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@whiterose29

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Hey Ria.. 🤗
Glad I could make your mood happy!! 😃
Thanks a lot for the appreciation!! Means a lot to me!! 😳
I'll update an epilogue soon on one of my friend's request!! Still working on that!! 😛

Love.. Bidz!! 😳

Really??? Will wait for that! Complete it soon!!😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: ria_lovesajan

Really??? Will wait for that! Complete it soon!!😉

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@whiterose29

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Bidz_cutegal

Aapka hukum sar aakho par!! 😆

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Ekta

@SandCastle.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

OMGGG...!!!!

Superbbb 2nd update Bidz...

it was Terrificcc...!!

Hayyyeee...i loved this OS & Gunjan ke nakhre so much...😆 😳

Hayyyeee the FB scene was tooo cuttteee...<3...

& they just went in thier Night Dress...?! OMG...🤣 🤣

Samrat is sachme so cute & loving...Love him so much...😳

Aisa hubby sabko Mile...😳

& finally they got Mango Ice-cream...

thnk god Samrat Honeymoon ke liye Switzerland yaa Paris nahi gaya tha warna to Bhagwaan hi bachaye Chashmish se...🤣 🤣

Really i love this OS so much...it was way too cuttteee...❤️

plzzz Bidz plzzz write more SaJan OS...plzzz...

m really vry eager for them...plzzz write more on SaJan...plzzz...

& plzzz do PM me wenever u write plzzz...

& thnk u sooo much for the PM to this wonderful OS dear...😳

Luv,

Ekta...🤗

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jenshad

@jenshad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Bidz🤗 Really Sorry For Late Reply :( Have Been Quite Buzy Nowadayss With Examss Coming Up Anywayss I Loved The Way Started & I Was Enjoying Reading From The Beginning To The End :) I Kept Beeing Glued To This Wonderful Story 😳 Seriously, Is This Your First OS On SaJan ?!! 😲 😲 Coz It Seems Like You Have Written Many Before, Hun :) The Lines Were Hilarious Especilly When Samrat Said Maine Joh Karna Toh Karr Liya :) 🤣 But Pllzz You Should Post More Partss Where They Are With The Baby Too :) I Would LOVE To Read It Coz We Never Had These Cute Scenes In MJHT 😳

Edited by MohitSanayaDrug - 14 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Hey friends.. 🤗

Okay, so I'm posting an epilogue to the OS.. 🥳 It's dedicated to my dear friend Nivriti as she insisted me to write one for her.. 😃

But hey guys.. I have never wrote an epilogue before and I guess I am still confused what an epilogue is.. Nayi nayi hoon naa, iss liye! Still Nivi explained me what an epilogue is and showed me a sample.. Thanks to her for that.. So, I wrote it.. If there's any mistake, please forgive me.. 😳

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EPILOGUE

It was a sunny morning. Gunjan was setting the table for breakfast.

Gunjan: Samrat, breakfast ready hai!
Samrat: Aaya, Chashmish!

Gunjan took a sigh.

"Late for office as usual! Itne saal guzar gaye par yeh Samrat abhi tak nahin sudhra. Aur shayad kabhi sudhrega bhi nahin." She said to herself sadly.

"Beta, come fast for the breakfast!" Gunjan said in a high tone as if she was calling someone.

There was no response.

"Aab yeh ladki kaha gayi?" She said to herself with confused expressions.

Gunjan had face expressions as if she understood where she might be.

"Yeh ladki bhi naa! Kal iske exams hai aur yeh basketball khelne gayi hai. Abhi khabar leti hoon iski!" She said to herself angrily.

She went to the backyard.

Gunjan shook her head and said, "Beta aap kabhi nahin sudhroge!"
A little girl turned around to Gunjan with a cute smile on her face and a basket ball in her hands.

Little girl [broad smile]: Main kyun sudhrungi?! After all, I am the daughter of the cool dude Samrat Shergill.

Gunjan: Siaaa!
Sia: Mumma! You know naa how much I love basket ball.
Gunjan: Par kal aap ki exams hai beta! Agar aap basket ball khelengi toh parhaai kaun karega?
Sia: Ufff yeh parhaai aur exams! Kitni boring hoti hai yeh sab!

