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Posted: 14 years ago
#71




Waiting...





Edited by Shimmerr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
nearly there
i had lots of HW to finish off, & top of it exam next month...
:)
will update soon, nearly theer
:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
on the new thread!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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looking forward to the update...😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats on new thread...waiting 4 update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
read the last 4 parts now . . . n u crack me keya . . . i mean what was that . . . even while the plane crashing he had the time to Msg people . . . then i mean that tribe and they being lost and everything abt tico whoever he was n his tribe . . . they are insane . . . as much as i enjoyed reading it . . . Darling it was far far far far far far from logic . . . highly unreal . . . basically i have a passion for air planes . . . u wont believe i actually maintain a file in my system about the Air disasters . . . be it crash, bomb explosion or hijacking . . . so the way the plane crashed and everything was funny yet far from reality . . . anyway i guess u purposefully wrote it that way as it was intended to b funny . . . challo waiting for the next part . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: 7thHeaven

read the last 4 parts now . . . n u crack me keya . . . i mean what was that . . . even while the plane crashing he had the time to Msg people . . . then i mean that tribe and they being lost and everything abt tico whoever he was n his tribe . . . they are insane . . . as much as i enjoyed reading it . . . Darling it was far far far far far far from logic . . . highly unreal . . . basically i have a passion for air planes . . . u wont believe i actually maintain a file in my system about the Air disasters . . . be it crash, bomb explosion or hijacking . . . so the way the plane crashed and everything was funny yet far from reality . . . anyway i guess u purposefully wrote it that way as it was intended to b funny . . . challo waiting for the next part . . .




lol, well its my fantasy... hehe... some parts does not need logic. not all story have logic. :)
some parts in this ff are example :)
if you look for logic all the time, ur fantasy disspears.

i see air crash investigation 2... & lol.. do you want my maan & geet to die this easily... or shall i explain the whole crash here... i know i would not like to read in a romantic comady :D

there you go...

don't always look for logic😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
keya me waiting ... kitna time aur 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i know keya u wrote it that way as u did not want to bring in sad stuff . . . no worries . . . well here it is, anything related to planes gets me on the edge . . . abt Air crash investigation i watch that too . . . but even otherwise i have a folder just abt air planes . . . when the CM of HM said something of the sorts "TO USE HELICOPTERS IS OUR MAJBURI AND IT IS THE PILOTS JOB TO ASSURE SAFETY" utter bulshit . . . i spent a good hour chewing off my mom's brain venting all the while, i mean seriously these people force the Pilot to fly in bad weather and then they blame it all on them . . . the pilots job is to warn the people of the risk . . . he cant reject to fly now can he, its his job to oblige to them n he does that yet the person to be blames is him, he is putting his life on line for those Good for nothing people who know nothing but ardering around . . . oops i went off track soowwwiiieee . . . . thats just me when it concerns air planes . . .
anyway i enjoyed reading the updates as such . . . that ways toh for getting a bit humour in it even i made maan make a leaf chair now that is also unreal . . . nothing serious trust me . . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Enigma
PART 35



Maans eyes shot out anger. The red seems to be clearly visible.?
Geet "enough of your rubbish!"
?Maan "how dare you?" he instantly held geets hand behind her back while other holding her head. A fear clearly came on geets face. But something els played in maans mind.
?Geet "let me go!" she spat out between teethe. The anger seems to have great effect on both.?
Geet "get out!" maan instantly snaps & frees her. Dropping her to the sofa. Walking out instantly.??Geet somewhere went along with him to much. There are no way she is about to give any man chance in her life, & he had the limit.??

Couple of days have passed. Geet atlas have finished her resignation. Taking a deep breath she walks in to the office. Maan stood by the window. Arm folded.
?Geet "my resignation sir!" he did not look back. The slap seems to still lingering in his brain, & that 2, so unfairly. She will have to pay. No matter what!
Maan "& what makes you think I will let you go this easily?" maan spines round. Taking each step very carefully like a lion targets its pray, with time, with patient. Geet left speechless as she looked back in to his eyes. There was some touch of danger, thats all she could out put from the recent situation.
Geet "sir! I" her voice left shaken specially after seeing the anger. She hated her self to be so week & venerable in front of a man but he seems to do this so easily. "I am- l- leav- leaving!"
Maan "you have not answered me! What makes you think I will let you go this easily!" there was a very strong confidence within him. Something geet did not like. No matter what, that confidence is shaking her out here. He repeats again "what makes you think I will let you go?"

Geet "I have the right to leave this job!" he was mere incise way now. Geet did not move to show her fear hormone that was running through her vain in great speed with each passing second. She disagreed with her self. Showing her strong words but this was no ordinary man. A business man. Business tycoon. Who's minimal ability will leave her shaken. She have to be very careful about her words.
Maan "yes, you have the right, but it seems like I have the ability to over power that right." there was a small smile on his face. Barely noticeable smile. A strong usual angry look. She have noticed, only her maybe managed to get glimpse of his smile.

Geet "& how that might be?" her lips shivered near his. It was mere incise way. Touching. He indeed have great quality to lurk a girl in to his trap. He holds her hand tight. The hand which have the ability to slap maan sing khurana. After all mrs khurana needs some type of special quality. His hand gently went round her slim waist. Geet did not react, just froze there with a shock that how could he do this thing. "tell your husband to think twice before he touches you next time.""or feed you! Because I won't tolerate anything like that!" geets eyes widens with a shock. maan backs way a bit just to observe geets fearful face. "itni bhi daro math!"
Geet "I am leaving!" geet was about to leave, clearly understanding this man started to develop some strong feeling for her. & very possessive 2 & she have seen enough of this! Enough with her mother. She spines round to leave when maan brings her back in his embrace. Hugging her tight.
Maan "itni jaldi bhi ka hi!" he gently strokes her hand upwards. Geet came out of her dream world.
Geet " WHAT ARE YOU DOING? LEAVE ME!" a sudden anger just evoked in geet.
Maan "not this easily!"
Geet "how dare you?"
Maan "how dare i? What do you mean? I seems to do everything natural!"
Geet "you trying to flirt with me!"
Maan "seems like you are a very slow thinker."
Geet "I am perfectly alright but it seems like you don't understand the difference between a married & a single women!" geet pushes him off.
Maan "what could I do, if a married women shows this much affection to a different man other then her husband!" she looks at him angrily.
Geet " I am happy with my life!"
Maan "when have I told you to leave your life!" she could not believe her ears, specially with this words. What exactly he was talking about. Maan starts to come close to her again.
Geet "what do you want?" maan laughs... & starts to spine round her.
Maan "lets see," he thinks for while... Then suddenly he huggs her from the back again. "simple & easy, you"
Geet "you are sick,"
Maan "ahhh... Is this your habit of speaking between words!"
Geet "yes!" she retorts back.
Maan "I do not want you to leave my office. Specially in middle of the year, & you have signed a 2 years contract." he smirks, clearly seeing geets face, she even forgot that maans hand gently stroking her waist... She was still in his embrace.
Geet "I thought you want me to leave!"
Maan "what shall I think from those words, that you do not want to leave or leaving because I have told you so!"
Geet "leave it!" she snaps & opens the door to leave but maan pushes her against the door. Closing it. Her one palm rested against the door. Facing her back to maan while maan still behind her. Gently kissing her hair...
Maan "so! What shall I think?"


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