ff-mg-pyaar ya shaadi!!!#1-pt 63- see new thread - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely updates...

geet bhi naa...fully unprepared...agar maan nahi milta to pata nahi kya karti...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ... loved both parts ... 31 n 32 ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
great parts..
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update.

geet is so chatter box.šŸ˜†.
love her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice updates dear...
but am little disappointed that geet is gonna stay in pinky's home...
i wanna geet in KM...n tell me na that bride is maanšŸ˜‰...looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi teju
nice one dude .
geet maan ko kitna pareshan kar rahi hai.
lovely
waiting for next part .
update soon.

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
love it
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi guys,
here is another update...
but...i m dissapointed...i gave 2 updates on same page but got only few comments..this made me of loosing interest in writing the next part...i wrote part 33 along with 32 nd 31 but no i m not able to write 34...i feel so discouraged...i know may be u guys are busy with ur own work...but plz if possible...plzzz do comment...i gives me energy and encourage me to write more and intresting ones better and better updates...plzzz...i beg u...
for the ppl who liked and commented...a biggg THANK U...

Part 33


Maan: geet pehle call karo.

Geet: hmm.


Geet calls her friend and she answers in a single ring.

Geet: hi pa..

Before geet could speak anything the girl on the other side cuts her and speaks.

Girl: hi avni kaise ho?

Geet: avni????...r u nuts? Pari mein ge..

Pari: haan pata hai. Congrats. Waise do u know some thing?...geet haina humari dost wo shaadi se bag gayi. Aur uski mamaji aur chachaji yaha aaya. To know that whether she came here or not...but wo yaha aiye hi nahi na...wo log abhi mere samne hi hai. To tumhari paas geet ayato bathadena...phir mein rakhti hun.

Pari cut the call and geet stood there looking at the phone.


Maan: kya hua geet?

Geet: maan u r right. Wo log waha hi hai.

Maan: to kya socha? Pinky ke ghar javogi? Usko problem nahi hogi na.

Geet: nai maan...she loves it.

Maan: teekai to phir challo.

Geet:hmm.


i know this is short but kya karu i m trying to write the next part...may be i will update 2 parts tommorrow morning...i got a news that i had no clg 2mmrrow but dunno whether its right or not...if i had a holiday i will update morning...warna the night is all mine...ha ha...
plzzz comment plzzz

well another one...i forgot to give precap of ishq hai yeh
so i think u dont mind if i mention it here...
precap:

"I don't want to listen anything about her" maan shouted.


Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
teju dont be dis hearted dude, we commented na.
so dont be sad. u noe. ur ff rocks.
prt 33
must say pari is intelegent .
she told every thing & kisi ko shak bhi nahi hua.
wating for next part plz update 2morow only .
& be happy & thanx for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arushi_05

teju dont be dis hearted dude, we commented na.

so dont be sad. u noe. ur ff rocks.
prt 33
must say pari is intelegent .
she told every thing & kisi ko shak bhi nahi hua.
wating for next part plz update 2morow only .
& be happy & thanx for pm.



thank u dear for ur comment...
ya i will update part 33 and if possible even part 34 tommorrow morning...

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