Gunjan slammed her hand on her forehead and says, "Hey bhagwaaan! Yeh ladki bhi naa! Bilkul apne papa par gayi hai!"

A voice came from the doorway saying, "Kyun nahin jaayegi! Akhir aapne papa ki laadli beti jo hai.

Gunjan turned back and saw a smiley Samrat standing at the doorway wearing a red shirt with stylish specs. By god, time couldn't tarnish his hotness. He was still the same hot and dashing Samrat Shergill. He kneed down stretching his arms. Sia ran to her papa and hugged him with a lot of affection. Samrat took her in his lap.

Gunjan [angrily]: Samrat, tum isse aur bigaar rahe ho.
Samrat: Chashmish! Just calm down. Itna gussa is not good for health! Haina, my pari?
Sia [smilingly]: Yes papa!

Samrat went inside and Gunjan followed him angrily. Samrat made Sia sit beside him on the dinning table. Gunjan sat there too and staring at Samrat and Sia angrily. All were having breakfast.

Samrat: So my basketball champion, kitni bar basket kia?
Sia [excitedly]: 5 times, papa!
Samrat [broadly smiling]: Wow Sia! That's great! Tum toh mujhse bhi aage nikal gayi! I am sure you'll make me proud one day!

Sia smiled broadly. She went to Samrat, told him to bend and kissed on his cheek sweetly.

Sia: I will surely make you proud papa! I will!
Samrat: Aww mera baccha! How sweet of you!

Saying that, Samrat took Sia in his lap and kissed on her cheek.

Gunjan [annoyed]: Yeh baap-beti ka pyaar khatam hua toh Samrat tum office jaao. Aur aap, Ms Sia Shergill aapne kamre mein jaao aur kal ke exam ke liye study karo.
Sia [sad]: Par mumma..!

Samrat looked at Gunjan and gestured her to be quiet. Gunjan didn't say a word and wondering what Samrat was up to.

Samrat: So, meri basketball champ ka kal exam hai! Kaunsa exam hai?
Gia [sadly]: Maths!
Samrat [dramatically]: Maths?! Yeh toh bilkul easy hai. Pata hai main aapne school mein maths mein humesha first aata tha.

Gunjan stared at Samrat confusingly.

"Yeh aur maths mein first? Sapne mein first aaya tha kya?" Gunjan thought in mind.

Sia: Really papa? Maths mein aap acche the?
Samrat: Haan beta! Issi liye toh abhi main India ka basketball champion hoon. Basketball khelne ke liye maths mein accha hona important hai. Iss liye aap ko maths mein accha score toh karna padhega, agar aap bhi basket ball champion banna chahte hai, haina?

Sia nodded with innocent expressions.

Gunjan smiled slightly. She understood what Samrat was doing.

Samrat [smilingly]: Yeh hui naa baat. So abhi jaao aur exam ke liye maths practice karo. Aur agar aap jaldi jaldi preparation kar lengi toh aap ko aapki maan pasand chocolate milegi. So aap parhaai karogi naa?
Sia [smilingly nodded]: Jee papa!
Samrat [smiling broadly]: Very good! Abhi aap study karo aur papa office chalte hai. Raat ko aate samay aap ke liye chocolate le aayenge aap ka papa!

Sia [hugged Samrat]: Aww papa! You are the best!

Samrat hugged her back. They broke their hug and Sia went to her room to study.

Gunjan: Waah! Mr Samrat Shergill.. Aap toh great hai, I mean maha great hai. Jo kam mein itne time se nahin kar paayi, woh aapne chutkio mein kar diya.
Samrat [takes pride dramatically]: Isse kehete hai Samrat Shergill ka tez dimaag!

Seeing Samrat's drama, Gunjan burst out into laughing.

Gunjan: Chalo aab tum office jaao. Waise bhi bohot late ho chuka hai.

Samrat's expressions were mischievous. He had something going on in his mind, Gunjan thought. She knew him since last 11 years and whenever he thought something mischievous, his expressions were like that. While Gunjan was wondering all these staring at Samrat, Samrat took a step closer to Gunjan.

