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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 19 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: beauty_queen
Thanx yaar Suri bauhat zyada hi tareef ho gai meri... 😆 waisay yeh part bauhat jaldi mein likha tha meine ... 😳 😳 aur haan yaar tumhari story ka to koi muqabla nahin ...zabaradast 👏 haan jaldi continuee keroon gi mein .... 😳 😳
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Iman

iman dear tum is tareef ki haqdaar ho.. tum kitna zabardast likhthi ho..👏 dekho iman mujhe teri story zabardast lagthi hain aur tujhe meri story tho chalo balance ho gaya...😆 haan tum jaldi continue karna.. main intezaar kar rahi hoon..😃

love surya...

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KulBin

@KulBin

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Posted: 19 years ago

#332

Iman very cuti cuti part.. 😛 . too good.. 👏 dear
plz cont soon... 😊

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@Rajeev_gr8

Dazzler

Posted: 19 years ago

#333

Gr8 part Imaan 👏
the ice cream scene is superb 😊 😊 😊
Plz cont soon

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Javeria

@JaViA

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Posted: 19 years ago

#334

Thanx Kulbin ....aagay intezaar kero ... 😆
Thanx Saara a lot .... 😳 😳 😳
Thanx R.S mujhay bhi woh part bauhat acha laga ...hehehehehe 😆 😆 😆

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illuminated.

@illuminated.

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 19 years ago

#335

hey dont need to say thankx itz just tht we like ur story alot and cant wait to read the next part hopefully u will post te next part soooooooonnnn

Saraa

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Javeria

@JaViA

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Posted: 19 years ago

#336

Yeh Keh ker Archie wapis Mumbai aa jaati hai

Yahan pe woh Sujal se milnay k bahanay Veena k paas aati hai

Veena se baat cheet kerti hai phir upper Kashish k room mein chali jaati hai

jahan Kashish Khushi k saath khel rahi hoti hai

Archie : Oh..!! to yahan hain donon

Kashish Archie ko dekhti aur thora darr jaati hai

Archie Khushi k paas aati hai lekin Kashish Khushi ko forun godh mein utha leti hai

Archie : yeh kya Kashish..!! milnay to do mujhay Khushi se..to yeh Hai Khushi ..yahi hai

tumharay pyaar ki nishaani..aur mera agla shikhaar ...

Kashish : tum yahan kya ker rahi ho ?..chali jao yahan se

Archie : Kashish Kashish Kashish ..! yeh bhi koi tareeqa hota hia mehman se baat kernay

ka ...

Peechay se awaaz aati hai

Voice : haan aisay mehmanon se moon se baat nahin kerni chahiyeh balkay dhakay

maar k ghar se nikaal dena chahiyeh

Archie : Rishi tum..!!

Rishi : haan mein ..!!

Archie : tum yahan kya ker rahe ho?

Rishi : yahi to mujhay poochnay chahiyeh ...tum yahan kya ker rahi ho ?

Archie : tameez se baat kero ..!!

Rishi : Tameez ..!! oh aap ko pata bhi hai tameez kya hoti hai ?

Archie Rishi ko thapar maarnay k liyeh haanth utha ti hai

Rishi us k haanth pakar leta hai

Rishi : aisa kabhi kernay ki koshish bhi nahin kiyeh ga...!! warna aap jaanti nahin

mein aap k saath kya kya ker sakhta hoon ..!!! aap k liyeh behtar ho ga k aap yahan

se chali jaayein

Archie wahan se chali jaati hai

Kashish : RIshi ..!! Thanx ager aaj tum yahan nahin hotay to

Rishi : Bhabhi is mein thanx ki kya zaroorat hai ..!1 yeh to mera farz hai ..!!

Kashish : lekin tab bhi tum ne..

Rishi : Bhabhi bas ab aur kuch nahin ..!! acha ab mein chal ta hoon ...

Rishi wahan se chala jaata hai

Aur phir raat mein Sujal ghar wapis aata hai

Sujal khana kha ker apnay room mein jaata hai to us se Kashish

kuch pareshaan lagti hai

Sujal pehlay Khushi ko godh mein uthata hai ..aur us se bauhat baatein kerta hai

phir Kashish k paas aata hai

Sujal : Kashish ..!! kya baat hai bauhat pareshaan lag rahi ho?

Kashish : Nahin aisa to kuch bhi nahin mein to bas aisay hi thaq gayi hoon

Sujal : jab tumhein jhoot bolna nahin aata to jhoot mat bola kero..batao kya baat hai ?

Kashish ro ker Sujal ko hug ker ti hai..

Sujal : Kashish ..!! aakhir hua kya hia ?

Kashish : wo..woh aaj Archie aayi thi yahan

Sujal : Kya???

Kashish : haan ..aur woh keh rahi thi k Khushi us ka agla shikhaar hai ..woh puri koshish

keray gi Khushi ko hum se door kernay ki ..
.
Aur phir ronay lagti hai

Sujal : Kashish tumhein darnay ki koi zaroorat nahin hai ...mein hoona na tumharay saath

kuch nahin hoga hamari Khushi ko..!! aur us Archie ko to mein dekh loon ga ...tumne Archie se

kuch kaha nahin ?

Kashish : mere kuch kehnay se pehlay Rishi aa gaya aur us ne Archie ko achi khaasi sunai

Sujal : Kashish ..!! ab kisi se darnay ki zaroorat nahin hai tumhein ....Khushi ko kuch nahin hoga ..

hum sab tumharay saath hain ...aur mein bhi ...mujh per to bharosa hai na tumhein

Kashish : apnay aap se zyada ..

Sujal : acha to ab yeh apnay aansoo saaf kero...Khushi bhi soch rahi hogi..kitnee roti hai

meri mama

Kashish : Sujal..!!!
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Baqi baad mein waiting for ur comments

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Ana

@..oneOone..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 19 years ago

#337

iman
that was gr88888888888
rishi ki jhan superb
likin usay badlay main archie ko aik thapar mrna chaiye tha na 😛
but khushi theek hi sochti hai 😉

cont soon

lol
ana

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- --jaan.vi*

@- --jaan.vi*

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#338

WOW! i finally caught up....really missed your story yaar..but anyways minblowing updates..... 😆 Archie ko achi khasi sab log sunane lage hain....lol...Sujal, Kashish now Rishi...whose next????? lol update soon!

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group_1223

@group_1223

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#339

nicepart....luved da way rishi actd....keep it up

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 19 years ago

#340

iman dear just too good...... 👏 i just loved rishi.. he is shooooo sweettttttttttttt........... 😃 us archie ki itni himmat ki woh rishi pe haath utaye...... 😡 par rishi ne usse achcha mooh thod jawaab diya.. mazaa aa gaya... 😆
ab plz jaldi continue karna aur thoda bada part likhna yeh part zara si chothi ho gayi... 😃

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