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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

wonderful
superb update
plzzz add me in pm li$t
cont soon


thank u so much

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum precap cont soon pls pls pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
THIS CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO MY FRIEND SRINDI COZ ITS HER B'DAY TODAY " HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR"

HEY... THIS CHAPTER WAS NOT EXACTLY WHAT I PLANNED THE PRECAP WAS NOT MEANT TO BE A KISS BUT AFTER SEEING YOUR EXPECTATIONS I CHANGED MY MIND...


CHAPTER - 32

Geet got up from sleep hearing alarm . It took her few mins to realize where she was then she saw maan near her sleeping peacefully. a smile escaped witout she even realizing . Geet went to the living room everything was tidy there was not much work for her to do. She didn't want to disturb maan.And eventually she can't cook so she decided to just examine the house . She went to a room which was covered with many stuffs it was like a well arranged store room .Geet went and checked if she coul find anything that could interest her.And fortunately she found a album the first page had " BEST MOMENTS OF MY LIFE " written in glitters and decorated with all dreamy stuffs.Geet was abt to open that but she heard maan calling her so she went to see him . She placed the album in the living room.

Geet rushed to see maan still lazily on bed trying hard to get up.

GEET : aapne bulaya?
MAAN : where were u ?
GEET : bas aise dek rahi ti ...
MAAN : tum sunday ke din itne zaldi utgayi ...(he said walking towards her ) kuch cheez kabi nahi badalti...( he said entering the kitchen)
GEET : matlab ?
MAAN : ye hi ki tum bhi kabie late nahi utti woh weekend ho ya weekday ...

Maan was making two diff drinks.

GEET : aap doo alag drink kyun banarahe ho?
MAAN : woh tum coffee nahi peeti ...meri princess sirf boost peeti hai

He said raising the cup to her . geet was blushing she loves when he calls her in diff names . At first it was shona and now was princess.

MAAN : shona... tayar hojao we have to go for shopping ...
GEET : shopping kisliye?

Maan loved her questioning him coz he felt odd when she blindly gave in to all his words

MAAN : groceries...
GEET : teek hai

Maan and geet went out for shopping but it served the purpose less.They were just roaming the whole city halting whenever geet felt hungry but finally they managed to shop something and reached house late after dinner at 11. Geet was happy there was some unexplainable bonding she began to share with him. Maan was happy coz his ultimate aim to make her comfortable with him was successful to a extend.

Maan sat on the sofa to watch tv it was then he noticed the album.He opened it and a smile escaped his lips.

MAAN : kahan mila ye tumhe?

Geet noticed him seeing the album and came to sit nesr him.

GEET : woh ... uss room mein milata ... main dekna chati ti per boolgayi...

She took it from him to see ... it was completely filled with their photos . Geet was not sure when it was taken but she felt pleasant seeing that .


This photo made geet a bit nervous . She felt a bit awkward to see a intimate pic of them . Maan understood her plight and tried to behave normal and make her easy.

MAAN : woh...it was in my b'day party ...
GEET : ji


The album contained almost all photos of maneet's togetherness.Maan explained her almost the story behind all photos.Geet was feeling very fresh after hearing everything .

MAAN : bahut der hogayi we need to sleep...
GEET : umm... chale

They both went to their room. Geet went to washroom to change. Maan was drinking water and few drops fell on floor he didn't notice.Geet walked out without noticing and slipped and fell on maan who was already on bed .


Maan caught her so that she doesn't hit her head on the bed head.Geet rested her hand on maan's shoulders.They had a brief eyelock. They managed to get up but still the closeness was maintained. Geet 's hair was falling on her face maan moved it with his one hand while the other was around her waist . Maan inched close to her and kissed her cheeks.Geet felt a current running through her. She looked deep into his eyes.He was a bit hesitant. She moved close to him as if telling him she was ok with their closeness. But there was still some doubts in maan's eyes. Geet moved further close and did something that both didn't expect . She voluntierly kissed his cheeks. She blushed seeing him after her act. Maan was really surprised coz geet never took the first step . She slowly move her hands from his shoulders to his head as if bringing him closer. She closed her eyes . Their face was just a few mm away.She could feel his breath on her face.They were almost ready to do that but maan jerked back. Geet was confused she suddenly opened her eyes to see maan looking down . She looked at him confusingly.He move back to a considerable distance that he could talk with her.

MAAN : woh ... geet ...main ...hum...

Geet placed her hands on his.

GEET : kya hua maan?
MAAN : geet ye... tumareliye teek nahi hain...
GEET : matlab ?
MAAN : geet ... doc ne kaha ki tumhe kissi bhi tarah ki stress nahi dena chaiye ...like overstimulation ...u know
GEET : maan mein teek hoon...
MAAN : i know but we should take it slow...
GEET : teek hain maan main samajti hoon.

Saying this geet went to her side of bed without looking at him.

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PRECAP : I DON'T KNOW COZ I WAS NOT PLANNING TO UPDATE TODAY

PLZZZ COMMENT AND CLICK LIKE BUTTON
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay me first awesome update pls continue soon!!!!
and this is ineede a perfect birthday gift for me
i never expected this...
thanks dear
Edited by sarkh26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NicE update. Was Geet disappointed that Maan did not kiss her?
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear 😊 and also wish ur frnd on behalf of us dear coz of her we got one update today😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update...i like thier bonding and hesitation at the same time...quite balanced...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome update dear...
loved it...
HAPPY BITRHDAY to ur frnd..
continue soon dear

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Posted: 14 years ago
Very sweetly written dear. Loved the way Maan is handling things with such gr8 patience, care and understanding. Also pls wish ur friend A very Happy B'day on my behalf too.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Please convey my birthday wishes to your friend

Awesome collection of maneet pictures.

The update is good thank you so much

Thanks for the pm

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