Gunjan: Samrat! Kya kar rahe ho? Office nahin jana?
Samrat [took one more step close to Gunjan]: Chashmish! Aaj office jaane ka maan nahin kar raha.

Gunjan stepped back and understood what Samrat wanted.

Gunjan [blushed]: Samrat! You are getting late!
Samrat [took one more step closer]: So? Aaj office nahin jaayunga.
Gunjan [stepped back]: Dekho, kuch toh sharam karo. Aab tumhari 7 saal ki beti hai.
Samrat [a step close to Gunjan]: Chashmish! Pyaar ki koi age limit nahin hoti.

Saying that, Samrat was about to take Gunjan in his arms, when Gunjan ran to their bedroom. Samrat ran after her to their bedroom and closed the door.

Gunjan [stepped back]: Samrat, tum pagal ho gaye ho kya? Tumhe office jana hai naa?
Samrat [stepped close]: Chashmish! Don't act like a typical wife. Main yaha tumse romance kar raha hoon aur tum office ko lekar baith gayi! Office ko maaro goli.
Gunjan [stepped back]: Par..?

Gunjan bumped to the wall. Samrat was very close to her. He put his finger on her lips and said, "Ssshh!"

Gunjan's heart started beating in the fastest mode. She would never change. Years passed but still the feel of Samrat's touch was the same. Fast mode heart beats and butterflies in her tummy! Both shared a romantic eye-lock. Samrat stared at Gunjan lovingly and caressed her soft cheeks. Gunjan closed her eyes. Samrat's fingers slowly moved to Gunjan's lips. He pressed her lips softly with his thumb. The moment was romantic and the feeling was amazing for both Samrat and Gunjan. Samrat came close to Gunjan. Only a few inches distance were between them. Gunjan could feel that even if her eyes were closed. Samrat closed his eyes, gently kissed Gunjan on her lips, moved back and opened his eyes slowly. Gunjan opened and lowered her eyes and blushingly smiled. Samrat smiled seeing Gunjan's red cheeks. He lovingly cupped Gunjan's face in his hands, looked into her eyes lovingly and said, "I love you Chashmish!" Gunjan smiled looking into Samrat's eyes. She came close. Samrat closed his eyes. Gunjan kissed him on his lips gently and said, "I love you too!" Saying that, she hugged Samrat. Samrat hugged her back smilingly.

Samrat: Chashmish, ek baat poochu?
Gunjan: Hmm!
Samrat: 11 saal guzar gaye phir bhi tum aise kyun sharmaati ho?

Gunjan broke the hug and laughed.

Gunjan: Woh iss liye my dear sweet hubby ke main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon aur 11 saal pehele mera pyaar jaisa tha, abhi bhi waisa hi hai.
Samrat: Ohhh! Accha toh phir agar tumne sharmana bandh kar diya toh?
Gunjan: Woh din kabhi nahin aayega, kyuki main tumse khud se bhi jyada chahti hoon Samrat. Aur chaahe 11 saal guzar jaaye ya 60 saal, main aise hi sharmaayungi. Humesha!
Samrat: Awww how sweet! Meri wifey dunia ki sabse best wifey hai.
Gunjan [takes pride and sweetly answers]: I know my dear hubby! Agar hubby itna pyara ho jo apne wifey se bohot pyaar karta ho, toh wifey ko toh best hona hi padhega! Par haan, hubby se jyada nahin!

Samrat took pride hearing his praises. At one point, he laughed. Gunjan laughed seeing him laugh and then both hugged each other tightly! <3

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I hope its a proper epilogue.. I am still confused! 😆
Hope you all will be satisfied with this! 😛
Waiting for your comments friends! 😳
Don't forget to press LIKE! 😉

Love.. Bidz 🤗

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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_SilentSoul_

@_SilentSoul_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya
OMGGG...!!!!
Superbbb 2nd update Bidz...
it was Terrificcc...!!
Hayyyeee...i loved this OS & Gunjan ke nakhre so much...😆 😳
Hayyyeee the FB scene was tooo cuttteee...<3...
& they just went in thier Night Dress...?! OMG...🤣 🤣
Samrat is sachme so cute & loving...Love him so much...😳
Aisa hubby sabko Mile...😳
& finally they got Mango Ice-cream...
thnk god Samrat Honeymoon ke liye Switzerland yaa Paris nahi gaya tha warna to Bhagwaan hi bachaye Chashmish se...🤣 🤣
Really i love this OS so much...it was way too cuttteee...❤️
plzzz Bidz plzzz write more SaJan OS...plzzz...
m really vry eager for them...plzzz write more on SaJan...plzzz...
& plzzz do PM me wenever u write plzzz...
& thnk u sooo much for the PM to this wonderful OS dear...😳

