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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
a really very nice ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
nice ...but y she don't need to pay???
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
great part
but wonder why geet didnt
pay
love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74

hi its was really awesome and got dwelled reading all ur stories mind blowing u r... i really wonder lot many times how great of u writing lovely stories... day by day im becoming adicted with ur stories and i think... i think... i love u oh sorry sorry love ur stories and ur imaginations on that... plz post as many as u can and do pm me

coming to pet name i do suggest to keep it as PEK OR PEP and meaning of thse ill msg u


keep in touch... bye,...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
PART 9
AT KM ...NEXT DAY
It was dev and meera's engagement day.Everything was ready for royal event. Maan came out wearing the shervani selected by geet.Almost all girls were drooling over him.He was searching for geet for some reasons he wanted to know what she thinks about his looks.His mobile rings it was atext
" wah wah bahut ache lagrahe ho cadu"
Maan searched for her but she was not in sight .He texted back.
"kahan ho?"
"aapko deekneki distance mein."
"acha. muje kab shona ki darshan milega"
" jaldi 😉 "
" 😊 "
He was curious to see geet. Dev was in middle of the hall while meera walked near him accompanied by friends.But geet was not there.He blankly stood near daadi his eyes still searching geet..he texted her
"kahan ho ? "
"itne deer kyun lag rahi ? "
" main pick up karne keliye aajaoon?"
But he didn't get any reply. suddenly he heard a voice he was so sure it was geet.
GEET :maan...
He turned to see her. It was hard to convince himself if it was geet or some angel .She wore a simple green saree with matching jewels of green stones.He was mesmerized.but soon was interrupted by someone.
" geet i was searching for you..."
Maan looked at him then at geet.
GEET : wo ... wo... i was just...
Maan was surprised to see geet stammering and staring at tat guy with weird look.
The guy looked at maan.
GEET : this is maan dev's elder brother.
she looked at maan
GEET : maan this is yash my ...my cousin.
Yash looked at maan as if they had some long time dispute.Dev came and stood near geet and moved her towards his right side in between him and maan.
DEV : hello yash good to see you.
But the words were not genuine.Dev looked at geet.
DEV : iss kaminey ko kisne bulaya?
Maan was shocked .yash could easily hear that.But too his shock geet bursted into laughter.
GEET:Peeche hi pad gaya.
Then maan realized yash doesn't know hindi.
All of them arranged themselves surrounding the couple.Dev and meera exchanged their rings. Their love was evident in their eyes.After that all hit the dance floor.maan was ready to ask geet for dance irrespective of his ego.
MAAN : bahut din hogaya dance karke.
GEET : but still u 'll be the best.
MAAN : do you want to try?
GEET: you bet !!
They were again disturbed by yash.Maan was annoyed.Yash bend and offered his hands to geet. She looked at maan who was ready to burst anytime.But helplessly she went with yash.Maan was really angry not that she rejected him but she went with yash.He couldn't even imagine Geet in yash's arms.He went to his room frustrated.
GEET (thought) : sorry cadu mere paas koi option nahi ta.
Geet was feeling uncomfortable.Dev who looked her with Yash was disgusted and suddenly moved to them .Dev gave Yash a stern look then turned to geet
DEV : may i dance with you?
Yash didn't want to mess up with dev in his house.so he left the dance floor.Dev dragged geet out to lawn.Geet started crying.Dev placed his hands on her shoulder to console her.
GEET : maan gussa hokar chalegaye...
DEV : kya zarooratti uske saath naachne ki ...
GEET : tum jaante ho na wo kya karega.
DEV : so what ? kuch bhi karta...bro haina woh sab kuch sambal dete.
GEET : lekin main ye bhi nahi jaanti maan mereliye kya feel karte hai...then how can i trouble him...
DEV : what do you mean? bro really likes you...i can feel the diff
GEET : phir bhi...
DEV : geet jitna deer karogi tumareliye utna bura hoga...tumare bees saal ki pyaar ko paane keliye tumare paas sirf bees din hai.
Geet didn't stop her crying .
DEV : bhabi- to- be stop crying.
Geet stopped crying and blushed😳. That was the last weapon that dev would try on geet.

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PRECAP : GEET MANAOFYING MAAN😳

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Edited by RATII - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
wow...awsoem update.
so geet loves maan from bachpan.wow.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
nice update so geet loves maan for around 20 years now and dev knows about it love to see how u would unfold the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
wonderful allparts
loved it
geet ka pyar maan hai woh bhi 20 years
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
Wow. So Geet loves Maan From childhood. Waise yE Yash ka kya chakkar he.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
love it..so geet loves maan from childhood..cant wait 4 the next..

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