SS: Forbidden Thoughts ~MG~ Part 4 Page 21 ~ 6/4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: khushi_4ever

The start is very intriguing enough...so update and if ur planning on passing PMs , include me plz

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

congrats !!!!!! 4 ur new ss ...

awesome ... superb ... interesting concept ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

i'm egerly waiting 4 dance of dilemma ... plzzz .. update soon ..

Originally posted by: maansi007

luvd d start geet engaged n well title thoughts which r not allowed wll simply luv to read further and as u hav already compltd it plxxx try to update it bit faster dnt let ur evil mind come here n gv us lot of updates

Originally posted by: undisclosed

ooohh...i'm gonna bookmark this..to read when i get home😳

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Isha...Congrats on the new SS! Loving it n the title...please update soon n include me in ur pm list for this FF! Thanks 4 da pm! Whoa...Geet engaged to someone else...?? hmmm... Manan will defn get his Geet!😛

Originally posted by: JayaR

good start...nice story plot...

so Geet is engaged to someone else...but still cant keep her hands and thoughts off Maan...

hey as u asked for it...here is the segment where u need to change...it has got 'WE'...

"Let's go," they both said in unison and we parted into another frantic run to reach the hotel before this erroneous weather desired to show its true self.

All of them kept close watch of each other to make sure no one parted from the group. The hotel lights where amplifying as we got closer and they were going to be safe in the warm and toasty haven, our room."...

go through it...I hope I was helpful...

Originally posted by: drashsree100

for 'Forbidden Thoughts'

Loved it

The last line was superb 👏

Eagerly awaiting more parts

Its a nice start...since u have it written, don't torture us too much by making wait too long 😆