh tho hey...

maan: teek hey geet...lagtha hey dev ko hosh aaraha hey..mein baad mein call kartha hu...

geet: maan...i miss u...

maan got surprised...

maan: geet...i miss u too...

geet cut the call...somehow this little distance with maan is making her restless...after knowing dev and nainatra story...she felt lonely..without maan...even for a second

geet: bhagwan...sab kuch teek kardena ..thaki..hum yaha se sirf khushiyon ka yaadein leke jaa sake...

having said these words geet went inside ...and stood near nainatra who was lost in her thoughts looking at window...

to be continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fabulous update.👏 👏 👏
Liked it.
Here geets character is very nice.
Waiting 4 next part.Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update n thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. wowww geet is smart and trying to solve dev's problem. and maan is going to fullfill her wish. sooo sweet of him


thanks for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thnx for ur pms 4 both the parts


Nice parts

Waiting 4 more


Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
liked it
luved it sooo muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thank god @ least to some extent NT can be cured clinically .
Loved the way Geet explained to Maan how to increase Dev's will-power for the sake of NT .I'm really happy that Geet's behaving so positively full of hope 👍🏼

Both updates were Fab 👍🏼
Thanks for pm ...












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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...finally u r updating reguler ...thanks..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet is in full form. Positive thinking.
Loved the confidence level.
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh Dev is out of danger

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