Luv,
Ekta...🤗

Hey Ekta 🤗
Thanks a lot for your lovely comment!! 😳
Glad you liked it!! 😃
Will try to write more on SaJan!! 😊
Love.. Bidz 😳

Originally posted by: MohitSanayaDrug
Bidz🤗 Really Sorry For Late Reply :( Have Been Quite Buzy Nowadayss With Examss Coming Up Anywayss I Loved The Way Started & I Was Enjoying Reading From The Beginning To The End :) I Kept Beeing Glued To This Wonderful Story 😳 Seriously, Is This Your First OS On SaJan ?!! 😲 😲 Coz It Seems Like You Have Written Many Before, Hun :) The Lines Were Hilarious Especilly When Samrat Said Maine Joh Karna Toh Karr Liya :) 🤣 But Pllzz You Should Post More Partss Where They Are With The Baby Too :) I Would LOVE To Read It Coz We Never Had These Cute Scenes In MJHT 😳

Hey dear 🤗
Its absolutely okay that you commented late...exams are more important naa!! 😃
Glad you liked my OS and thanks a lot for the appreciations!! 😳
Well, your wish is fulfilled dear!! 😃
Posted an epilogue to the OS writing about some cute moments of SaJan and their angel!! 😳
Read it soon and comment okay? 😛
Love.. Bidz 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

Res!!

*edited*

Me first!🥳

Awesome Update Bidz... You rocked!! It was sumptuous, smashing and flawless!!👏

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Thanks dear!😳

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EPILOGUE

It was a sunny morning. Gunjan was setting the table for breakfast. As usual!

Gunjan: Samrat, breakfast ready hai!
Samrat: Aaya, Chashmish!

Gunjan took a sigh.😆

"Late for office as usual! Itne saal guzar gaye par yeh Samrat abhi tak nahin sudhra. Aur shayad kabhi sudhrega bhi nahin." She said to herself sadly. Some things never change!😉

"Beta, come fast for the breakfast!" Gunjan said in a high tone as if she was calling someone.

There was no response.

"Aab yeh ladki kaha gayi?" She said to herself with confused expressions.

Gunjan had face expressions as if she understood where she might be.

"Yeh ladki bhi naa! Kal iske exams hai aur yeh basketball khelne gayi hai. Abhi khabar leti hoon iski!" She said to herself angrily. Apne Dad par gayi Hai!!😳

She went to the backyard.

Gunjan shook her head and said, "Beta aap kabhi nahin sudhroge!"
A little girl turned around to Gunjan with a cute smile on her face and a basket ball in her hands.

Little girl [broad smile]: Main kyun sudhrungi?! After all, I am the daughter of the cool dude Samrat Shergill.

Gunjan: Siaaa!
Sia: Mumma! You know naa how much I love basket ball.
Gunjan: Par kal aap ki exams hai beta! Agar aap basket ball khelengi toh parhaai kaun karega?
Sia: Ufff yeh parhaai aur exams! Kitni boring hoti hai yeh sab! Sam Part II🤣

Gunjan slammed her hand on her forehead and says, "Hey bhagwaaan! Yeh ladki bhi naa! Bilkul apne papa par gayi hai!"😆

A voice came from the doorway saying, "Kyun nahin jaayegi! Akhir aapne papa ki laadli beti jo hai.

Gunjan turned back and saw a smiley Samrat standing at the doorway wearing a red shirt with stylish specs. By god, time couldn't tarnish his hotness. He was still the same hot and dashing Samrat Shergill. He kneed down stretching his arms. Sia ran to her papa and hugged him with a lot of affection. Samrat took her in his lap.

