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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys!!

Wow I am so happy to get these many comments!!!! sorry couldn't reply back to everyone but I hope you guys enjoy this part as well...😆

Note: Also for any new readers if you want to be Pm'd then please add me as your buddy..it is easier for me to keep track that way😆

Part II

"Geet don't embarrass yourself today...don't even look his way...you don't want him to think you are a stalker now do you? Even though you are but still he shouldn't know that...just walk casually and sit down..." she half walked and half ran to her bus stop..when she walked closer to the bus stop..she slowed down her pace...she sat on the bench and waited for the bus... "don't look..Geet..don't..." she puts her bag to her left side "good idea..pretend you are getting something from your bag and casually look his way..he wouldn't know a thing..." She turns her head to her left side..she quickly glances over toward Maan..she was left disappointed when she saw someone else working today besides him..."Where is he? This is the first time he missed his work...is he ok? Geet you are so stupid...of course nothing will happen to him..he might be just out enjoying time with his family...family? Oh My God what if he is married? why haven't I thought about this before...he is so handsome and cute and charming and with that body of his he could get any girl...then who am I..nothing..great I might have a crush on a married guy...but what if something did happen to him...

"excuse me miss can I sit here?" Geet nodded her head and removed her bag absent mindedly...giving him space...hey Babaji now what should I do? There are so many things going around in my head... "what time does the bus XX arrive?" Geet gets irritated by this person disturbing her thoughts she angrily looks at the person next to her "can't you read..." her words were stuck..as she looked at the person she has been stealing glances at for couple of months...he smiles at her facial expressions...he snaps his fingers in front of her...Geet looks down embarrassed... "what time does the bus XX come?" He sounds so much hotter in person...and he looks so cute when he talks and his face omg from up close its even better...and his lips wait why are they moving? Is he talking to me? (he snaps his fingers in front of her again...Geet comes out of her thoughts and looks at him...)

Geet: Excuse me? ("good job..he is going to think you are deaf...Babaji help me..")

Maan (smiles): umm I asked what time does the bus XX arrives?"

Geet (fumbles through her bag..Maan looks at her confused...she pulls out her cell phone to look at the time) "umm in five minutes"

Maan: umm thanks...

Geet: No problem...(aaahh I talked to him and he talked to me...he smells so good...I could smell him all night long...Geet what are you saying..you sound like a total physco...just don't do anything that will embarrass you..anytime now your bus will come and you can go home...and whatever you do don't look at him...)
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I could hear her voice all day long..her voice sounds so musical...I want to ask her for her name but I don't know how..I don't want her to think I am a weirdo or something...she looks so beautiful from up close...ok first thing first..(he "casually" looks at her) I don't see any engagement ring on her hand..so she has to be single...there is no sign of her being married either..I don't see any mangalsutre on her or even sindoor...so she has to be single...but what if she has a boyfriend...no no that can't be it if she did then why would she look at me right...but then again so does every other girl...I don't know why I feel attracted to her...she is different from other girls...she is beautiful and unlike most girls she doesn't show off her body just to impress someone...(he moves closer to Geet...) she smells nice..I wonder what perfume she is wearing...omg Maan you are acting like a physco.stop it..don't try to scare her or else you might not see her again...look away or start up a conversation remember what you rehearsed with Adi.. yeah I will do that... (he clears his throat and just when he was about to speak he saw her walking away toward a bus) ohh that's my cue...(Maan got up and went inside the same bus as Geet...)
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On the other hand, Adi was watching their interaction...he hits himself on the head when he sees both of them quiet and not talking to one another...why aren't they talking to each other...god they really are hopeless..I understand if the girl doesn't want to talk but I don't understand Maan...I finally convinced him to talk to her and what does he do just sit there and stare at her...come on say something..and stop staring at her like you are seeing a girl for the very first time..Due to both of them I might get a heart attack soon...I always get stuck in the middle...then he saw Maan going in the bus...holy Sh** that wasn't part of the plan..I have to follow them...
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"why is he getting in the same bus as me? Help me Babaji..." she saw Maan looking around for a seat..even though the whole bus was empty..."please don't sit here...please don't sit here.." she started praying in her head as Maan got closer and closer toward her seat..Geet was about to put her bag on the empty seat next to her when Maan sat there...Geet moved closer to the window in nervousness...Maan looked at her being nervous...he smiled..."this will be a good ride..." he thought...the bus started moving and both Maan and Geet couldn't say a word to each other...Maan looked ahead while Geet looked out the window..."omg Babaji please take me right now...he is so close to me...don't let me do anything embarrassing please..." just then her phone rang...Geet dropped the phone which was in her hand out of nervousness..Maan bends down to pick it up...he holds the phone in his hand and waits for Geet to take it...Geet nervously took her cellphone..in that process she lightly touches her fingers...sending shivers inside her body..

Geet: Thanks (she said in a raspy voice..omg that sounded so horrible...aahhh I want to die right now)

Maan: No problem...(he clears his throat) does this bus go to Rahul's Mechanic shop? (what did I just ask her..even I don't know where this bus goes...what if she thinks I am stupid getting into a wrong bus)

Geet (looks at him): ohh umm yeah...the stop will be here any minute now

Maan (sighed in relief...ok good you are not a fool...) umm thanx...is that the stop you are getting off on? (Geet looked at him shocked...Maan swore he had "stalker alert" written on his forehead...stupid stupid stupid move Maan...ohh god what will she be thinking of me now)

Geet: umm no.(why did he ask me where I am getting off...hey Babaji...) umm your stop is coming

Maan: ohh I am not getting off there...I just wanted to know if the bus passes by or not in case (he laughs in nervousness.. "that was real smooth Maan...NOT")

Geet: ohh (she quickly turns her head toward her window..both felt awkward and nervous to say anything to each other...then Geet's phone rang again...she quickly answered her phone...)

"hello yeah sorry I missed your call before...yeah my stop is coming in five minutes...ok pick me up...bye" (who is picking her up? who was she talking to? It didn't sound like her parents...omg I hope she wasn't talking to her boyfriend or something or else...yeah what am i going to do? I need to see who is going to pick her up...)


DrashtiDhamiNo1 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
great update
really loved it
thanks for the pm!! :D
preethia thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
oh god loved the update...
seriously both r hopeless...
man ppl wait for opportunities but these two having it but not using it to the fullest...
maan fumbling with words...he has to get into this seriously...no more games maan nahin chidiya udd jayegi...
if a guy picks up man maan is gonna die of heart attack...
its getting much interesting now...
pl cont soon
Absoluv thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Veryyy Interestinggg...Do continue...😊
t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
really sweet first conversation, and they are going to remember it always
-Zahra15- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
nice update...
at least they talked a bit today...
continue soon...
n thnx for the pm...
smallville thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Awesome update!!!
Like adi says they r both hopeless :)
Update soon
cant.be.assed. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
awesome update!!
haha aww MG r soo cute!
continue soon x
darkice7_12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
that was the cutest update. 👍🏼 i love how nervous the both of them were. it's refreshing to see maan being uncertain for a change. can't wait to see what happens next and what maan finds out.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
great update, what will happen to geet when she finds out who he really is 😆 lovely update, please update again soon. im loving this OS.

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