'His Wicked Angel' | Grover&Winget/Armaan&Riddhima - Page 4

quite different..

but u guys wrote it beautifully ...

thnx for the pm...

Originally posted by: InfiniteEnigma.

Twinner, that is by far the best comment, ever. LOOOL

WOW!

Okay, so now that I've regained my senses after reading this jaw-dropping and mind-blowing OS, I'm going to try to give a coherent reply.

Firstly, a biiiggg "Thank you!" to Banana for recommending this to me.

Secondly, "Kudos!" to Nohra for such a fantastic VM – I haven't seen one like it in quite some time.

And lastly, a huge "Thank you and kudos!" to you both, Sary and Rabsy!

This OS had me hooked from 'the echoes' right up 'the end' and beyond. It had me emoting at every point – and that, for me, is the sign of a great piece of writing.

"You can't give up. You can't give up. You can't give up. You can't give up. You can't...GIVE UP!" I don't know how you did it…but when reading this, my mouth went dry and I could have sworn that the phrase "You can't give up!" was just echoing in my head in the most dramatic way!

You said that this piece is 'psychotic.' But even then, there was a certain subtlety about it. I mean, it wasn't until quite late into the OS that one realized that Riddhima was more than a hallucination…that she was in fact personifying the height of his guilt. That well thought out element of suspense and surprise really nailed it for me!

I can't even express how glad I am that Hannah recommended this to me. And I hope that you'll keep me in the loop when you write more in the future, because you both are amazing!

Nikhi 😊