Gunjan [angrily]: Samrat, tum isse aur bigaar rahe ho. As expected!😉
Samrat: Chashmish! Just calm down. Itna gussa is not good for health! Haina, my pari?
Sia [smilingly]: Yes papa!

Samrat went inside and Gunjan followed him angrily. Samrat made Sia sit beside him on the dinning table. Gunjan sat there too and staring at Samrat and Sia angrily. All were having breakfast.😆

Samrat: So my basketball champion, kitni bar basket kia?
Sia [excitedly]: 5 times, papa!
Samrat [broadly smiling]: Wow Sia! That's great! Tum toh mujhse bhi aage nikal gayi! I am sure you'll make me proud one day!

Sia smiled broadly. She went to Samrat, told him to bend and kissed on his cheek sweetly.

Sia: I will surely make you proud papa! I will!
Samrat: Aww mera baccha! How sweet of you!

Saying that, Samrat took Sia in his lap and kissed on her cheek.

Gunjan [annoyed]: Yeh baap-beti ka pyaar khatam hua toh Samrat tum office jaao. Aur aap, Ms Sia Shergill aapne kamre mein jaao aur kal ke exam ke liye study karo.
Sia [sad]: Par mumma..!

Samrat looked at Gunjan and gestured her to be quiet. Gunjan didn't say a word and wondering what Samrat was up to.

Samrat: So, meri basketball champ ka kal exam hai! Kaunsa exam hai?
Gia [sadly]: Maths!
Samrat [dramatically]: Maths?! Yeh toh bilkul easy hai. Pata hai main aapne school mein maths mein humesha first aata tha.

Gunjan stared at Samrat confusingly.

"Yeh aur maths mein first? Sapne mein first aaya tha kya?" Gunjan thought in mind.Correct, Sam and studies are miles apart!😆

Sia: Really papa? Maths mein aap acche the?
Samrat: Haan beta! Issi liye toh abhi main India ka basketball champion hoon. Basketball khelne ke liye maths mein accha hona important hai. Iss liye aap ko maths mein accha score toh karna padhega, agar aap bhi basket ball champion banna chahte hai, haina?

Sia nodded with innocent expressions.

Gunjan smiled slightly. She understood what Samrat was doing.

Samrat [smilingly]: Yeh hui naa baat. So abhi jaao aur exam ke liye maths practice karo. Aur agar aap jaldi jaldi preparation kar lengi toh aap ko aapki maan pasand chocolate milegi. So aap parhaai karogi naa? Aise manaoge to kaise nahi karegi!😳
Sia [smilingly nodded]: Jee papa!
Samrat [smiling broadly]: Very good! Abhi aap study karo aur papa office chalte hai. Raat ko aate samay aap ke liye chocolate le aayenge aap ka papa!

Sia [hugged Samrat]: Aww papa! You are the best!

Samrat hugged her back. They broke their hug and Sia went to her room to study.

Gunjan: Waah! Mr Samrat Shergill.. Aap toh great hai, I mean maha great hai. Jo kam mein itne time se nahin kar paayi, woh aapne chutkio mein kar diya.
Samrat [takes pride dramatically]: Isse kehete hai Samrat Shergill ka tez dimaag!Happy Realization Ms.Chashmish! ooopss, Mrs. Chashmish!😉

Seeing Samrat's drama, Gunjan burst out into laughing.

Gunjan: Chalo aab tum office jaao. Waise bhi bohot late ho chuka hai.

Samrat's expressions were mischievous. He had something going on in his mind, Gunjan thought. She knew him since last 11 years and whenever he thought something mischievous, his expressions were like that. While Gunjan was wondering all these staring at Samrat, Samrat took a step closer to Gunjan.

Gunjan: Samrat! Kya kar rahe ho? Office nahin jana?
Samrat [took one more step close to Gunjan]: Chashmish! Aaj office jaane ka maan nahin kar raha.

Gunjan stepped back and understood what Samrat wanted.

Gunjan [blushed]: Samrat! You are getting late!
Samrat [took one more step closer]: So? Aaj office nahin jaayunga.
Gunjan [stepped back]: Dekho, kuch toh sharam karo. Aab tumhari 7 saal ki beti hai.
Samrat [a step close to Gunjan]: Chashmish! Pyaar ki koi age limit nahin hoti.Hayyyeee!!

