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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan
bari walli didi engliccchhh mobiiieeesss so bhi one teeppp uupal mobie hotttiii hai . . . mujhe nahi tata tha . .. . me stnading with a candy in my hnd n niblling at it as i am an innocent bacchhhaaa😆 correction . . . 8th june . . . 😃

Bhrastachar ka jamana hai😆

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: krati5
very well written.. all emotions were explained so well especially of maan's... plz add me to ur pm list... update soon...

thanks a lot dear😃😃😃

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: esha143

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This is great Deep...Kool Kaminis...yeh??😎😎😎😎😎...moi loving it.!!!!😛
Aashu toh hai hi bandar...fudakkad kahi ki...par moi is cool with the penguin thing...I like them😛...n I like these...they are dancing so cool😃😃

abe oye kamini!!😭😭😭

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal
Hey ash when r u updating

an hr max!!😃😃😃

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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: maneet1985

shake ur booty shake ur booty..

ashu me too!!!👏⭐️

we like to shake it shake it!!!😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

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-jia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

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Moi finally started reading this OS...😆 Couldn't wait till next week...now aren't u glad??? 😛

Okay.. Aashu...aashu...aashu... me in Maneet dream land.. Kya mast likha hai pehla part...I always knew you would be terrific at whatever u write but this was just fabulous...

"Maan mai aap ko chod ke kabhi nahi jaa sakti. Aap ke liye nahi, apne liye. Geet ki zindagi ka aks Maan hai. Agar Maan na ho to Geet ka koi wajood nahi. Aap aaj ke din aisi baatein mat karo. Aaj maine aap ko Babaji se humesha ke liye maanga hai. Is janm ke liye hi nahi, aane wale har janm ke liye. Mai sirf Maan ki Geet banna chahti hu, sirf Maan ki Geet! Agar aap na ho to ye zindagi bemani lagti hai aur maut'.."

Ok...loved loved loved the lines... 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Ek ek shabd had such a nice feel to it...Barryji ko takkar...😳 You wrote her lines so aptly...👏 Wonderful my kamini...mindblowing... The way he stops her... and then his fear...nicely done babe...

I loved how he came into the room and just when Geet (including all of us) thought he would kiss her.. he backed out.. .u r so evil...😆😆 But I throughly enjoyed the teasing... 😃

I enjoyed the kiss on the side of the road... uff...HOT romance khulam khulla...😊 So he is taking her to HP...wonder kya plan hai MSK ka... You have put a right mixture of teasing, romance and susupense into your first part to keep all of us on our toes... and left us wanting for more... so yes ur mission succeeded...😃

Ok i am counting kisses now...one shoulder peck and one on lips.. One hot kiss.. this OS has 5 parts... so hopefully we will get lots n lots of HHWWKK...😊😊

Like my Shabbo says..."MINDBLOWING" 😳

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Love ya!!!!

Edited by -jia- - 14 years ago