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JayaR

@JayaR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

good start...nice story plot...

so Geet is engaged to someone else...but still cant keep her hands and thoughts off Maan...

hey as u asked for it...here is the segment where u need to change...it has got 'WE'...

"Let's go," they both said in unison and we parted into another frantic run to reach the hotel before this erroneous weather desired to show its true self.

All of them kept close watch of each other to make sure no one parted from the group. The hotel lights where amplifying as we got closer and they were going to be safe in the warm and toasty haven, our room."...

go through it...I hope I was helpful...

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

for 'Forbidden Thoughts'

Loved it Glitter Heart Pink

The last line was superb 👏

Eagerly awaiting more parts

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

amazing tittle

aweome start

love it

waiting 4 next part

thanks 4 pm

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

congratulations for this. i loved it. it is sooo good. pls continue and update soon.

thanks for pm

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Isha

@JilyPotter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sindu555
nice start ...

how many parts will this SS have?

4-5 parts!😛

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Isha

@JilyPotter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: silkyarora
hey very nice start...!!!!!!!!
well congrats on ur new ss..!!

loved it...!!!
continue soon!!!

THANK YOU SO SO MUCH!!!!

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Isha

@JilyPotter

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: esha143
So amazing start...loved it...So the forbidden thoughts have already started...for how long they are going to fight them...is what left to see...pls pm me when u update...n update soon...😃

Thanks for the lovely comment...Forbidden Thoughts are coming...

Have added you..most def. will PM you...