Saying that, Samrat was about to take Gunjan in his arms, when Gunjan ran to their bedroom. Samrat ran after her to their bedroom and closed the door.

Gunjan [stepped back]: Samrat, tum pagal ho gaye ho kya? Tumhe office jana hai naa?
Samrat [stepped close]: Chashmish! Don't act like a typical wife. Main yaha tumse romance kar raha hoon aur tum office ko lekar baith gayi! Office ko maaro goli.
Gunjan [stepped back]: Par..?

Gunjan bumped to the wall. Samrat was very close to her. He put his finger on her lips and said, "Ssshh!"

Gunjan's heart started beating in the fastest mode. She would never change. Years passed but still the feel of Samrat's touch was the same. Fast mode heart beats and butterflies in her tummy! Both shared a romantic eye-lock. Samrat stared at Gunjan lovingly and caressed her soft cheeks. Gunjan closed her eyes. Samrat's fingers slowly moved to Gunjan's lips. He pressed her lips softly with his thumb. The moment was romantic and the feeling was amazing for both Samrat and Gunjan. Samrat came close to Gunjan. Only a few inches distance were between them. Gunjan could feel that even if her eyes were closed. Samrat closed his eyes, gently kissed Gunjan on her lips, moved back and opened his eyes slowly. Gunjan opened and lowered her eyes and blushingly smiled. Samrat smiled seeing Gunjan's red cheeks. He lovingly cupped Gunjan's face in his hands, looked into her eyes lovingly and said, "I love you Chashmish!" Gunjan smiled looking into Samrat's eyes. She came close. Samrat closed his eyes. Gunjan kissed him on his lips gently and said, "I love you too!" Saying that, she hugged Samrat. Samrat hugged her back smilingly. Awesome!!👏

Samrat: Chashmish, ek baat poochu?
Gunjan: Hmm!
Samrat: 11 saal guzar gaye phir bhi tum aise kyun sharmaati ho? Because you are so romantic!!☺️ Hayyeee!!🤣

Gunjan broke the hug and laughed.

Gunjan: Woh iss liye my dear sweet hubby ke main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon aur 11 saal pehele mera pyaar jaisa tha, abhi bhi waisa hi hai.
Samrat: Ohhh! Accha toh phir agar tumne sharmana bandh kar diya toh?
Gunjan: Woh din kabhi nahin aayega, kyuki main tumse khud se bhi jyada chahti hoon Samrat. Aur chaahe 11 saal guzar jaaye ya 60 saal, main aise hi sharmaayungi. Humesha! Awww...
Samrat: Awww how sweet! Meri wifey dunia ki sabse best wifey hai.
Gunjan [takes pride and sweetly answers]: I know my dear hubby! Agar hubby itna pyara ho jo apne wifey se bohot pyaar karta ho, toh wifey ko toh best hona hi padhega! Par haan, hubby se jyada nahin!

Samrat took pride hearing his praises. At one point, he laughed. Gunjan laughed seeing him laugh and then both hugged each other tightly! <3

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

I hope its a proper epilogue.. I am still confused! 😆
Hope you all will be satisfied with this! 😛
Waiting for your comments friends! 😳
Don't forget to press LIKE! 😉

Love.. Bidz 🤗

Thanks for dedicating it to me, sorry for the late reply! It was smashing and sumptuous! Do write more and do PM me!

And you wrote the epilogue really well!!👏 Too good for a first timer!😉

Love Nivriti..

P.S: Sorry if the reply was disappointing! Don't have much timee!!

Edited by SajanRox - 14 years ago

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#59

excelent epilogue of this os.really loving.its an another gr8 writing from you.keep it up.thanks for pm.

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Shreya

@SM_317

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#60

heyyy bidz🤗🤗
wow im soo happy yaar u wrote an epilouge..😍
it was just awesomeee yaar..😍
sia is soo cuteee n adorable lyk sajan..😍
sajan bedroom scene was soo romantic yaar☺️😍☺️
i really enjoyed reading it,,
beautifully written..😳
plzzz keep writing more on sajan..n thanks 4 d pm..🤗
luv ya
shreya..

Edited by SM_317 - 14 years ago